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#1 BloodyMaiden

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Posted 17 July 2009 - 12:20 AM

It's been a while since I wrote in this style

A haiku-

Falling from the sky,
I landed on the ground with,
Feathers all around.-

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It is a mix of experience, letting go of the past. a tale etc. A little bit of me and a story to a child that held some of my essence- Say good-bye to the past.

A tale to a child-

There was a child,
Who was teased and stripped of herself,
She wanted to forget and she said,
She wished she were alone,
Everything was wrong, and nothing ever went right,
She was a wreck and often a tool,
Falling behind in school,
She was often times miserable as she lingered behind,
A shadow in the crowd of many, the oddball of her time,
Memories clashed and pressed her onward,
But she struggled and fell many times forward,
Looking to the light she saw a future,
But was pushed down,
The world felt cruel,
A tiny child losing herself to something that dwelt deep inside,
An emotional struggle…
Every time that something went right, something went wrong…
Hope fell quickly with her,
But times changed for her,
Hope renewed for something new,
Forgetting the past, she often times had flash backs,
It wasn’t the same,
For this time she has found true friendship and started to forget the blame,
And shame.
Still there is a struggle deep inside her,
A blossoming thorn rose,
Pricking her when she moved past her past,
To the brighter side…

Edited by Strange_Heart, 17 July 2009 - 12:28 AM.


#2 BloodyMaiden

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Posted 21 July 2009 - 08:59 PM

Always the Beside You-

Forget those words spoken of the past
Insanity will never last,
I wish I knew something better to say,
But my time is limited on this pretty day,
You see I can sacrifice myself to help you regain your sanity.
But you see I also beak down inside myself,
As I assist those everyday.

I stare at the flowers on a summer's day,
Wiping past my own grief,
Even when I crack inside
I can still go deep
And you know I never forget those glowing lights,
Which supported me.

As I could never forget you in your time in need,
So stop giving me grief when I act selfishly,
Once in a while,
Because all I do is give myself over to those that need.
I will listen,
But will not take punishment undeserved of me.

I could pack my bags and leave you on your knees,
To fend for yourself, suffering needlessly.
But I can't for guilt is taken upon me easily.
I would grab your hand and help you stand.
A symbol of my peace...
Can't you see?
I am always there....
By your side, even though you turn a blind eye...

#3 BloodyMaiden

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Posted 01 August 2009 - 11:06 PM

The Short Poem

Life is so fragile that is could shatter at any moment,
Just as I shatter with clear liquid down my cheeks,
It's life and reality...I know this for sure.

Lending a Hand Along the Way-

Lend me a hand,
And help me stand
I will lend you a hand,
And no matter the toughness
In life know you are not alone.
Here is a strand of string that's never
Ending to help along your path.
As a piece of guidance so you never
Lose your way back.
Where life may take you.
Hope you know that friends got your back.
And try not to fear the worst of things,
But even after the hardships faced,
Life is more then that.
Take this candlestick filled with light,
To fight off the darkness deep inside.
Let it be the way to help you see through
Your blind eyes,
Take off this blindfold.
Face the wave of rushing reality,
Using this burning flame to show you the way
at last.
For on this path of life there is something worthwhile.

#4 Nightblade

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Posted 02 August 2009 - 07:04 PM

Your Short Poem is beautiful.

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Posted 03 August 2009 - 07:58 AM

"Take this candlestick filled with light,
To fight off the darkness deep inside.
Let it be the way to help you see through"

I love this part.

Your poems seem so delicate in ways, if words can be said to be delicate, like they barely scratch the surface of what truly lies within. I do enjoy them.

#6 BloodyMaiden

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Posted 03 August 2009 - 11:43 AM

@ Nightblade- That was one of my favorites. It is simple, but for me says a lot.

@ Robin- Thanks. A lot of people like that line as well.

#7 Robin

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Posted 03 August 2009 - 11:58 AM

I hope inspiration finds you again soon.

#8 BloodyMaiden

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Posted 03 August 2009 - 01:41 PM

I do so hope as well.

I will have something soon

#9 BloodyMaiden

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Posted 06 August 2009 - 11:25 AM

A little snippet-

Forget the pain,
consume yourself in dreams.
Become the air and feel light.
Reality will always be there.

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Posted 06 August 2009 - 11:43 AM

oo I love it!
become the air, feel the light....that is awesome

#11 BloodyMaiden

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Posted 06 August 2009 - 12:08 PM

Thank you Robin. I will have more work up soon.

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Posted 06 August 2009 - 12:21 PM

ok cool. Thank you for sharing.

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Posted 09 August 2009 - 01:14 AM

For some reason short poems are inspiring now a days.

So sweet the sorrow is,
When the sorrow died inside,
And I heard the whispers cry into the night,
Fading into nothing...
I knew then that everything would be all right.
For the heavy feeling in my heart diminished,
And the weight which bares upon me has lifted,
A renewed glow made itself at home.

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Posted 10 August 2009 - 06:12 AM

awww well that is a sweet poem.

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Posted 13 August 2009 - 09:40 PM

Strange very alluring literature
Please keep writting

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Posted 14 August 2009 - 12:32 AM

Thank you both. ^^

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Posted 18 August 2009 - 02:33 AM

Surprise is Life

How many times has a heart pounded?
How many tears has anyone shed?
How can you know when things will go right?
I know I can never tell, for everything holds its own surprise.
Even some pounding can send you sky high...
The world is never timed, but willing to surprise you,
Even when you least desire it.
But I tend to see it as a learning point in time,
To help a person grow...
And rise higher as a good being.
Forget the low blow, forget the pain in your mind,
And those deepest one in your inner heart.
Which could shatter into nothing but the dust of the burning dead.
The way that life moves is never always pleasant.
Instead of sorrow looks towards a better tomorrow.
Prevent your heart's bleeding, for see that life is never always great.
But do not forget those moments that can make it all worth the strain.
So many good things all hidden your own dark shadows.
Life is one big unexpected event, no matter what you may think...it may just continue to surprise you.

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Posted 18 August 2009 - 05:41 AM

very insightful. I found myself shaking my head in agreement and understanding to everything you wrote.

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Posted 20 August 2009 - 01:16 AM

As the Sun Shines the Leaves Shall Fall

The sun shines down on the heated land.
I watch the leaves fall from the bottle Brush trees.
I touched the glass of the bay window
As I watched the season change in slow motion.
The trees threw aside their summer coats preparing,
For the chill to come.

And I think back upon the summer months,
And the events that occurred.
Hoping it would never change on me,
But it is not so fair, as summer feels like the shortest of seasons.
The freedom which it had brought me does not change at all.

So time is passing and nothing is everlasting,
I say to myself as the summer ends,
"It will come again for me and for all."
It will grace us again and that makes me smile.
Summer is after all a time of memories.

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Posted 20 August 2009 - 08:24 AM

Indeed it is. As it is going towards the end of summer, this poem was just in time.