Here is some of my recent material..

-To Reside Within Reason-

The history of man, the cycle of hate
A continues demise
Raping of the earth
The death of the world at a rapid rate

Fools flock to false Martyrs, as a reminder
Locusts with their wings
Irritating the hordes
All mankind's symbolic, like meat to the grinder

A chance given, a chance broken
Let the napalm reign
Nuclear winter's horizon
Your god with his contridictions has spoken

Burning flesh, miasma of your guilt
Silent Screams and blurry visions
Eternal Dreams of your maggot filled grave
Fate will tear you down as quick as your built

Why would anyone leave....
Mankind will kill to be free....
You reside within the face of treason
Never was asked of you, a sign, a reason....

-My Hacksaw Sings Songs-

My hacksaw sings sweet as I cut through your meat
My hacksaw sings slow as I sever your bones
My hacksaw sings at pace as I cut through your face
My hacksaw sings nice as your slipping from life

My hacksaw sings songs of love and of peace
My hacksaw cuts straight from your head to your feet
My hacksaw sings songs of tolerance and flowers on boulders
My hacksaw sings with the sound of your head flying of your shoulders

Hacksaw sing sweetly
Hack away at a brutal pace
Satisfy my compulsive lust
With blood on my face

My hacksaw sings nuts as I spill out your guts
My hacksaw sings melody as white walls become bloody
My hacksaw loves bones and sinew
My hacksaw loves all, and it loves you too

Hacksaw make haste
Hack away and make me bastard paste
Cute little shards, and cuddly little tards
Found home sweet home no need for alarm

My hacksaw sings lies as I sever your eyes
My hacksaw sings fast as it rips you a new ass
My hacksaw sings loud as I disfigure your crown
My hacksaw sings like rain as it makes shreds with your brain

Hacksaw sing eternally
Hack them in the daytime, and nocturnally
Oh so sweet, My love for this saw
Invite your friends, bring them along......
A concerto of faith, my hacksaw sings songs

-The Night's Offerings-

Laying down, becoming one with the night
Conflicting eyes, waiting for gory sights
Dim is the light, and so is your mind
Numb with comfort, oh the horrors to find

Offered through the sub-conscience, a picture better portrayed
A varying existance, greed infested spawns of hell, the human race
Born and raised to believe the masses since birth
They lost their way, forbid you have a cultured look at earth

Alive and you dream
As your world dies, bursts at the seams
Dead and you see
What your murderers never wanted you to see

They follow, they consume, they join hands in prayer
So they may appease the king
Manifest destiny, may fate consume the wicked
Even for them, time is ticking

Offer me not salvation..
Show me the truth with damnation..
Living a lie is no reason to die..
We watch in humor as the true heathens fry..

One with power but never the wiser....
A bastard soul with no remorse....
As long as plans of destruction stay the course....

May fate rip their flesh asunder
May the demons show them true pain
May their membranes be shredded and their nerves teased
O glory be the night, humanity's appeased..

-The time is near-

The times are here, behold the signs
Nature's revenge for our home's sighs
Gazing eyes, staring into nothingness
Finds solice in the final days

Cut to shreds by abyssmal flames
Bleeding, Burning, Suffering
The class system finds damnation
Equality through suffocation

Merciful skies, show us the way
Punish us all this most fateful of days
Smiles on the corpses, redemption achieved with decite
Morbid intentions of humanity's elite

Iron wings with ghastly things
Unknown is the truth
Swift and without prejudice, raining death from above
Unknown to the stubborn
Nations spread their tolerance, and love, with lies and bombs
Yet the residents bye it, the false compassion, still the bleeding hearts throb

Alive and well
Within our realm
Alive and well
In the lighter side of hell
How the demons and angels sing in harmony....
The time is near, the other side will be here....

*pounces on him, showering him with kisses* Now my dearest love.... you recited these to me and my opinion is that you do have talent with showing the darker aspects of our world and our society. Such a dark mind you have my love.... :4:

I am with Integra. Your mind is perfection from what I've read here, I love it. You have a new patron, Zeodus... *leaves a rose*

Integra - *showers her back with kisses* thanks for the comments love.... luckily, I get to hear them personally, as you get to hear mine.... truly, we live well with one another :)

Vampiress - *Is honestly humbled* Such words are indeed nice to hear :) *brings the rose to his face* I am glad you like my poetry

-Breath of Death-

It is inevitable, no matter your pride
No matter who you are, one day you'll die
If you live full, you'll die in extreme pain
If your lucky you'll get shot in the brain

You're not immortal, you can't hide forever
No matter of your issues, you'll go through death's endeavor
Perhaps you will fall off the 50th story
And become a legend, die frightfully gory

Perhaps society won't see you as fair
Then you shall find yourself, sitting in death's chair
Volts upon volts, making your hair stand
Running from death as long as you can

We all die
Chair, fry
Pain, cry
Such a moment we never miss
We know it in our pants, we piss

Breath of death.... Breath of death....

Life flashes before your eyes
Surely you have been living a lie
Allow me now, to portray to you
Your sick, inevitable demise

It felt like it took so long
Now you must finally slip from existance
Your breath of death, always a persistance....

My Hacksaw Sings Songs < that one is awesome,love that one. its my favorite, its just....wow...I like it :) I hope you post more, your work is awesome


-emz-

love your work, its wicked! xxxxxxxxxxxxx
love sarah
xxxxxxxxxxxx

Zeodus, i love the new art man........the hacksaw song drives me to want to destroy things.........only one word comes to mind......*raises beer* "BRILIANT"

:vampire: :icon1: Skorne :icon1: :vampire:

*bumps the thread to the top* More ppl need to read this. :4:

More people do indeed need to read this thread. It's brilliant. It's like reading the art of a beautiful dark mind. I loved them all. And I will come back more often to check and see if there's anything new to read. Once again, your work is amazing!

Krissi

I thank you all for your comments. Here are some of my older works from my lost poetry thread.

*This poem can be read two ways.. 2 stanzas the killer, 2 the victim, and so on.. another way is fully from the mind of the killer, which you might just notice.. eminates a mirror image, and digs deeper into his mind..*

"My tools of reflection"

I've had enough, this is it, my patience is done
Wrong me no more, mother's bastard son
Dragging your holder of wretchedness thoughts through valley's of glass
Bound and gagged you hope this is your last

Now I see it from afar, a site to aspire
A shady cabin, no boredness, you shall not tire
I have my tools, and I have my ways
Know this, gore hast plagued my mind, you shall see red today..

What have I done, I know I can deny it
I have been found out, I prepare for dying
A fool to believe revenge had no meaning
Who knows, I might just be dreaming

His happiness I sense, I think we are closer
I would smile if I could, with my now gagging holster
I see my distorted reflection in the knife
I guess this is what it means, tripping off life..

Here we are, my home away from home
The bodies mutilated, but they are not alone
An array of arms, legs and heads
Perhaps I should join, perhaps better off dead

Now I put him on the table, chaining further him here
Soon to be a lifeless carcass, more-so in a year
My eyes glisten as I put my knife down slowly
I pick up the chainsaw, and start it idly..

My fate is near, my last breaths I feel heavily in my lungs
What will I see, when the mission is done
Nothing I ponder, as I barely hear my fate
Silent indeed, from my stomach to my neck I feel it grate

Now in pieces, I lay here seemingly drifting
I'm supposed to be dead but I think of my lifting
Hearing this noise, this turmoil I hear
He turned it on himself now, I know the feeling adhered..

Pleasure in sin, and pain of the 'eve
Himself truly he decieved
More and more I paint these walls red
I hear it too, the silence now, hatred bred death..

"Obsidean Dream"

Dark and transisted for the wrong state of mind
What is not dark seems to not be the find
Floating into the void, no need for assistance
Nothing found here, no need for resistance

Will this travelling vision be the forseer for whats to be
Is it an omen, not meant for us to see
Is this a sign of your fate, your next destination
Surely, it would be an outward manifestation

Secrets and conspiracy attack the mind flayer
To get by this obsticle, the truth betrayer
Let it be known, the truth shall be told
The deciever will get what they ask for, ten fold

The darkest of deaths came on swift wings
Valued the price of death even suited for kings
The reality of it all seems to tear at the seams
Dark, ..dark, and this life, an obsidean dream

Must thier be hate to hold the victory chalice
Must be a vital asset to keeping the balance
Must be to put the mind in a remision
Must be this way, repetition

Everything is real, until you awake so it seems
It had to be these, the darkest of dreams
Darker than night and more jaded than greed
You never woke up, your still trapped in this obsidean dream

~This one I wrote awile ago after a break up~

"Stardust Multiverse"

I'm a speck in this world, I don't know billions
As my undying aspiration allows me to rule over zillions
You'll never know, that side of me to endure it
Some time ago, you had the ability to allure it

I said I cared, I said it a lot, and I meant every phrase
You seemed to agree, but yours was a phase
The number of times this happens is something to be imagined
I'll live in this multiverse, taking your pain, and fathom

Give me everything you possess, I'll survive
If I ruled zillions, this plane of existance would strive
Go ahead and say i'm infatuated with myself
But it used to be you, whom I held the multiverse too, treasured and delt

I did not know when to stop, I didn't know if it was mockery
Now we live here together, with my stardust memories
I never thought I'd carry such a burden, a curse
Kings and rulers take these tasks, I am the stardust Multiverse

I fooled myself another time, the memorial fate
Which in present day time I see as irrate

Now that I know how humanity works
I still care evermore, I rule many, I make your pain mine, and harness your curse

"Another Victim of Tyranny"

Maladramatics, work away the sane
Sort of kind of, but not insane
Distorted essence feeds the mind
Reaching for something it cannot find

Times of the past
Tales of lore
The battle within'
Tales of your war

Something crawling in the depths, something suspicious
The wretched malignity of this creature, unnaturally vicious
Looking for your conscience, looking for a cause
Attempting to blind you, trying to put your senses on pause

Times of the present
Tales of the now
The battle within'
Tales of how

Looking out for whats to be
Visions, controlling what you see
Paranoia and running to be free
Another victim of Tyranny

Times of the future
Tales of prosperity
The creature slain
Tales of Tyranny

"Impaled by the Swords Soul"

The flesh ripping through your back
Hard to keep your cord intact
This is immortal this is the start
Came so close to your black heart

Upward goes the seraded blade
To your cerebral unit to drive you insane
Ran through before, just another day
How much more shall you blindly pay

The iron magnifying as your nerves are in range
It's too late for a mess up, your already deranged
No blood found here, acid ravishingly pours
That can't be your soul at the end of the sword

Ignore if you will, Elaborate if you must
I trust in the sword, impaled by lust
Now that you are severed in two
You will learn something you never knew

You were impaled by the swords soul
Vile deeds made you pay this toll
Not dead now, not dead literally
Might as well be, basked in the pity

Now without warning the soul yells for you
Tells you whats true, Backbone renewed
Electricity surging, chanting the old
Listen for it, or your spirit will be sold

"Stream of Twilight Harmonious"

The sun sets, the darkness proceeds to make it's way up on the land
I feel empty, as I reach but it's futile to grasp a hand
Looking up to the sky, no sun to scorn my eyes
I look up now, I'm fooled, like the day I got denied

Twilight gazes down upon me
With this I fear not what I see
Like the time between day and night
Jaded and masked in thy name in my sight

Harmonious gestures hast outdone me this time
For I fooled myself, no matter how hard I tried
Now in my mind I am darkness and light
I live in harmony, together with twilight

The stream shimmers and shines in the twilight's faint glow
Confused and bewildered, yet the water still flows
Heart filled with fright as the sun persists to rise
The light was what caused this eternal demise

"The Final Task"

You were always somebody's nothing
From the beginning, you were shunned by cunning
Revenge has it's perks, but the blade holds the speach
Speak through the teeth and be the preachers leach

They always wondered when the world would come to an end
They were wrong all along, my pity I do send
Sitting in denial while they sing thier precious song
Only they shall die, if only they knew they were wrong

Evil
They know not what evil is
Tis a phrase
Looked on with un-analytical eyes
Tantalized by thier lies
Evil
More than a phrase
Tis an action
Those blinded by scrutiny
Tantalized by lust
Evil
More than an action
Tis a state of mind
Sparking refuge and solidity
Triumphantly withstanding

If it only ended in a sensible fashion
The pity sent there would fill the blunt ration
Don't mend the occurance of grief, everyone falls
The truth lies here, the final task will bury all

Death has many faces
Some peaceful, some in pain
The only time death truly hurts
Is when you die in vain

Life - the trial expires
You make your way into the other dimension
Aeons and ago, and aeons anew
The seal is broken, self-fulfilled, indulged in redemption

Trail of fire
Crimson delusions
Left in shame
River of life
Stream of truth
Dismal reality
Jaded and torn
Masked in existance
Made to realize
Trauma adorned
Crowned in fury

Chanting cantations the mourners do spat
Running away, from fear, rats from the cats
Making thier unseen mark in the earth, life call
Death is inevitable, bloody lips, the final task will bury all

Of all the beliefs, most ends are declared
Too bad most thereof, are multi-thought impaired..

Somebody's nothing always smiled on you
Give it all up, for a belief thought untrue..

The words of a mourner, are tainted by grief
The conscience trauma, to give relief
Constantly wavering, to give endurance
Looking for lies, for reasurance

One of a million is a fun ratio indeed
More thought provoking yet, millions to lead..

In the mirror the vision distorts
Time shifts an epoch and light grows dim
Every detail brings out the truth
Nothing was right, but all was alright

Must we keep weeping over instances, where time
eclipses the past grown dim the scars of time bring me to
fate, the waves made them realize, no proportion dignified, no
transaction rectified, why did they see them.. there

Fighting, fighting, fighting for thier religion
Cover, cover, everyone cover thier mission..

Wow, Zeodus... Those are awesome! -=admiration=- Hey, If you dont mind, read mine and give me some feed back?

"Screams Make It Go Away"

Scream, scream, push the blade in all the way
It's the only way to take the inner pain away
Cringe, cringe, add to the pile of bloody knives
What do you say, the only way to jade your life

Born of blood, bread of denial
As you came in, why not go out in style
Crimson acid melts the fury
Temperature rises spray the mercury

Don't be fooled, your not pure in the least
Deep down inside, you cradle the numbered beast
Kept it inside for way to long
Let it rain blood, let the sea darken, let it be Cthulhu dawn

The tears you cry are covered with saddness
The eliptical delusion suggests it is madness
Emotions have found you, dwelve in revelations
Not only you, condemned, shrouded in eternal damnation

Scream, Scream, bask in silent dilerium
What do you say, let go of your inner spectrum

Cringe, cringe, realizing fate is so surreal
What do you say, dead in a dim burial

"Impala Triumphant"

Victory, I claim victory this night
The glass, raise the glass, we won the fight
All those I fought side by side with in battle
My allies, my friends, drink to the enemies death rattle

Just moments ago, our hearts soared in delight
For our swords sang and took off many a head tonight
Now we drink and laugh over thier deaths
We won the battle, triumph, killing adept

Morgoth does stand atop the drinking table
Much alchohol made him rather unstable
He did'nt care, He's adrenaline filled
Morgoth hast slain, Morgoth hast killed

Still they have blood on thier armor and faces
Some more than others death shown and traces
Traces the roots of triumph and greed
But tonight was a gathering, a gathering indeed

All they know now is the way of the blade
Killing is passion for the wrestless bunch be staid
The mage of the group took the souls he devoured
He raised up his glass and yelled "Victory is ours!"

Now the group laughs in monotonous glee
They have no idea what they are about to see
Thier fearless leader made it back, impaled by a spear, not dead but in faint
The enemy glared through obsidean eyes and hissed "Impala Triumphant"

"On the Edge of Neuro-Phase"

Blasphemous, how can this shock surge forth
To only de-compromise my one and only retort
I'm out to surge wrath, out to surge wrath..
Calm the aftermath, calm the aftermath..

Your whispers turn into screams
My screams turn into silence
The sky's shade is so surreal
Yet you know not of defilence

Elbarath save us
Demon be damned, ye seek revenge
Pierce his lungs with rusty blades
We must now avenge

Masses upon masses of hypnotics
Race to the edge of tranquility ironics
Only to see what they only knew neuro-wise
The all knowing, all seeing eye, out to hypnotize

Know not do they, of thier visions in front of them
Only to rise, only to fall, only for silence shall they
Shall they slow motion, matter deteriate thier finds
The wraithing pire fucks the hole in thier minds

Eyes open wide, only vision now, the scythe prepared to cut you in two
Cut you in two.. cut through your soul, cut through you..
Fuck you bloody bastard, fuck your curse, fuck your resolve
While only this once, with eyes way ahead, as you fuck this world, you finalize your dissolve..

Oceana becomes dimensia, Arcadia the Imperium
Mask of truth, mask of purity
Existance a blink, blinking non-existant
Neuro-commense, Neuro-surity

Fading the shade
Awake to the night
Nightly arrival
Now ye lay silent
Wondering if you ever possessed 'luck'
Well now, thanks to your Neuro-fuck
The sky a mirror, the stars a sign
Speedily revolving, universe transcending and never defined..

*bows in excitement* Im so glad you posted these classics......I missed them......your a good man Zeodus......you know we as Esodus should make tapestry's of our works....think on that....and Ravenwolf no longer desires to join the house......ill explain later......

:vampire: :icon1: SKORNE :icon1: :vampire:

Probably b/c you intimidated him. *chuckles* jk.

*bumps thread to the top* More must read and more must inspire him damnit!

not true........I just told him he would have to respect me a little more than he does....so he said fuck it.....and i said fuck you......It was a good convo....lol
Bleeds for dear Ravenwolf....he knows not what fire he lit inside me........


Master Zeodus, I am in need of a writing of anger.....vengeance....and murder....could you please write one for me brother.......*wants to hang out with you asap......gaining back my homicidal rage.....* :icon6:

:vampire: :icon1: Skorne :icon1: :vampire:

Zeodus says he will write one for you soon dear brother.

When didst thou want to commence a meeting?

Dear sister, I have a social event this weekend with a lady friend......next weekend is the most effective time of commencing a meeting......shall we get together stack the building blocks of Esodus??????......


:vampire: :icon1: SKORNE :icon1: :vampire:

That I will have to ask him. Either way, would it be here or there? b/c either way, I have to return Vol. 6 to you. The pics in my thread are the results of it. *slight smile* Too much on my mind at the moment. Maybe I'll feel better tomorrow.... Today's news was too big a toll for me to bear....

Skorne, it was thanks to your suggestions that I posted these old classics back up. A tapestry of our works huh, nice. I can only imagine the terror that would entail.

Well, that seems like quite the conversation you had with Ravenwolf, hahahah. In the House of Esodus, we all as members have equal respect for one another, so having someone who would break the vows of the dynasty, and the simple rules of courtesy, is better left in a less honorable house.... heheheh, that's not too harsh, I do not believe, just a valid assesment of the situation.

So, my friend, it is a writing of vengeance you want? I will start on one right now, I do not know if I will be able to post it tonight. It has been one hell of a night....

There has been a tradgedy in the family, and we won't be able to make it over their this weekend. I will explain this further in Private Message..

Alright Skorne, I hope this will quench your thirst for a writing of anger....

-I hope you suffer-

How to explain, this bloody rage
I've been shaking and can't stop
I've felt this for days

How could you feel, this pain derandged
You've crossed my path, on the wrong trail
And now you rot, you fuck against the grain

I hope you shred
And I hope you suffer, your fate divine
I hope you suffer, and die slow, fucker die

May it be by the saw, or it be by the knife
I'll kill you slowly, and I'll take your life
May it be by approval or it be by protest
Until you hurt I will never rest

Your screams, they will be legendary
Legends make good on words
Your squirms, they will be immortal
Immortals make good on never ending tides

Now I ponder, in reverence
Now I sit and stare
I make no appologies, to myself
But only to be fair

Your brains, will be splattered
And your head will look good on my wall
You were such a bastard
My collection will be adored by all

We all, love the beuty
The sights, and the sounds
We all, love the Splendor
The rights, and the wrongs

For we are human....
For we are ignorant....
For we chant peace and make war....
For we take comfort in others pain....

But yet....

I hope you suffer
I hope your skin gets slowly scraped off
My grinder yearns for your bastardly meat
And my greed fuels holy wars....

For I am humanity....
And....
I hope you suffer....

You Make me weep with your words of wisdom... I Love it post more
:clapping:

Of course I shall post more, my friend.

Make you weep with words of wisdom huh? Pretty bold compliment, but I will take it regardless, as I believe I have no choice, hahah, and thanks.

I am preparing to work on another one, I just feel like writing..

-The day we met-

I met you one day, one fateful day
When I thought my solitudinal thoughts would never go away
One day I'll die but I'm dead more in life
I met my reflection and cursed day into night

I met you my friend and I saw my own soul
As close as it seemed it was seemingly far
One would cringe, and swallow their pride
Until the day they saw their soul inside

Yearning to die yet clingling to live
Those you would hurt and sorrow to give
The thoughts of the light may be phantasmic
Yet embracing the dark at times feels orgasmic

Impale me my dear, and cut through my insides
See me for who I am, vacant of lies
Choke me my dear, and hear my dying voice
Allow me my visions, allow me deaths noise

Allow me to to kneel and to pick up the pieces
Shattered, broken, shaken, distorted
See me for who I am, vacant of doubt
More people could see what their own lives are about

The day we met, the day I met you
I saw a new way, a new existance renewed
Gained back what I lost so long ago
I saw my reflection, and it too did know

Shattered, broken, shaken, distorted
Fallen, risen, locked in your prison
Looking around for the slightest of nods
Find power in you.... and strike down the gods....

You don't need their vow, you don't need the masses
Praise your own strength and kick all their asses
If you cannot find a reason to live....
Find what it is, what is lost.. what to yourself, you must give

Embrace....
Renew....
Enlighten....
Inspire....
From the heights of the heavens to hell and it's layers
Find strengh in yourself, and become the divine slayer

Get up off you knees, and look into my face
Only you and yourself, from existance, can erase....

I saw my reflection, and all was gained back
I dare this damned world, my soul to attack
The day we met, the day I met myself........

-Allow me the pleasure-

Allow me the pleasure
To kill all your treasures

Allow me this day, to take your life away

Allow me the pleasure
To assess your life in measure

Allow me this hour, to burn all your flowers

Allow me the leisure
To gnaw on sub-consience seizures

Allow me this night, to fill your heart with fright

Allow me the honor, and allow me the hour
Allow me the pleasure, and allow me it all

Allow me.........

To chop off all your limbs
Ignore every one of your wims

To cut straight through your heart
This is only the start

To Throw you off a ledge
To see you explode in pieces instead

To skin you alive
And ignore all of your cries

To strangle you, painful and slow
And distress all that you know

To rip out your liver
To death I shall deliver

To plug up your lungs
Your voice will go unsung

To rip out your guts
Your death will never be enough

To sand off your face
And make art with your paste

To love you so deep
And now your soul I keep

Allow me the pleasure....
To hate you forever....

-Father I sinned-

Religion is a way, into peoples faith
They pray for their god but instead they get the wraith
Religion, is a path, a way to exist
Yet when they follow they only resist

Father, yes, I've sinned
Give me salvation and I'll take it back again
Father, why do you care
A corrupted society, a system, every day less fair

Your faith is so strong
Then why do you stand by and watch your beliefs go wrong
My countrymen, sit and stare
With no one to guide them, to live life they'll never dare

Father, sure, I've sinned
Your a man of god, and did no wrong?
Father, we have all sinned
If the teachings were true, god would dislike us all, and dislike you too

You support the bloodshed
Supporting death, murder, lies, and conspiracy
Yet the religious right
Claims their compassion and continues to fight

Father, indeed, I've sinned
I've seen through their lies, and seek my own truth
Yet, I suppose I must repent
This is the reason, your kind I resent

Father, yes I've sinned
Father, we have all sinned
Father, your god has sinned
Father, humanitys a sin....

They can only so long, be patriotic, melodic, and arrogant
They can only so long, remain on the offensive
They can only so long, remain in the realm of sanity
So long, so long.... now the end has come....

-Earth's Orgasm-

The day was the same, as all of the days
They basked in the sun, they basked in it's rays
A normal place, and a normal realm
In Zero 24 hours, the Earth will have fell

The Earth's been fucked enough
A chance given now ruined
As time passes by
Humans kill the earth, it shall now die

In and out it goes
Napalm striking down, desimating your foes
Up and down in psalms
Erotic screams of the bombs

The Earth's been fucked enough
A chance given now screwed
Drawn to the chasm
Humanity fucked up, and did it well, a blink and we're gone
Earth's Orgasm....

i like ur writing 's their great

i take that back


their awsome told in such points of everyone's veiw i like give me more I beg..*crawls on her knee's* i need more

Zeodus, vengeance........well that explains it better than I expected....I love your works.........they fuel the fires of hatred and melt the vail over my eyes...... :punk: awesome......

:vampire: :icon1: Skorne :icon1: :vampire:

Yes, it is impressive work isn't it? :4: You know my opinions on those works love, but I will say again its wonderous and descriptive. I love it.

Dark Angel - Thank you for your comments, surely, I am not worthy.. I will write one right now, at this moment, because you want one so badly. I cant promise it will be great, but I will try. :) Brilliant!

Skorne - I am glad you approve of my works, especially the one I wrote especially to fuel your vengeance.... as for that veil over your eyes, it is more transparent than you may think, your mind is legendary my friend, and your talent is apparent. Brilliant!

Integra - You love my work, as I love yours.... Brilliant!

As requested, here is one I just wrote

-A thousand lies-

A thousand lies, as thousands die
Mothers weep and babies cry
The trust they put, in this greedy man
Will echo throughout history, throughout all of the lands

SKin burns in mysterious ways
As the heathens swear the devils will pay
This world view, is multiple views
The masses will gather, and make a new world to screw

Oh no, fucking shit
They put their trust in a mad man, and this is it
Oh shit, fucking no
They slaved over tyrants to disrupt the peace, and flow

Harmony, a word so unique
The spoils of war the liars shall keep
A thousand lies, and media bliss
Faith dies, and famlilies reminice
A thousand deaths, they take their last stands
As fools realize the ignorance, their greed
they bury their head in their hands

Your ignorant
You say their spoiled....
Then why do the spoils, go to the theifs
Disrupters of peace, the greedy, blood sucking leach

We look back at history
How will the future, look upon our beliefs
Will they ever know, the grief
Only when we rise, we'll find relief......

Your rotten
You've lost your way, your beliefs you've forgotten
You make satan look like a saint
Your the epitome of greed, with all your bloodshed and your states

Born to breed and made to leave
Fight for me and by god you'll feel free
Listen to me, to my heart and my mind
We'll flirt with disaster, and damage we'll find

Run them down, take their base
We claim to represent the human race
Find them all, "smoke them out of their holes"
Fatten my pockets, make my greed whole

Let me introduce you
To a very close friend
As you further trust me
You find yourself dead

A thousand lies
A thousand die
Babies, Mothers, Fathers, Innocents cry
Fire rains down and humanity fries....

-Shattered Shards-

Liquid pain down from the sky rain
After today you'll never be the same
This is the day your world falls hard
Realizing it's not only your shattered shards

Your bones bent in ways you thought not possible
Blood gushing from places never deemed plausible
I spent many a year perfecting my trade
Under the moon your body degrades

Life seemingly slips but stays seemingly intact
Slowly but sure your life flashes back
What a position, what circumstances your in
This is nothing, compared to your sins

Repent and appease, weep if you please
You would kneel if you only had knees
I leave you now with one delightful little thought
Your the unfortunate twit whose been so carefully caught

"Come to my place for a tale and some tea,
Come to your senses and the essence of life you will see"
The smile on my face so secure, so sincere
Come play with me tonight my dear

This is the essence of trust in the wrong
Too much dispair in the happiest of songs
You live to abide, fingers pulling your attached strings
Once beutiful, now shattered shards, the ugliest of things

Now something goes wrong, terribly aweful
I snap your thin neck in spite of your gull
I scrape all your makeup with razors so sharp
I take your fake soul
I see through your show
Mine has just begun just begun....
The curtains rise
Your death goes unsung....

Wow love. :4: I likes. :icon9: Brilliant!

Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!

:vampire: :icon1: Skorne :icon1: :vampire:

Born to breed and made to leave
Fight for me and by god you'll feel free
Listen to me, to my heart and my mind
We'll flirt with disaster, and damage we'll find
Wow love. I likes. More must read and more

*bumps* This thread must be at the top.

....BRILLIANT!!!

-To End All Wars-

The war to end all wars
Rages on, every day
Not much room for peach on this earth
Everlasting, death and decay

Not much room for reasoning
You can't spread freedom from the barrel of guns
Not much room for remorse
Rising and falling, life is appauling

The war to end all wars
Is simple to declare
Not much room for resurrection in greed
Neverending, lies and deceit

The fools will buy it
A war waged based upon fear and vengeance
Sitting idle is indeed unjust and lame
But its worse to throw fuel on the flame

The war to end all wars
Will never be achieved
Finding a scapegoat to spread the shadows
Looking up to the skies, with blind eyes, all have been decieved