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[DarkPassanger]

You stupid fucking bitch, what the fuck did I ever do to you?
All of you hate me, for shit that I didn't even do?
All you assholes do is complain, you bitch and fucking moan.
Listen to your savior and...."Let he who is without sin, cast the first stone".
I'm so tired of your bullshit, your half truths and all the lies.
You get me so heated, I'll make fire rain down from the skies.
Stop. Now wait a minute, just sit down and listen.
Take a second to think about all these things that you're wishin.
You want me to go away, say bye bye, and disapear.
Thing is your opinion means shit, so I don't really care.
I'm not eating from your table, my hand's not in your pocket.
So keep your words in your mouth, keep it closed and fucking lock it.
You sit there all day yelling, "What did you do?"
I snuck out of my grandson's party to do drugs....uh, no wait that was you.
You're all so quick to point a finger.
Do it while in front of a mirror, stand there, and let it linger.
You're walking around with your head in your ass, your such a fucking snob.
You're a better person just because you got a job?
You're all cheaters, wife beaters, drunks, and whores.
So let me get this straight, my problems bigger than yours?

Ah, I feel better...toodles =)

[Doc]

That's very good. Almost as if it were written for my kid's ma. Very good indeed.

[fatherkabral]

Ditto that Doc.

[DarkPassanger]

thanks a lot guys I really appreciate.

[DarkPassanger]

Not relative to the sittuation as the one above, just some more stuff by me.


WELCOME-
Hello, and welcome to this world of mine. I hope you are feeling so very fine.
Be sure to keep your hands inside. It's going to be a bumpy ride.
Just think of all the things you'll see. As I give you all a piece of me.
The pain, the shame, the love, the lust.
The gain, the fame, and lack of trust.
You get this all and much, much more. As I make my brain an open door.
So come on in and have a seat. I'll give you all a chance to meet.
Ready? Good, then lets begin. Pick up your knives, and lets dig in.

REMEMBER-
Remember the days, when we were so young.
The games we played, and the songs that we sung.
My oh my how simple, it was.
Doing whatever, whenever, just because.
Looking back now, how did this all happen.
It all fell apart, death is at my door tappin'.
When in the hell did we become so old?
How in the hell did we become so cold?
Mary was molested, now she's cutting her wrist.
David shot himself over the dates that she missed.
Robby shot Sally, cause he just couldn't take the pain.
How the fuck can we all smile, when we're all going insane.
These were my thoughts, on that cold december.
So I made it a poem, and I called it remember.

That's all for now I'll be back later with more.

[TheUnknowable]

The first poem sounded like some good rap lyrics. Maybe you could put a beat with it and put it on youtube. (or give her a copy, whatever)

Come to think of it, so do the other ones. I could see Eminem singing it.(old style rap not theis newer crap.)

Edited by TheUnknowable, 02 June 2011 - 12:49 PM.

[DarkPassanger]

thanks man, but im not into rap, i just call it poetry in motion lol, i have more coming just not enough time to put them down yet, thanks again. Ill try to add some with me actually singing to a beat, but my sound quality sucks as does my voice lol

Edited by DarkPassanger, 05 June 2011 - 11:39 AM.

[TheUnknowable]

thanks man, but im not into rap, i just call it poetry in motion lol, i have more coming just not enough time to put them down yet, thanks again. Ill try to add some with me actually singing to a beat, but my sound quality sucks as does my voice lol

I'm sure you could find someone to rap them for you.

[DarkPassanger]

sure if I wanted to pay someone to do it, the few friends that I have, though much more into rap than I, refuse to sing my songs, how about you, would you like to do it?

[TheUnknowable]

don't think I'm good enough, sorry.

Edited by TheUnknowable, 07 June 2011 - 03:45 PM.

[fatherkabral]

don't think I'm good enough, sorry.

Only one way to find out. You can't be sure if you don't try.

[DarkPassanger]

Can't be any worse than me = P

[DarkPassanger]

When I got time let me throw another one on here.

The World Is Not Enough-
Once, a long long time ago.
I felt the cold dark bottom of my all time low.
Though, I couldn't let you go.
I stood deprived of the love that you couldn't show.
And yet, I stood by your side.
As you dragged me through one hellish ride.
Even though, and god knows I tried.
You pushed and you pulled, you kept secrets and you lied.
So you can act brave, and pretend that you're strong.
So you can act sane, like you're never wrong.
I'll give you anything, when times may seem rough.
But how can I please you, When the world is not enough.
I gave you, Blood, Sweat... Tears, thats not all.
Whenever you were Upset, you knew who to call.
I gave you all this, if I could I'd give more.
If your grounds wet, I would lay on the floor.
You had me wrapped tight, I hate to admit.
Only at night, could I make you submit.
You left me stranded, cold and alone.
You left me branded, a mark on a stone.
You fed me bullshit, and you served it up cold.
I kept it locked in, all this anger I hold.
It took me six years, and now that I'm tough.
I'll leave you stranded, for the world is not enough....

[fatherkabral]

Excellent.

[DarkPassanger]

Thanks a lot man. Had a long day I'll try to post more tomorrow, thanks again.

[DarkPassanger]

Feeling like I'm doomed, I roam these eerie streets.
The voices in my head, flowing to dreadful beats.
I feel incomplete, there is something that I need.
The void grows deeper, a hunger I can not feed.
I'm looking for my home, but I feel so all alone.
If home is where the heart is, where the hell did I leave that stone?
The humid air is full of moisture, yet I'm so fucking dry.
Though the world has left me weaping I have no tears to cry.
I wish I could do this over, to have a second chance.
Maybe then my life wouldn't have ended with a glance.
I wish I never met you, it would have saved me from this pain.
To see you go, makes this sunny day look like rain.
Know that I will miss you, and you taught me oh so well.
Fearing death just seems stupid, since living is fucking hell.

[Darksparrow]

You have very abrasive writing. It's rougher then most I've read on this forum, but interesting nonetheless. I look forward to reading more.

[DarkPassanger]

thanks. Sorry about the roughness I write it as I think it cut out the middle man lol

[DarkPassanger]

If Only

Sitting, watching the world pass me by.
I wonder, if this life is just a lie.
It would seem, no matter how hard I try.
Attempts to please you, only seem to make you cry.
I'm left speechless, an all to common loss for words.
Intentions to beat this, the struggle only disturbs.
If only, I could make this pain go away.
See you smile, see you happy, if only for a day.
If only, words could make it all okay.
If only, I knew what words to say.
If only, I could get you through this.
Maybe then, I wouldn't feel so useless.

[DarkPassanger]

Ah the poetry section, how my fingers have missed you.

Someone To Love

Someone to hold,kiss,laugh,live.
Seemingly impossible to find.
Someone who takes more than I can give.
My fate it seems, I think I'm losing my fuckking mind.
They say love is blind, yet you can always see my flaws.
Love is like an animal, your words are as it's claws.
Take me as I am, though you take me for a fool.
Who knew the love I thought would save me, would be so fucking cruel.
Someone to share my life with, it can only be a dream.
Your words are empty, your intentions are not what they would seem.
I gave my care,I gave my love, I've offered you my heart.
My efforts were in vain, now I'll have to go back to the start.
I've tried so hard, I've sent my wishes up above.
It's a perilous journey, finding someone I could love.