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#1 Roewan

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:29 PM

"untitled"
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Words are dripping silently
like droplets on a pane of glass,
full and rich and free and wild
like grapes upon your silver tongue.
They roll across the empty space,
between our bodies in this place
and wrap around my neck and
thighs like moonlit stars and satin ties...


"Sihlouette"
___________
If I chose to live in this dead world,
could I survive your sihlouette?
Shadow spiders and nightmares.
Surround me, release me from
this frail prison of bones and take me home.

"lost"
_____
Neither god nor devil
can ever redeem any part of me
that has long been lost
in you.

#2 Roewan

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:34 PM

always open to comments and suggestions. i want my art to touch people so if it does, please let me know! You'll make my day!

#3 LingeringDarkness

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:37 PM

Welcome to Dark Whispers. Roewan, your erotic poetry is sensual indeed. Very good. I hope to see more soon.

~~Jenn~~

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:39 PM

Passively passionate if that is possible. They seem like snippets of a larger work. Interesting, I could see it with an accompaning etching. enjoyable. fol the fool

#5 darkangel42090

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:39 PM

i like it... alot

#6 Roewan

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:41 PM

"cold"
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Here we are
alone
away from the world
your eyes are so fierce
your touch is so cold
i know that you aren't like the others
you don't notice me shaking
you don't care that my breath is rapid and desperate
You can hear the heat in me.
Glimpse of porcelain white beneath
lips that lie to me
you feast on me
you feast on my life
on my blood
you drain the heat from me
with animalistic hunger
and as I feel death creeping towards me
you sway ever so softly to my screams

#7 CSAsniper00

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:42 PM

very sensual, but i like it, keep it up

#8 Savage Jim

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:45 PM

"lost"
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Neither god nor devil
can ever redeem any part of me
that has long been lost
in you.

Absolutely beautiful.

#9 Roewan

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 08:52 PM

quickly a favorite quote of mine...
"desire and longing are the whips of god..."
-anna wickham (sehnsucht)

"dagger"
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Deadlocked in death
with crude weapons on a windless night.
Fire only in our hearts...
Hatred and malice joined together
in a dance of sorrow and understanding.
Hating the morning and the happy people
we found love at the point of a dagger...

"heat"
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One hour with you is enough
to take a week of worries away.
One touch of your hand is enough to shake me to the core.
One taste of your mouth is enough to shatter my mind.
One smile from you is enough to make my body blossom beneath you.
Sweet nothings, sly jokes, silliness,
just slip away into me...
Melt into me...
Turn this tiredm, strung out hopless girl
into a sighing singing angel.
Your touch is so hot on my skin
and I am more than happy to go up in flames
for you...

"Midnight Reverie"
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I feel you all around me.
I smell you on my pillow.
I taste you in my sleep.
I see you in your dreams.
At times it feels like you're still tracing
the lines in me.
My body shudders with delight and I slip away into
this midnight reverie again...

#10 Roewan

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Posted 07 February 2005 - 09:05 PM

"forsaken"
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you trace my form with your eyes
i shudder
you glimpse my way when no one else is looking
I shift
you approach in confidence
my god...
you whisper deadly words into my ears
my heart is on its tiptoes
you project dirty little scenarios into my mind
my god...
your breath is hot on my neck
i'm frozen
your touch singes me
i'm losing my mind
i've known this scintillation for centuries
my faults fall away from me
your eyes are deep
passion is damnation
your eyes are burning
a silent hell
my breathing is rasped
you'll want it forever
my hands climb the wall
my god...
and as you run your fingers lightly down my face
why have you forsaken me?
I burn alive beneath denim jeans and a cotton t-shirt

#11 Savage Jim

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Posted 08 February 2005 - 01:10 PM

<swoon...>

#12 Roewan

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Posted 09 February 2005 - 04:31 PM

swoon away darling... i'm glad to know that someone enjoys it... more coming soon

#13 honurecwanderer

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Posted 09 February 2005 - 04:34 PM

your work is really good. me likey!!! keep writing! cant wait to see more

#14 Roewan

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Posted 09 February 2005 - 04:38 PM

"hell here"
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Yes, passion is damnation...
the devils love song...
the whips and chains of god...
no matter how many times it has burned you...
you crave it.
you want it.
you become enslaved to an emotion...
a man brought to his knees by a seductive smile...
a woman made a slave by the dominance of a man...
who is really the slave?
passion is damnation...
those dirty little things in the back of our minds...
licking its proverbial tongue out at the handsome stranger on the street...
so vicious, so selfish, so raw...
hell just gets better and better....

#15 Roewan

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Posted 10 February 2005 - 02:46 PM

Got a little favor to ask. Kind of hit writers block. If any of you could suggest topics or themes for writing, please let me know. It's always great to have some outside feedback.

#16 Roewan

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Posted 14 February 2005 - 01:54 PM

the slave
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Allah does bless,
And the stars do collide…
Fate does exist
But in moments does hide.

A master and slave
Or seemingly so
Two lovers have crossed
Because God and Goddess DID know.

A god fearing man
And a woman with powers
One has much faith
One holds the hours.

A master may have
Control of a girl
But this woman knows
The secrets of this world.

He is strong
Using chain and rope
But her strength rides
In magick and smoke..

He walks through this world
In him fear and faith meet,
She walks the earth
Flowers grow ‘neath her feet.

A man has bravery
He has dominion
But as strong as he is
He is nothing without a companion.

A woman such as this
Is rich in the stars
But as rich as she is
Has nothing out of mans arms.

He binds her in chains
Protection so sweet,
He strokes her hair,
She bows at his feet.

The secret of the witch
Will make any man swoon.
For even in chains,
She still chains the moon.

#17 Roewan

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Posted 21 February 2005 - 10:59 PM

Tragic
______
Once I sat with an attitude of confusion
And suddenly I realized
that trying to clear my mind of you
was like leveling a rainforest.
Destructive to the whole
and equally as tragic.

#18 Roewan

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Posted 03 March 2005 - 04:42 PM

Slip away
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You look right through me
your eyes search for a girl inside me
lost. long ago.
I tell you she's dead
you just smile
that same sad little smile
"Then I will revive her"
you say.
Shudder, sweet sensations...
"Where is my Roewan"
you demand
"She is gone, dead,
I am NO ONE'S Roewan"
that poisonous smile again
"You have only to be claimed"
you growl.
Grasping the bedrails tight,
I exhale,
my soul was escaping my body...

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Posted 03 March 2005 - 06:23 PM

:shivers:

That's enticing...

#20 Roewan

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Posted 03 March 2005 - 07:40 PM

Burn
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I search
for where you start
my doubts
fall apart
Your breath on my neck
the taste of your skin
Your mouth on mine
a curious sin
I love the way
my body reacts
to your touch
You breathe
And I flex and break
beneath you
My soul slips away
Tonight
I am complete
but broken
My faults
fall way from me
all it takes
is your hand
travelling the length
of my spine
you hands wind
through my hair
my body arches and moves
in a way unknown
to me
but it is burned into
my nature
and my arms and thighs
know it well
You look at me
Exhale
And I burn.