Well, here goes my first thread attempt...wish me luck!
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Just another godamned day in your sucky little life.
I watch you writhe in pain.
I wonder should I let you suffer,
Or snuff you out like the candle on my headboard.

NO. I am having way to much fun.
But man you are a sick f***.
You deserve all the shit I'm bringing your way.
Better watch yourself cause I am but a breath behind you.

And when you fall, I will watch you go down.
And when you crash, I will smell you bleed.
And when you feel the burn, I will hear your screams.
And do nothing at all.

i can feel the anger, the sickness. i liked it. hope to see more

deadly

Ha-ha! I've got you now, mutha-f*****
Watcha gonna do now?
You think you're the shit now don't you?
I'm here to tell you, you're not.

For all the times you laughed at me,
For all the times you whispered behind my back,
For all the shitty little pranks you pulled,
Revenge is mine and I show no mercy.

Yeah, you thought I was a bitch, you had no f'ing clue.
I'm here to show you how it's done.
Learn from the master of pain,
Listen to the queen of evil.

You're gonna wish I impaled your ass and got it over with.

Thank you deadlysoul...it only gets more intense from here.

sweet!

I am seething in anger.
My blood boils hot.
Adrenaline pumping.
I can't catch my breath.

I'm clawing my way to you
and inch by inch
no matter how long it takes
your flesh will rip.

Just like you ripped mine.

My lust overcomes me.

To want someone so much, I can taste the salt.
Every waking second, wanting to be near you.
Repeating your name in my head like a song that never ends.
And when I sleep, I still get no rest.

You haunt me and I love it.
I can get enough of it.
The blade rests cold against my skin.
And I give it to you...

Come take what has been rightfully yours long ago.
The years fly by like seconds til I see you again.
I look for you wherever I go.
I will wait until the end of time.

I am patient that way.
All good things come to those who wait?
F*** that. Get your ass over here.

wow you have a lot of anger..... they are great!!

I agree with krystintears you got the anger and it makes the poems all the more interesting to read.

Thank you KrystinTears and Savemysanity. I do appreciate your input.

"Silent Meaning"

The word not spoken goes not quite unheard.
It lingers in the eye in the semi-arch of brow.
A gesture of the hand speaks pages more than words.
The echo rests in the heart as driftwood does in sand,
To be rubbed by time until it rots or shines.
The word not spoken touches us as music does the mind.

I'm glad you decided to make a thread, and begin to post your poems on here. I've enjoyed them all. You're full of anger though aren't you? Anyway, I liked them all but I liked this one a lot. Especially the end. It was great. I cannot wait to read more of your poems. There will be more right? :5:

Well, keep up the good work!

Love,
Krissi

i see why you called it raw...your poems are very good you capture anger so well ...and you last has very good imagery ....glad to see you posting your work ...thanks for sharing with us


julian

no anger, i am a lil shocked...

fucking love it!!!

Thank you Krissy, Julian, and Kill me Softly....I need all the encouragement I can get.

--Jen

Love all your work, its great! xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

To Live Again

For you I would give life
For you I would live a lie
For you are all I think of
And I cannot reach you.

I smell you in every room I enter
I hear you in my mind, every thought.
I feel you as rain soaks me through
Don't dry me off.

I search for you in my dreams
I never want to awake from
Your grip leaves me breathless
I need to breath you in

So I can live again.

It is a really great poem!!

Thanks KrystinTears.

A Bottomless Well

A moan escapes me as your soul enters mine.
Welcome home, back from long ago.
All stars shine down in spot light mode.
Moving rhythmically, nature's eye on us.
I am lost in this moment,
All time stands still
In awe of your greatness.
I am yours take possession of me
The rightfully yours for the taking.
And all I know is you.
You are all I see and long to taste.
Quench me over and over,
For I am thirsty--
A bottomless well.

loved that poem ....your a strange one ambertexn...somtime i feel like i know certain people who appear on this forum ...i have a strange feeling about you....

julian x

wow i love this one!!!!
deadly

i also love silent meaning, a bottomless well! very good, i love how you use your imagination! can't wait for more.

deadly

i love your stuff......do mind if i use some as inspiration cuz it gave me some ideas.i can feel the anger pulsing,like the pulse in a bleeding vien.i love it.it speaks to me.keep writing.

the bottomless well when i started to read i thought it was gonna be about sex.... great job

Julian,
Glad I keep you on your toes. If I was predictable, I'd be boring, now wouldn't I? Strange feelings...hope it's a good thing!

Thank you Deadly Soul.

Thank you Pain Floats.

Thank you Krystintears and yes it was indeed about sex. Enjoy!!

he he i have a feeling i know you....somthing about the way you talk to me ....so do i???

Julian,
No, not in this world. We've never met and I'm relatively new to this forum. People find connections in many ways. You are a very very gifted writer and I'm a junky when it comes to great poems or lyrics. I wish I did know you, though...seems you've got quite a following anyway, I'd just be another notch on your belt so to speak. LOL. I get such a physical rush reading (and writing) excellent works of poems, stories, or lyrics. Keep on writing. Your work is priceless.
--Jen

im glad i feel a connection to you ...its nice .....thankyou for saying such nice things about my stuff...your stuff is really good ..you have much talent...i hope that we can become good friends ..

julian xx

Julian,
Yes, I'd like that. Good friends are few and far between not to mention hard to find. Thanks for your kind words about my poems, too. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Keeps me motivated.
--Jen

please write more

Wow Jen! *loves them all*

:punk:

Thank You Tindal.

*sitting on the edge of my seat* i can't wait for more!

deadly

Jen...

YOU ROCK!

Keep em coming!

Thank you Deadly Soul and Dark Angel. I'm going through some real shit right now, but I'm trying to focus to share more of my work...
--Jen

hope your ok ....i hate it when the shit of life comes calling .....

your new friend julian xx

Thanks, Julian. It'll blow over as it usually does. I'm just stressin'. I can't help myself but I just gotta quote this most excellent song.....It's how I feel today.

Meredith Brooks "Bitch" lyrics

I hate the world today
You're so good to me
I know but I can't change
Tried to tell you
But you look at me like maybe
I'm an angel underneath
Innocent and sweet
Yesterday I cried
Must have been relieved to see
The softer side
I can understand how you'd be so confused
I don't envy you
I'm a little bit of everything
All rolled into one

Chorus:
I'm a bitch, I'm a lover
I'm a child, I'm a mother
I'm a sinner, I'm a saint
I do not feel ashamed
I'm your hell, I'm your dream
I'm nothing in between
You know you wouldn't want it any other way

So take me as I am
This may mean
You'll have to be a stronger man
Rest assured that
When I start to make you nervous
And I'm going to extremes
Tomorrow I will change
And today won't mean a thing

Chorus:
I'm a bitch, I'm a lover
I'm a child, I'm a mother
I'm a sinner, I'm a saint
I do not feel ashamed
I'm your hell, I'm your dream
I'm nothing in between
You know you wouldn't want it any other way

Just when you think, you got me figured out
The season's already changing
I think it's cool, you do what you do
And don't try to save me

Chorus:
I'm a bitch, I'm a lover
I'm a child, I'm a mother
I'm a sinner, I'm a saint
I do not feel ashamed
I'm your hell, I'm your dream
I'm nothing in between
You know you wouldn't want it any other way

I'm a bitch, I'm a tease
I'm a goddess on my knees
When you hurt, when you suffer
I'm your angel undercover
I've been numb, I'm revived
Can't say I'm not alive
You know I wouldn't want it any other way

In the distance, the shadows loom
My heart races, bracing for the pain
The sheer onset of sudden doom
In my grip a silver cain
I'm waiting for the full moon
Amist the stinging rain

Sounds though muffled are crystal clear
I appear to be coming into my own
I now see things aren't as they appear
Chilled more than ever to the bone
Shards of screams is what I hear
And I couldn't be more alone

I need to make it just one more day
I'm happy I force myself to lie
If only to comply and yes, obey
Screw that, I think I'd rather die!!

im glad to see some more work from you ...the last poem is good ...i like how you write....

julian x

Thanks, Julian. You inspire us all to write from our hearts....

Hey ya, I loved your last poem entery, really beautiful, xxx

Thank you fadeaway!

i love this poem ..keep postin more..lookin forward to seein more...

really great poem!!

wow, yet again, i LOVE your work!! great job, can't wait to see more

deadly

Thanks again Tickles, Krystin Tears and Deadly Soul....you all push me to write more and I appreciate your kind words...
--Jen

“Pssssst. Come here a second, would you?” She cried.
“Let me just finish this first,” He replied.
And as he put his clothes back on with a smirk on his face,
The young girl lay there dying, in true disgrace.

“Let’s fill our bags with lots of money!”
“Yes, let’s get out of here, I’m hot and hungry!”
The thieves left as sly as they arrived.
Their plan seemed flawless and truly contrived.

But little did they know, they were being watched by me.
In the shadows, in the darkness forever will I be.
You see, I control the mind, the body, the soul.
Escaping me is beyond your control.

I watch you suffer, I watch you fight.
Eat you alive, yes I might.
For you are mine, and you always have been.
My eye is on you and your sins will never be forgiven.

good poem ...i like it

julian xx