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#41 slipknotness

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Posted 13 March 2005 - 02:05 AM

*licks author* ohhh..so tasty mustin..*holds back her bite* more...so tatseful so good..oh so pretty must have

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Hey my name is Aaron.

#42 slipknotness

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Posted 13 March 2005 - 02:11 AM

All of your work is gorgeous...
Some bittersweet....sad and forlone.
But so beautiful..your words take one away on a journey that you have navigated.
I love it....
Great imagery..
I hope to see more, as I will definately be back to read.

Peace~
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#43 VegaValentine

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Posted 13 March 2005 - 11:45 PM

You feel like talking to my critiques? Thats kooly. Sup, this is my place, with my poems... you like any?

#44 VegaValentine

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Posted 14 March 2005 - 08:40 PM

Silence is the dark
loud is the light
I love the silence
the light is too bright
Breathe my blood
my breath to all
read my soul
and see my falls
sword peirce my heart
open and see
it no longer beats
to longer be
my body shows the pleasures
of everything i need
my mind shows the memories
of all my greeds
open my heart
the color is gone
my blood runs free
from my veins so long
people live
people die
angels dont
but they fly
all i want
is to be with my love
though ill never fly
with the angels above

#45 honurecwanderer

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Posted 15 March 2005 - 05:24 PM

beautiful. :blink:

like all of your previous works, i love it :5:

#46 VegaValentine

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Posted 16 March 2005 - 12:17 AM

I open my heart
to lost souls like mine
life in this world
will never be fine
but things will get better
for I, whom is dead
to have found my true love
and a death left unsaid
the world is a bood
the story so vast
when everything going
is part of the past
many hearts are empty
so quiet and alone
through a skelital reck
where we'll never find our bones
secrets are hidden
in the closets of our minds
when everyone is looking
and no one will find
the death, the heartache,
your story in life
the cuts in your heart
all of your strife
yet somehow we're living
in this world filled with pain
when all are dead
and all insane
[because] Hearts are empty
hearts are cold
pain can kill
love is bold
the world is falling
to the ways of hate
life is dying
we're meeting our fate
love is a spirit
from the god above
no one can live
without alittle of love
this body a vessle
to the one unseen
but i am lost
and my heart unclean
lets leave the world
lets fly away
we'll fly to the stars
to love again some day

#47 LizardQueen

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Posted 16 March 2005 - 12:46 AM

My Angel

I had my angel
I took her with care
And the love we felt
Will always be there
I found her there
on the ground broken
I put her back together
With words unspoken
I loved the feel of her wings
on the palms of my hands
We talked for hours,
for years it seemed
I grew to love her
and she loved me
But as the days went by,
and the hours turned gray
Cracks started
showing in my hands
But we will be good,
that's what we thought
I told her of my life,
Things I hadn't told a soul
I told her of my heartaches,
she told me of her sadness
We thought
we had grown stronger
I promised not to drop her,
I did everything I could
But she fell;
Fell from my hands that were protecting her
I lost her and
there was nothing I could do
I found her there
on the ground broken
I put her back together
With words unspoken
I had my angel
I took her with care
And the love we felt
is no longer there

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Wow i love it, it is Awesome!!

#48 VegaValentine

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Posted 16 March 2005 - 08:10 PM

Breath

Moon and stars by night
Shine by day- breath I cant breath
My lungs are too tight
Objects in the mirror
arent as they appear
depending on the mirror
that you stare into
breathe my blood
my baby breath
as i sleep
im nearing death
negative thoughts
are what i need
as i feed off the hopes
of my wants and greeds
breathe my blood
my baby breath
as i sleep
im nearing death

#49 honurecwanderer

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Posted 18 March 2005 - 09:13 PM

sweet and sad. like a soft melody one would hear early in the wakening of ones first day, the child's songs we grow up with. i liked this one alot :biggrin:

#50 VegaValentine

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Posted 23 March 2005 - 05:50 PM

The darkness incovers me
As I follow her into the room
The room is tinted red
Perfect for what was to happen
She sat down on the bed
Inviting me with her eyes
though no words escaped her lips
I walk across the room
knowing what I am to do
I grab her
push her onto the bed
kiss her body
watch how the goosebumps appear from my breath
smell her sweet fregrence
And near the forbidden area
As I enter it
Blood gets everywhere
All over the bed
The red light hiding the realness of it all
The sheets are stained in this
And I know they are watching
As I get what I want
As we defy the God yet once again
And she gets her release
And as I pull away
Her body lay there limp
I bite my lip
and kiss her lips once more
Now, there is no turning back
and she has become one with me
where we will be together forever
To live out our destany
All of this
In one night of passion
one night of love
one night of death
one night of rebirth
the night I bit her, and we started again...

#51 VegaValentine

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Posted 25 March 2005 - 07:43 PM

No one posts... Sadness...

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Posted 25 March 2005 - 09:52 PM

wow :blink:

i like...

alot

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Posted 25 March 2005 - 09:59 PM

Again i say awesome!!poems!!! :banana00:

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Posted 28 March 2005 - 12:30 AM

She came to me
In the darkness of the night
As I look into her blood red eyes
I tremble in fear
I know her anger
I have felt it before
She looks at me with her drunken eyes
Yells at me again
Yells things I will never forget
And I sit there
Take the pain
Put it below
Where no one will ever find it
I zone out her voice
And pretend to listen
She asks me something
I do not hear
She slaps me
Blood pours from the wound
I look up into her eyes
She sees the pain
You stupid BITCH she yells at me
Why did you do this to me?
Do you think it was something I wanted?
To be like you
To never be in the light again
She turns around and throws her drink against the wall
I HATE YOU!!! She screams at me
As I sit there in shock
I look at her, and smile
She turns toward me
WHATS SO FUCKING FUNNY?!?!
WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU GRINNING???
I laugh out loud and she hits me again
I laugh harder
WHATS SO FUCKING FUNNY???
WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING???
I FUCKING HATE YOU!!!
DONT YOU FUCKING UNDERSTAND????
I stand up
and look into her eyes
And yet, you love me I replied
She slaped me again
More blood runs down my face
She starts to cry
As her tears of blood run down her face
I put my arms around her
She lifts her head and looks into my eyes
and then licks my blood
She hates me, but she loves me
And she can not be without me...
Oh what a wonderful web I have spun....

#55 honurecwanderer

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Posted 29 March 2005 - 07:25 PM

its beautiful, sad, and wonderful... i cant wait to read more ^_^

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Posted 05 April 2005 - 02:10 PM

I run down the street
the darkness surrounding me
never again
never
i remember pouncing
i remember drinking her beautiful blood
i remember her looking at me with frightened eyes
i hear her words
begging for mercy
begging to live
praying to her God for salvation
i can still taste her blood
and as she weakened
i looked up into her eyes
and for the first time
i see love
she looks into my eyes
and thanks me
thanks me for setting her free
and then
when my lips return to her neck
i was disgusted
the taste was horrible
her blood tainted
and i throw her down as she faints
then i run
run as far as i can
i tried to wash my mouth out
but the taste is still there
the sickening taste
i love the taste of fear
of hate
or anger
but she felt none
she felt happiness
compassion
joy
and the taste sickened me
but the taste that sickened me the most
was the taste of love

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Posted 07 April 2005 - 06:48 PM

Oh to the night
the night on which I died
The night on which ended everything
The night on which she lied
To everything that falls
underneath the bright ole sun
to once again see sunrise
and go back to where we begun
I wish to see her heart
And one day to have her soul
But all that I wish and want
Will never make me whole
I lost the truth in life
And love is truely gone
and what else is there to live for
When life should not go on
Yet here I sit waiting
For the sun to rise once more
To then hid in the shadows
instead of dying like before
Why bring me back to see her
and watch my soul die true
When everything in life is gone
And all my life is through

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Posted 12 April 2005 - 06:27 PM

BLAH!!!!!!!!!!!!! :biggrin:

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Posted 12 April 2005 - 06:43 PM

but the taste that sickened me the most
was the taste of love

love... silly humans, who needs love???? :unsure: *JP*


your work is awesome as it always is. i always find myself enjoying your works, and rereading them many a time. im sorry i did not realise you had posted these new ones before this.

#60 VegaValentine

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Posted 17 April 2005 - 05:57 PM

I read this poem in a book once... thought it was awsome... so here it is:

I once heard a tale of a man
who split himself in two
one part never changed at all
the other grew and grew
the changeless part was always true
the other part always new
and in the end when the tale was through

I wonder...

Which was me,

and which was you?