The mind of a human is not to trust
It is meant to be crushed,
The evil is too strong for us
Do not understand the rush,
Goodness will fall
And I will walk trough the empty hall,
Looking for you
You might too
The connection is broken
Everything has been taken,
I am all alone in the dark
This is what I will mark,
The mind will not fall
I just wait for your call!

I like it...good flow...I hope to read more.. and welcome to the whispers.

thank you, hopefully I haven't lost my touch, been a while since I wrote...

:ph34r: Please let me know what you think of this one, really wanna know.

The darkness in the night
Spirit fights a fight,
Between good and evil
Helpless in fear.
You might hear
In the shadows
It's calling,
Calling for you.
Will you run
To help
Or to hide?
Can you feel it?
It is near,
Crawling up your spine
Reminding you,
You are never alone.

I love it!! Awesome dude!! I can't wait to read more!!

The tears and pain
The deep scars
In your heart.
Sadness in the dark
Blinded by the false light.
You pick a fight,
You have the right,
But is this the way?
Where is the reason,
For this painfull season.
In your heart
or your mind?
That is for you to find.


I'm lost in my dark shadows of my mind, don't know how to get out of it...

The time
Past in mind
Where does time go?
Yesterday I was a kid
Today a teenager
Tomorrow an adult.
What do we remember
from the past?
Is it good,
or
Is it bad?
Where did our lives start?
When we were kids
When we became teens
Or does it start
When we become adults?
I don't want to know
I have my life,
I'm a child in heart
A teen outside
And someday,
I might even be an adult.

AWESOME!! I love your work. ^_^

What is that,
That something.
I can feel it
In my heart
In my body
I need it
It's everywhere,
But I have it not.
How does it come?
That something
That simple
Is hard to get.
To find.
Do you have it?
Can I borrow
It from you?
I promise
To return it
For you.
Can I have
A hug from you
I really need it.

I love it..it is wonderful.

My heart aches
My mind wants to explode
My body wont move
My fingers are numb
I can see
Blood,
Broken bones,
Tears
And the blue lights.
I can feel my breath
Faiding.
I hear voices
They are near,
Are they in time
Or too late?
I don't know
I don't dare
To watch anymore.
I keep hiding
Under my bed.

This one is by far my faveorite so far. Good work. :)

Thank you Kiss of Death

Here is a new for you:

Screams and tears
In the past.
They still haunt me
I remember,
What you did.
I will never forget.
I won't forgive.
You are in my life
You have to.
You're family,
Please promise
You wont do it again.
Promise me,
That you will stay
Here with me.
I can't take it
I won't be left alone.
Not again,
It's too much for me.
My heart cries ones more
For the past.
The memories.

That is sad, but it rocks!!

The nights I have spent
Thinking of you
Makes me miss you
Even more.
I can remember your smile
The way you sang.
I can remember
You drawing for me.
I cry every day,
I want you here,
By my side
Telling me what to do
And what not to do.
Why did you leave?
Where did you go?
I have questions,
But no answers.
You are the only one
Who could answer me,
But you aren't here
You will never be,
Again.
Have I told you
Enough times
That I love you
Mother.
Miss you like hell.
It aches,
In my heart,
Now and forever.

So cool! I love reading your poetry...

hey, i like your poems, keep it up! i can't wait to read more...

XXX devin XXX

Sitting alone
Here in the dark
Wondering
Where you are
What you do.
I wonder
If you are happy
If you have fun.
Hoping to hear
Your voice.
It would
Make me happy.

Now I know
You are sad.
You miss me
And you are
Far away.
We have to wait
Before we can
See eachother.
Hug and kiss.
I miss feeling
Your warm body
Near me.
Your arms around,
You make me
Feel safe,
Happy and
Loved.

i like it

XXX devin XXX

I like your work!! Keep up the good work and I would like to see more very soon!!

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A damned soul doomed to walk the earth even after death!

There are
Many things
That makes you
Happy,
Full of life.
What happens
If it all just
Disapears?
You stand there
Alone in the dark.
Haunted by memories.
You feel left alone,
You can feel
The loneliness,
Crawling your spine.
Reminding you
There is nothing
And no one will help.
You must fight,
With your own strenght.
The strenght
Of your heart.
That you will
Never loose.

**points up** This one is my favorite Nemi !!!! :)

wow. I like all of your work. This one is my favorite. I loooooooooooooove it. haha... Nice! I want to read more!!

*waits for more* :icon2:

Thank you, I will write soon enough..

Beautifully eccentric ... In a good way and it just wow lol Your works intrigues me I do wish to see more

- Luis

hey i loved the last one. i can't wait for more...


XXX devin XXX

Dreams,
We all have them.
We all might
Not remember them,
But they are there.
Inside our heads.
Sometimes as a fear,
Sometimes as happiness,
Sometimes in form
Of lust and guilt.
They controll us,
We can't stop them.
They are everywhere.
Would you like,
Sometimes just
Live a dream?
Do what you want,
Be a beatiful girl,
Rich and desired?
Make your fantasies
To reality.
Dreams are good,
You can do
And be,
Who ever and
Do whatever.
Just remember,
Dreams controll you
And your mind.
You don't know it,
Before it's too late.

I come to think of this one now, I have been thinking about my dreams and how they affect me. Dreams does change us a bit, sometimes even more we would like to. I don't say it's for all of us, some of us are weaker and want's to live a dream...

Awe. These are my favorite lines:
"They controll us,
We can't stop them."

"Dreams are good,
You can do
And be,
Who ever and
Do whatever."

Thank you, I'm happy that you liked it, Now I have more ideas to go from!

Very beautiful keep writing! >:)

- Luis

Your work is still awesome keep up the good work!!!!!!!

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A damned soul doomed to walk the earth even after death!

Are you there?
I hope you are.
Can you hear?
Then you can hear
Me crying.
Can you feel?
Then you can feel
Me shaking.
Can you see?
The you can see
Me devastated.
I'm lonely,
Where are you?
Have you forgoten
Me?
Have I done
Something wrong?
Why do you hate me?
I'm going insane,
I need answers.
Can you come,
To be with me,
The walls
Are closing in.
I can feel it,
The end is near.
I can't escape it,
It's too late.
The past is allready
Crawling on me.
I shall face my past.
For the better or worse.
Will I see you again,
Hope?

I love it all, hun. ^_^

Awe Nemi! The last one you posted was awesome!! Love it!

Standing here,
Looking at you.
Asking questions,
Waiting for answers.
I can feel the cold breeze.
It's getting cold,
I want to stay.
Don't want to leave you.
I want to stay,
Hear the answers
That I never get.
I just want to hear,
Your voice just ones more.
Please,
Just this once,
Answer me!
You won't answer,
I know why,
But I won't accept it.
I will come back,
Asking questions,
I know,
You wont answer.
You're dead,
I'm just talking
To your gravestone.
I will be back,
I promise!

I wish she could answer.. I need answers, but she is the only one knowing the truth...

Thank you, I'm glad you like them...



Thank you sweetie, I'm happy when you say that.

You both keep writing too, so I have something to read at night!

I remember the nights
Waiting for you.
I was worried,
I dreamed of your death.
I was sad,
Alone,
Filled with fear,
Angry,
Angry at me.
I shouldn't have left.
Not after what you said,
Just before.
You said,
That you can't
Take it anymore,
But I left anyway.
I regret it now.
You were all that I had.
I can remember the day
When the cops arrived.
I knew before they said it.
You were gone,
I was alone.
A kid,
In a strange country,
All alone.
I lost myself,
There is a hole in me.
It can't be fixed,
I'm sorry,
You are too dear to me.
You live forever,
In my heart!

That one was sooo awesome! I love it.

When I was a kid
I used to hate you.
I despised you.
I was never there,
Neither were you.
You and your
Drunk friends.
New man every week.
I hated you so much.
I hated father more,
I think.
I should have,
I still should,
But I loved you both.
Even when I didn't show it.
Never told,
I regret that.
You were and are,
The most important
People in my life.
We are family,
At least we were once.
I remember the happy times,
Deep down in my heart.
You are happy,
I'm happy.
Once,
Long time ago,
We were a happy family.
Can I have it back?

So sad, but I love it. ^_^

I look out
To the ocean.
I watch the blue water,
Coming in,
Floating out.
Sometimes
It brings memories,
Sometimes
It takes something away,
Like my shoe
From the shore.
The sun is setting,
I still stand here.
Looking out,
For an answer.
Waiting,
For it to float,
Looking for me,
But it will never come.
Oceans don't have
All the answers,
They just might,
Calm you down,
Just for a while.
Then reality kicks in.

Do you remember,
The times we spent together?
Do you remember,
All the things we did?
Do you remember,
What you drew for me?
Do you remember,
The life you had?
Do you remember,
What you did?
Do you remember,
How I felt?
Do you remember,
How sad I was?
If you do,
I'm glad.
I want you to do that.
If you remember,
You might come back.
I hope you do,
I need to know,
If you remember.
Do you remember why?
I want to know,
I can't sleep at night,
I can't live my life.
My life feels meaningless,
You stole it from me,
By doing what you did,
You didn't even leave,
An answer to me.

Is it possible,
To talk with the dead?
Can I summon
The dead?
Is there ghosts?
I think there is,
They are stuck
In this world.
They are unhappy
With their past life.
They try to fix it,
But it's not possible.
Or is it?
I know,
I have seen my mother,
She was with me,
But I yelld at her
And she left.
Never came back.
I miss her now.
I wish that
I hadn't yelld.
Maybe she tried
To tell me something.
Is it possible,
To talk to the dead?
I wish it were,
I want to know.

I remember the blood,
I remember,
The broken bones.
I remember you crying.
I remember,
The smashed phone
On the floor.
I remember the screams.
I remember your face,
Covered with blood.
I remember your face,
You were so angry.
I remember you both well.
I remember,
How I lost my breath,
When you allmost strangled me,
When I tried to get help.
I remember the cops.
I remember your lies.
Can I forget,
The past?
Would it be possible,
To erase my memory
And start all over again?
I wish not to remember,
But the memories hunt me.
They will never leave me alone.

Wow, I love your work. It is very captivating, it really blew me off the couch (or chair).

Wow your getting better at your pain and misery poems... They are very good and full of sorrow. Keep it up >:)

- Luis

Oh thank you both, I will keep writing, just taking some time off to fix my homepage, but I will write something soon.

The Beats,
The Blood,
The Scars,
The Tears,
The Fear,
The Cold,
The Time,
The Walls,
The Hands,
The Face,
I remember,
The feelings.
They hurt.
I wish,
That I,
Never saw that.
I wish to,
Never been there.
I wish,
That it weren't you.
But it is,
it is you.
I will never escape it.
You are my nightmares,
You are
Still in my life.
You will allways be.

I would say,
That I don't
Want you,
In my life,
But it would be
Impossible.
Even when you die,
You would be here.
In my heart,
In my mind,
In my dreams.
You are,
Everywhere
You are,
Biggest part of me.
You and her,
You make me whole.
I still miss her.
I hope that,
I won't miss you.
As much as I do her.
I wouldn't bare it.
It would tear me open.
I would bleed,
It would be,
Way too much.
Please,
Let me be.
Don't cause more pain.
I can't take it.
I wish to be,
Left alone.

I want,
To tell you,
To go,
Go to Hell.
I can't.
I wish I could.
You are,
Killing me inside.
You make me bleed.
You make me cry,
I wonder why.
You strangle my soul.
You open,
My old scars.
You make me bleed.
I stand in the shower,
Washing the pain away.
Hoping it would help.
You wont go away,
You are here.
You are my demon.
You bring
Darkness,
Over me.
Where does this end?
Will I survive?
Keep calling,
My name.
Maybe I answer...