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[VegaValentine]

Moments alone
The freedom of sin
The life of death
The hearts of sorrow
The pain of life
Everything that comes from living
All we see
Is people being free
Doing what they deem right
We don't see inside
In their black hearts
Living is lost
To the people in sin
Love is found
In the voice within

[SaveMySanity]

o.o I like..

[the_vanished]

i liked that one ...more please .......

[VegaValentine]

I said I was sorry...
For what I did...
I said I was sorry...
I would have done anything to get her to come back..
But she left me here...
In the dark...
Where I am alone and scared...
I do not know what to do to get back...
or even the right direction...
to find the light...
I used to be in the light...
Before I met her...
She was so deceiving...
So tempting...
I followed her into the dark...
Deep into it we went...
Not turning back...
When we finally stopped..
I could no longer see the light...
Only the light that came from a lamp we shared...
And that too was going dim...
So I did something evil...
And she turned away...
blocking the light from my view...
I said I was sorry...
For what I did...
But she left me here..
Alone in the dark..
I've tried to find my way back...
Into the light that I lost...
But I seem to get myself more lost...
So I sit here...
By myself...
Alone...
In the dark...
Waiting for someone to find me..
Screaming as loud as I can..
Even though I know no one can hear me...
I yell because...
because...
I am afraid of the dark..
My fear comsumes me...

[honurecwanderer]

wow.... *blinks* wow.... i like your style, its very slow at first and then it seems to get faster as it goes... very cool!!!! very pictoral as well. me likes. sounds like rough times.... :icon6: cant wait to see what else you hve in store for us

[VegaValentine]

Maybe you should scroll down alittle and look at my first one "Alone"

[honurecwanderer]

very purdyful, it flows so well. your works are awesome me likey

[honurecwanderer]

i will do that :-)

[Eye Candy]

lol,ya'll are nuts,Hun your poetry is very good,and has a pretty good flow,hope you post more!Post soon!Also if you want you can check out my thread it's called A Teenagers Mind of the World.See ya!Rock on!

Darkvamp6791

[Consumed]

Wow. It seemed strange and different at first, but it turned out wonderful! A bit slow, I must agree, but at times the slowest things in life become the most beautiful, and your poetry is living proof of that!

[VegaValentine]

words

The art of all
dead and old
the power of words
the simplicity of life
and yet so complicated
why must you learn
when you know everything at birth
born as sinners
yet we are can be forgiven
why no forgiveness at birth
when we are most innocent
when we suposably know nothing
we learn the power of words
we know their effect
control and power come from words
love and life come from words
and yet we use them wrong
we do not flow like we should
we do not grace people with our words
intice their souls
other that we bring them down
tear at their hearts
the death of life
and the power in souls
are all brought to us
in the words we use
think of words
and then you will see
the words are stronger
then anything

[honurecwanderer]

ah!!! purdyful!!!! me likey....*begs for more* your work is lovely and totally awesome. cant wait to read some more

[VegaValentine]

Death to all
Death we see
Death has come
To all but me
Why must death
Take all I love
But not give them
To the one above
Life to me
Life to all
Why must everyone
See me fall
Why must I live
In this world of sin
When all I have
Is death within
Love is living
Love is gone
Love is everything
I've waited too long
My heart is cold
My soul is black
They say I'm too bold
I'm just giving it back
Hate is here
Hate is now
Hate is with us
Lost somehow
Everything comes
To us who give
Maybe one day
We can finally live

[honurecwanderer]

0_0

wow... makes ya think about the things you do day to day doesnt it?
that one is really good

[VegaValentine]

Dream

I had a dream last night
that we were like we used to be
when you really cared
when you truely loved me
I remember the days
when you held me in your arms
We were so close
you loved my cute charms
I close my eyes
and remember the night
You took my soul
yet everything felt right
I look in the sky
its the color of your eyes
I remember you saying
you'd never tell me lies
I touch the air
and yet I feel your skin
But I know the truth
you only feel him
You're over me
cuz now we're through
I had a dream [last night],
I was still with you

[honurecwanderer]

ehhh....teh sucky....>.< been there... am there lol.... definitly one i can relate to.... :icon6: very beautrifully written

Edited by honurecwanderer, 22 February 2005 - 10:17 PM.

[the_vanished]

dream is really good ...but then again so are all your others ...i like the way you write...

[VegaValentine]

Away from you

One moment away from you
is like torchure to me
Now that I have found you
true love I do see
Hours away from you
makes me not wanna live
To get your heart
anything I would give
Days away from you
like like living a hell
The past I wanna say
but secrets I wont tell
Weeks away from you
brings thoughts of my dying
The day I first saw you
I thought I was flying
I love you, my baby girl
because you will be my wife
Away from you
I wouldn't have a life

[SaveMySanity]

ahh so very beautiful....

[dark_angel55]

*licks author* ohhh..so tasty mustin..*holds back her bite* more...so tatseful so good..oh so pretty must have