jessebel
Dec 8 2004, 03:04 AM
My mocking relfection, so flawed and magnified
Trash. I hate you.
I wish I could be someone else, someone more whole & unt-tainted.
You are what the world needs less of , a burden.
Stop trying, stop reaching for what you'll never live up to. You are a failure to yourself.
You are a failure to him.
What do you yhink he sees when he looks at you?
Your flaws, everything that you're not.
And what you should be.
You ARE OBSOLETE.
there's more crappy writing, just you wait.
RoseBud
Dec 8 2004, 03:10 AM
i like it. But why are you sad.? Welcome to the form
Rose
kill me softly
Dec 8 2004, 09:12 AM
ok thats good. so why would u say crappy? im lookin forward to seein more.
<333 k8.
darkangel42090
Dec 10 2004, 04:29 PM
i agree. its not crappy. unless your one of those people who cant write unless people say its horrible (i forget the word) then it is REALLY horrible lol.
Consumed
Dec 11 2004, 02:44 PM
UNCRAPPY. I like it. I look forward to more of your crap.