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Alright, well I just joined today and I've been reading everyones work and you all are very talented! So i just wanted to post some of my stuff just cause i guess.. well heres one poem i did a few days ago tell me what you guys think.

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Til Death Do Us Part
Ashes to ashes dust to dust
stop both of our endless pain this i must
quite the game of Russian rulet
chambers full i've got not a single regret
sneak into her room with the window she leaves open for me
shes so peaceful when she sleeps
kills me to see her weep
Hold the gun up
Cock it back
As I aim arms shaking at her head
She wakes wearily and smiles
Shes glad to see me
She looks at the gun and a single tear falls from her eye
She knows I'm going to end our lives
So we can live together w/o anyone stoppin us
She embrasses my descion and kisses my hand
She whispers I love you
And I take her life away
bullet straight thru her chest
She falls to the floor
As someone opens her bedroom door
I whisper "til death do us part"
I love you too..
Aim the gun at my head
1.8 seconds were both dead..
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-heather<3
i know its not GREAT just lemme know what ya think

heres another poem...its long take the time to read it....


Picture this
bullet to your head
head to your bullet
the plans full proof this time
nothing to it
just pull the trigger come on you know you want to do it
one little flinch and youre dead punkass bitch
music so loud you cant hear yourself scream
wrist cut so deep you cant see yourself bleed
rope tied so tight you cant feel yourself breathe
Gun to your head
you think no one knows how it feels to wish you were dead
people like you every fucking day kill themselves
the same fucking way
you think your original you think your right
you cry yourself to sleep every fucking night
you need some serious help man
stuffs all packed
give your mom back the keys to the family van
leave your little brother your baseball you cherished
leave your little sister your security blankey drenched in your tears
journals burned so no one knows what you thought
so no one knows why
why the fuck did you want to die?
you apologize to you're friends and family
the truth is you shouldnt regret what you do
so to apologize means you didnt really wanna to follow through
you think your to far into now no time to stop
but if you could youd turn back the hands on the fucking clock
you would make it so you didnt smoke pot
youd make it so you didnt try to choke your mom
you would make people understasnd you have problems
and you think the only way to solve them is to end it all
just one step off the clif and your gonna fall
to your death that you yearn for so much
face first into your grave you dug yourself
pull the trigger
nothings stoppin you
close your eyes and reminiss
you hear the phone ring
your older brother just drove himself into the near by lake
he left you a message on your phone
he says dont be like me things can be different for you not the same
your one true friend has just taken his life
your ready to be with him now
you let the phone sit there on your bedroom floor
tears fill your eyes knowing this could really be the end
images of you brothers face fill your head
bullet to your head
head to your bullet
its time now go ahead do it
pull the trigger and..
you pull the trigger
your body rushes to the floor
just as you hit the ground your brother walk in your door
tears fill his eyes
he never did what you did and...
you still werent alone you wanted so bad what you thought would stop your pain
when you realize where you are and what youve done
you wish you didnt have that fucking gun
your brother holds your head in his hands
he blames hiself...
is it his fault?
he didnt pull the trigger and...
he picks up the rope off the floor
ties it up in the closet
chair knocks out from under him
he struggles for every breath
gaspin to see your face once more
when his eyes are glazed your the one who walks with him threw the white maze
you walk together feeling better
you know you should be in hell
but you dont want anything to ruin this
you walk and god says what were you thinking?
your answer is the pain was so unbearable
he says i know
you say why
he says cause it was your time to die.
-heather<3

Maybe when you follow through with suicide thats just what god wanted and maybe when you attempt and fail God doesnt wan you yet think about it if youve tried and it doest work uhmm maybe you arent supposed to die...

in love memory of sean... </3

anyone gonna tell me what they think?...

alrightttt?.... well heres another one

I cut my wrist
i watch it bleed
as the blood drips down my arm
i feel the need
i cut so more
blood falls to the floor
some are deep
some are real deep
i think to myslef
what happens if i go to deep
then i die..
is that why im doin this
to leave this earth?
is this what i really want?
I stop thinking and cut some more
suddenly i fall to the floor
i start screamin and crying
but no one hears me
so there i am in a puddle of blood all alone dying
i made a mistake
i cut to deep
and now my life i must take
just b.c of the problems in my life
i did something stupid
i picked up a knife
i ran it across my skin
i let it all get to me
i let them all win
im gettin weaker
i can hardly breathe
why did i do this
over something so meager
yes i had problems
that is true
but i could have solved them
instead i decided to pick up a knife
made a mistake
now im taking my life
i will never see my friends again
i have to leave now
and go to heaven
im gonna hurt so many people when the find me
in the bathroom
everyone will be crying
i know that people cared
but i was to dumb
and didnt want to share my dispair
no one will know why this happend
and to think i did this all
while you were napin'
-heather<3

alright well i guess ill wait till ppl reply to see wether or not im wastin my time.

good stuff....i like your work ....keep it up your good

I like the first one best... hope to see more.

thank you!... i know they arent the greatest but thank you!