Swallow the pills
Pull the trigger
Slice the vains
Crack the mirror.

Break the silence
Open the door
Come inside
Bleed some more.

Seeping blood
Twisted and cruel
Stains your skin
Drips from its pool.

You've done it now
The light has thinned
Darkness appears
Why have you sinned?

very nice. my favorite part was:

You've done it now
The light has thinned
Darkness appears
Why have you sinned?

hope to see more
deadly

Hey girl love your poems, nice to know you too are in touch with your darkside. love sarah
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He walks alone
Deep within his own fears
he listens, he cries
Yet sheds no tears

Despair drags him down
Into a lonley pit
No more trying
His candles unlit

This lonley path swallows him whole
No one can reach him
Its taken his soul

His sorrowful breath
Dragged from below
It cannot be touched
Just taken to throw

Words have been lost
Sentences unsaid
Phrases ignored
No more
HES DEAD


I put this on my friends thread so u may have seen it let me now wot u think thatnks luv xx nic xx

I like you work. Welcome to the form I love it here so i am sure you will too.
Rose

your work is vary dark and i like that. Please writ more. and welcome . (have a banana :banana00: ) :punk:

i really loved this one!!! hope to see more soon

deadly

Drunk part 2:

drunk once again
drink clenching my soul
its wrapped me up
times taken its toll,

Im wide awake
what will it take
to send me to sleep
counting the sheep

i am very drunk
my boat has just sunk
the ship i have sailed
my life it has failed

time to leave
what to believe
mixed messages i recieved
cheated again
im counting to ten
need to shut my eyes
this love i despise

dont you just hate seeing ex boyfriends/girlfriends?????

ah yes drunk i haven't been drunk in a long time. yes seeing an ex that i still like is not to fun

welcome to the forums.

lets see.. what is there to say about dark whispers.. it is the second home to the avid writers. it becomes a new religion to write ,post and read every day. an example- everytime i open internet explorer it takes me less than half a second to get to this site because i am so used to going to favorites and clicking directly upon the link. so in this, if you are ever so dedicated.. then this too will be your new home. welcome to the family.

i love your work so far. you are doing far better than i did at my beginning posts. i hope to see more soon ,as i will be back.

nick

well said mentally forsaken, hope you feel at home here nic, love yaz sarah
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Men

i dont understand ur childish ways
and figuring it out
is not how I'm gonna waste my days.
You play around and waste my time,
at first I wanted you as mine
and maybe, I still do but I realize now,
it would never be true.
No stress coz I'll move on,
not thinkin' about you.
You'll be the one out lookin
for a love that's true
and I can smile and sweetly state,
It could have been me,
but you wrestled fate,
and set me free.
The grin on my face
is because you'll never find
another quite like me.

This is so how i want to feel at the moment!! wishful thinkin tho xxx nic xxx

and I can smile and sweetly state,
It could have been me,
but you wrestled fate,
and set me free.
The grin on my face
is because you'll never find
another quite like me.


quality, thats my favourite part of your poem!!!!! its well good! love ya hunny

so hard to forget

A year ago i was told to forget
a year later i get bought back

I tried so hard for all this time
to ease u into the back of my mind

Yes i did wrong
and dont i know it
but Its so hard to make your words fit

Its like a puzzle u want me to solve.

But is it my place to give advice
on all the things i want in life.

If it was up to me
dont you no where id be.

yet you no its not
but what have you got
nothing for what i can see.

"Start again" where the words you said
from your lips
but now there dead

how much am i prepared to take
id swim a mile
if you gave me that lake

how many tears am i meant to cry
id cry a million
for you to try.

moving on is the hardest thing
it could be so easy if u let it be

on and on it seems to go
and everytime
it makes me low

but back i come
for all this hurt

when will my lesson be learnt x

Im loving it sweetie, you'd do all that for a man who has stopped appreciating you, no more dont do it! Anyways loving the new poem, xxxxx

I loved this poem. :5: It was amazing.. I read all your other work too. I just think this one is my favorite.

Love krissi

Hey Krissi hun, thank you, really appreciate you reading all my work, its nice to get the encouragement off someone who has been doing this for a while and is as talented as you.
love ya nic
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Hi Krissi thats me (twisted_envey) on fade aways (sarahs) settings, oops! xxx

your a good writer ....good poem

i liked it, hope to see more

Hey Nic.

Anytime. I loved your work. And don't worry, I will always read your work as long as you post it here. I have been writing for about 2 years now. It's always nice once you've been writing for a while even if it's been a month or two. It's fun to read back and see what you wrote in the very beginning to what you right now. *blush* and thanks for thinking I'm talented :5:

Love ya,
Krissi

thanku
just started like a wk ago its amazin how easy it is to just write poems about how u feel and for them to sound right! i really like your wrk sarah (fadeaway) showed me some of it neways talk to ya later love nic