Thayde
Nov 30 2004, 06:51 PM
The Shadows are crying
night's tears fall gently to the ground
darkness whispers loneliness
why doe's it cry so
midnights true son sleeps
and won't awaken
the night knows that its death
the night is tired and wishes for sleep that will never come
so the night cries for what it has lost
is shall never be the same again
ravenous
Nov 30 2004, 06:59 PM
A great poem...
I really like it.
Hope to see more soon.
And welcome to the forum.
Peace~
:ph34r:
Ammon
Nov 30 2004, 09:13 PM
REally good...excellent actaully...
Though might I say you really should keep all your work into one thred...