Blowing wind of despair,
through her matted hair.
Skin of rotting hope,
with her heart bound in rope.
Crying blood red tears,
filled with all her fears.
Why can no-one see,
what she's doing to me?

She's in my head,
I'm better off dead.
Get away from me,
just leave me be.

Face beneath my skin,
her spirit buried within.
She's ripping me apart,
clawing at my heart.
Get her out I plead,
She's making my brain bleed.
Aren't you able to see,
what she is doing to me?

She's in my head,
I'm better of dead.
Get away from me,
just leave me be
.... leave me alone
on my own.

That was amazing. I love the way you use your words. It's like you are asking anyone that's listening if they can see the pain that she's bringing you.. I loved it. And, welcome to the forum. Hope you enjoy your stay.

Love,
Krissi

Thankyou very much, I used to be a member of this site but I gave up on it because nothing new was coming through on the forums and then they changed it.
By the way my name is Emily nice to meet you Krissi :icon9:

that was really good.....I could feel every inch of apin in thaton. welcome back.
Rose

Thankyou Rose it's nice to now my work is appreciated, everyone else just thinks I'm completely insane :banana00:
By the way Krissi love your poems they are amazing

I thought Insane was normal. Huh. Hehe
Rose

My family all think my poetry is too dark and morbid, same as my artwork really

i loved your poem, hope to see more soon

deadly

nice poem ...i liked it very much ill look forward to seeing more


julian

Loved the poem post more please
love sarah
xxxxxxxxxxx
oh and hey dont worry about it i get called insane too, and rose, it is normal isnt it?
xxx

Why thank you Emily. Your work is amazing too. :5: And don't worry, it's okay to feel like you are or have others think you are insane, we all do at some point or another. Everyone else thinks I am as well.

Krissi

Daddy? Why?

Daddy? Why do you shout?
Daddy? Why do you hurt me?
Daddy? Why am I scum?
Daddy? Why do I cry?
Daddy? Why are you bleeding?
Daddy? What have I done

sorry accidently left out the ? at the end there

I like your work it shows alot of depth.

i hope to see more soon!

deadly

A dead girl talks,
As she walks,
Each step struggles with pain.
A glint in her eye,
"You shall die",
Your soul is washed down the drain.
A blood gurgled scream,
you think it's only a dream,
sometime soon you'll wake.
You wake in your bed,
It's all in your head
Until all of a sudden you break.

i liked it, my favorite lines were:

A glint in her eye,
"You shall die",
Your soul is washed down the drain

deadly

that's a really good poem i wants more

your stuff is good

Thanks you lot, by the way.......
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!! I hope you enjoy it.

Deadly? is your signiture from "My Plague" by Slipknot, it just sounded like it.

Merry Halloween!!! yes this part:

You fucking touch me, and I’ll rip you apart
I’ll reach in
and take a bite out of that shit you call a heart.

is from "My Plague".

hate ain't enough to describe me -Disasterpiece by Slipknot

Painful clutch, death is fine -"Only One" by Slipknot

I am the very disease you pretend to be -"Surfacing" by Slipknot

I have every fucking right to hate you -"Metabolic" by slipknot

and i see you have a part of slipknot's song "Diluted" yourself. only in the song it said "every smile hides a bold faced lie" yours said "every smile is a bold faced lie" im not sure if you purposely did that or not though. Are you a maggot like myself? i LOVE Slipknot, i eat breath sleep they're music along with The Used and Taking Back Sunday. Those are my 3 favorite bands of all time!! everyone tells me it's an odd combination but o well.

deadly

I made a mistake in that one I'll correct it, that's what you get for losing the lyric booklet, I also love slipknot very much I recently entered a competition to win Corrie's boilersuit thing that was signed by the band.

I also love Kittie and Jack Off Jill, which I got kittie's new album today... yay! I have to say I like the used's song take it away... I think it's called that anyway.
Though come on it's SPICE GIRLS all the way

lol yeeee *pretends to be a little goody goody*
“Spice Girls can i have your autograph!!! yeeee”
*then turns into self*
“oh on the little girl turn into a person full of hate and despair run for your life’s!!!”
then i chop off their heads and play in the blood!
“mah ha h cough cough ha ha!!! i told you i was a deadly soul!”

te he, don't ask. kitte is awesome! and so is Jack off jill, your the only person that i know that knows Jack Off Jill, thats awesome! hi my name is kelsey

deadly

Hi I'm Emily nice to meet you kelsey, yay made a new friend :D *does a little dance* so we seem to have the same sort of taste of music, and a thing for poetry too.

Do you have msn messenger by any chance?

here's my msn address anyway: Emily_Strange_twin@hotmail.com, and by the way your poetry is amazing.

Emily
xxx

hello Emily nice to meet you. no i don't have msn. thankx for the complements. i just changed my sig.

kelsey

Whoa rose I like it!

Fallen angel bruised and bleeding,
the only way to stop the needing.
Her Halo smashed upon the floor,
it does not shine anymore.
Her heart was ripped to shreds,
she thought she was better off dead.
She fell and broke her bones,
cold naked body on the stone.
In her blood she did lay,
and that's where she stayed.

OUTSTANDING!!!!! very beautiful!!!!! there aren't really any words to describe how much i love it!!!!!

kelsey

I like that one...wow...its wonderful :) keep posting plzzzzz

-Emz

Darkness surrounds me,
cuts me off from reality.
Scratches form on my wrist,
don't know how they got there.
Nothing seems real anymore,
it's all just a dream.
If so please wake me,
take me from my nightmare.
Remove me from my scars,
get rid of the pain.
Give me back my sanity,
and let my blood run.

oo i like
deadly

thanx, trying to dream up a new poem, i'll get one ready soon

ok cool, can't wait!
deadly

wow, very good.... nvm...... very GREAT stuff!!!

Hey Thantos, I guess you like dragonball z then. I guessed from ur display pic

wow..you seem to have a style kinda like mine..I really enjoyed reading these..looks into yourself..thank you and I look forward to more

Monsters clawing at my skin,
trying to break me.
Voices crying, screaming,
it's all in my head.
Living in a dream world,
that changed to a nightmare.
Feeling so lost in my mind,
cannot escape reality.
Someone come to hold me,
help me to free my soul.
Crack the curse set on me,
to release the horrors within my past.

wow..very deep and dark..yet seems like a plea...I really enjoyed reading it

very nice, i love it!
deadly

i like your work

You tell me you love me,
please don't say those words.
The guilt cuts me up inside,
because of things I think.
I love you too but I don't,
confusion traps me.
I weep into my pillow,
we've drifted away.

Thanx everyone for your support, its nice to hear positive feedback from people

I'm so messed up inside my head,
I toss and turn in my bed.
Hearts are constantly needing,
I was the one to start the bleeding.
I hate myself for what I've done,
memories are burnt, every one.
Pictures fading far away,
I will not live to see the day.
So when I'm dead do not bless,
I don't deserve it I'm heartless

Don't suppose anyone knows how to get a picture shown next to your name? I suck at computers

first you click on your name. then when you get to your profile you scroll down to the bottom and click on avatar options. you will know what to do from there. and i like your new work.
deadly

Darkness surrounds me,
cuts me off from reality.
Scratches form on my wrist,
don't know how they got there.
Nothing seems real anymore,
it's all just a dream.
If so please wake me,
take me from my nightmare.
Remove me from my scars,
get rid of the pain.
Give me back my sanity,
and let my blood run.




That one was so good. I really liked that one :) hee hee I hope you write more!!!!

-Emz

thankyou very much for helping me and thanx for the compliments

Darkness surrounds me,
cuts me off from reality.
=
cutting me off from reality.

Scratches form on my wrist,
=
Scratches on my wrist,

don't know how they got there.
Nothing seems real anymore,
=
Nothing seems real ,
Not anymore .

it's all just a dream.
=
Is it just a dream.

If so please wake me,
take me from my nightmare.
Remove me from my scars,
=
Remove my scars,
get rid of the pain.
=
Help me rid the pain.[think so ]

Give me back my sanity,
and let my blood run.

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just mu rough idea . I know you can do better .

wow,i like your works, daddy why was funny(in a morbid way)
keep writing