"Points of view"
When someone dies,
Who really dies?
Do we die to the person,
Or does the person die to us?
When a shadow is cast,
Which is the shadow?
The darkness to the object,
Or the object to the darkness?
When time changes,
Which one passes by?
Do we pass through time,
Or does time pass through us?
When a word is spoken,
What's actually heard?
Do you hear what I say,
Or do I say what you hear?
When something speeds up,
Whose speed changes?
Does one speed up,
Or does the older one slow down?
When you read this,
What do you see?
Do you see what I write,
Or do I write what you see?


"An image of me"
I turn down the alley of life.
It is short, but there are many paths.
I choose my course, then follow through
To the end, for the image of me.
I turn down the alley of time.
It is long and wide in space.
I set my pace and follow through.
To the end for an image of me.
I turn down the alley of happiness.
It is short but very pretty.
I enjoy the sight as I continue through.
To the end for an image of me.
I turn down the alley of despair.
It grows great at each love lost.
I hide it away and continue through.
To the end for an image of me.
I turn down the alley of death.
There's so much yet it's so empty.
I clench my fist and follow through.
To the end, for the final image of me.


"Memories in the Darkness"
As the darkness approaches me.
I watch the light pass me.
And cast a shadow upon.
The eternal memories of mine.
They come very quickly.
But leave very slowly.
And disappear within.
The darkness of the shadow.
But than I stop and think.
Where the light will go,
For I too am a memory
In the darkness of a shadow.

i love your work....its all very good ..welcome to dark whispers you willl enjoy your time with us here im sure ...


julian xx

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"Outside"
I'm on the outside looking in,
Seeing all the hate that is within.
Feeling the pain,
Of those who are vain.
Knowing all the pain that will endure,
The misery will be assured.
Being on the happy side of nothing,
Just one turn and they will have nothing.
No one will hear laughter,
From here on after.
Grown men will cry,
As their lives pass them by.
Mothers will weep,
As their children take that never ending sleep.
When will all this cease?
Only after the last soul deceased,
What caused all this hate?
No one will know but the Mother Of Fate.


(haven't come up with a title for this next one)

There are some words,
That should remain unsaid.
There are some songs,
That should remain unsung.
There are some wounds,
That should remain unhealed.
There are some things,
That should remain untouched.
But I will always speak the words,
"I love you."
And I will always sing the songs,
That come from the heart.
And I will always heal,
From the wounds that can't be seen.
Yet there are some people,
That you should touch;
Those in need,
Those in pain,
Those in misery.
So touch me,
Because tomorrow I may not be here.
And if I am,
Next week I may not be.
So live for the moment,
Which is now.


"Stars"
I looked up at the sky last night,
And all I saw were stars.
Racing around themselves,
Like a highway full of cars.
I looked down at his face again,
A cascading rain of tears.
Falling over his face of stone,
Staying for a thousand years.
Then I turned the radio volume up,
I looked above, all I saw were falling stars.
A mixing song with love.
"That's all." I said. "All there is to life, tear drops and stars."
He looked at me and gave me a smile,
Blinked his eyes and turned his head.
He closed those eyes forever,
And left me and the skies were dead.

i like your stuff. Its great.. just like everyone here.. keep it up =]
-heather<3

Thank you guys... i appreciate it. I will continue posting poems:angel:

"A friend's lasting Impact"
The time has come to say good-bye,
It's time to spread our wings and fly.
We have gone through alot over the past few years,
But now we must separate and face unknown fears.
Our friendships emerged from some uncommon threads,
We each learned that others need to be led.
Soon we were on the top, side by side,
Together enjoying life's pleasant ride.
To me, you have always been as a friend should,
When no one understood me, you always could.
You were there to lift me up when I cried,
And fervently told the truth and never lied.
Your continuing determination to survive,
Has taught me that I too can flourish and thrive.
You were always there to help and lend an ear,
Therefore, to me you will always be dear.
Even though we must go our separate ways,
We'll always have found memories of those special days.

"Cracked Teenager"
I've come on a few years since my city life-lows,
I used to give the punches and take the blows.
On friday nights we'd crack open a keg,
I'd get drunk and break an arm or a leg.
I used to get my kicks from picking a fight,
Sometimes the rumbles would last all night.
To calm myself down, I would smoke a cigarette,
I never thought about the future, my life wasn't set.
I was proud to be a hood, stealing was a game,
I sometimes got caught and always took the blame.
I was the portrait of a loser; I played it like a pro,
I have a bad reputation; I have no place to go.



"Fooling Myself"
I don't need love,
I've finally found that it's worthless.
I don't need pain,
I've finally realized you drive girls away.
The sun will always shine,
The birds will always sing.
I gave you all I had,
Now I've lost everything.
I told myself,
"I don't need you."
But I seem to be stuck,
in that same old rut.
Because you took,
all the love I could give.
And then I found out your heart was a sieve?
I know I loved you,
I'll never forget.
The taste of your lips or your hair when it's wet.
The time when I loved you,
I'll never forget.
The taste of your kisses,
Your manly scent.
You said "love forever,"
I guess that you tried.
Yet when it comes down to the wire,
"Oh, Sorry. I lied!"



"Blind love"
Blind love is what they call this, they don't know.
Each and everyday our love grows.
You separate us because this world does not allow,
True love as it is, as we've found it now.
This is a gift, one only god could send,
Such a love even we cannot comprehend.
So even though we are apart by some kind of hate,
Our hearts our together by something more than fate.

"Friendship"
Friendship is like a rainbow,
Colorful, bright, but sometimes fades away.
The sun overshadows the rain,
As our past is gone and our
Future is here to stay.
The colors of the rainbow
Show points in our lives,
As we strive for our friendship
To stay alive and never die.
The brightness is a companion,
As the days grow darker
And our lives have just begun.
As long as we're together,
We'll always have some fun.

Hey I really love your work, its really really good, keep on posting!!!
I love the "one you havent came up with a name for" Its really good! Love yaz xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

You're very good, especially for having just started posting. keep it up.

Hey, Thanx. I am enjoying the good compliments.. But, honestly I think that I need some work on some of the poems... :angel: