and there i was
lying there
limp
lifeless
bloodstained
and dried tears
on the forest floor
with shatteres glass
broken to bits
left from the struggle
to free myself from you
and your lustful grip upon me
the stench of rape in the air
murder hidden by your tongue
never speak of me again
im non-existent now.


this is my most recent poem, and its shit for sure. tell me of these horrors, if you feel the need to.

well i cudn't find it shitty in any way... i liked it especially this part
"to free myself from you
and your lustful grip upon me
the stench of rape in the air
murder hidden by your tongue"

i'd love to read more of ur work
:icon2:

yeah i thought it was pretty sweet. nice one.

thank you, both of you. i plan to post more tomorrow. i have to get my book. that just happened to be onw i had with me in my binder. i have to go to this site at school. thanks again. i hope my thread becomes a hit, like some of those on here.

just leave me here
to rot and die
this heart so dear
soon will cry

on this night of aging beauty
distress and pain were brought
as if it were its duty
to make the night distrought (spelling?)

this life was swift
to come and go
it was no gift
to have or know

to leave this life with grace
is my wish upon this flame
this gift my bleeding heart does embrace
to end this unjust game.

just leave me here
to rot and die
this heart so dear
soon will cry.


Enjoy!!!
~The silent lover

untitled

headlight reveris
end in a pavment graveyard.
say goodbye
to everything you thought you knew.
this isnt the end
unless you want it to be.
just a few more hours left
until everythings left as memories.
stolen keys
make their way into my pocket
unlocking the gruesome truth
that there is no meaning to this.
take another shot
and just one more drag
corroding till its dust.
lost myself in words again
writing myself out of the story.
paint me out but not too fast.
streaks of light smeared down
reflecting onb the shattered glass.
cut my fingers from touching it
thinking it was snow
being as cold as it is.
chew the ice cube in your mouth
sip your cola.
choke and cough a bit.
give up trying
playing a game with a snake.
still beating him.
the star fell in my eye.
i blinked it away
and fell asleep.

~the silent lover

i love your last poem ..you have talent

why thank you! that was just a bunch of random thoughts i just wrote down on the drive home from vacation. i thought it was good too, except that i felt it had no real purpose and had no consistency. but thats just what i thought of it.

~the silent lover

don't say that!!! it was really good, i enjoyed reading it. i love the way you worded it! hope to see more :icon2:

deadly

i like your other stuff too

deadlly

I like all of it, the last one especially. You say you think it had no consistency....poems can be random thoughts like that. It's the emotion that's within it all that matters. I really hope you post more :) -Emz-

*waiting for more* by the way i love your name.

thank you. both of you. im glad you like them. i dont have any to post at the moment... sorry. but i should have some up by tomorrow. and thank you, i like my name too! lol. actually, a friend thought of it for me a while ago for an aim sn, and i loved it so much, i use it on everything now!
~the silent lover

cant wait for more.