i tell you il love
you say ok
like i say it to say it
and it dosent mean a thing

has it ever crossed your mind
that im telling you no lie
when i say
hey i love you kate

you say you dont believe
but i really wish you would
cause im laying here to night
crying that you wood

you say that your scared
and you tell me why
why dont you just trust me
and lay your hand in mine

i will love you always
i love you till the end
put your trust in me
and i will never trun you away

you dont understand
how it makes me feal
when i hold you tight
love is all i feal

that was an alright poem very nice flow...

your poem has a great message, flow was a lil off but it was still a good poem!!

lost in a world of darkness
i feal only pain
my mind slips away
as i toke up agian

my only friend
is my gun and my hand
i shoot up agian
and waite for the end

the wall stats to spin
and i toke up agian
i place my hand
on the trigger agian

the gun goes up
and im all fucked up
the hammer goes down
but the saftys still on

It's nice to read love poems.. and then, it's also nice to hear other poems with emotion. Uhm, it was a good poem. It's hard to tell someone you love them and have them believe if they're only working against you to not believe a word you say at all.. been there,done that. Hm, I know how it feels to use an alternative such as a knife or razorblade, or even a gun. But, there's also the brighter alternatives such as just writing on how you feel, and not acting on what harm you want to do. You can do something else that catches your interest instead. Anyway, not trying to say what you should or shouldn't do. Just stating a few suggestions you could try instead of turning towards a bad habit..

I liked them both though. And I hope to read more. Did you just start writing or have you for a while ? just curious is all.. :5:

..krissi

well i use to write alot but then i just stoped posting the things i wrote but i decided to post agian

aww, well that's cool

i like the first one. it reminded me of this guy named kevin and me. cuz he is trying to get me to go out with him and i keep pulling away. sweet poem. hope to see more.

deadly

in my darkest hour
i lie and waite
waite for what
waite for nothing

there is nothing here
its all been taken
i have nothing left
but the shit im taking

i fall to the floor
and hold on for life
as my blood spill out
all over the knife

with powder on my nose
and a needle in my arm
my life goes by
and i try not to cry

im hiding inside
inside of my self
and i wont even try
i just want to die

with a rope around my neck
and a chair below my feet
i push back and swing
and waite for my fate

well the story behind the first one is im dating this chick and im crazy over her i tell her i love her all the time and all she says is ok. she says she doesnt believe in love but im just hopeing someday she will see....

well the story behind it is quite understandable. I mean, I've been there. Actually I'm going through that right now. I love this guy with all my heart and all that keeps me going, I love him more than life it'self to be honest. But anyway enough about my situation. He does not believe me. He takes it as a compliment.. is that normal? haha.. I asked why he would take it as a compliment and I still don't understand from his response. But yeah, dude. Only time can tell, and only time can reveal if it's meant to be.And remember, love is something that should come on it's own time, and never be rushed.

put your hand mind
and look into your eyes
i would never tell you a lie
and i will never make you cry

hold you in my arms
untill the sun rises
on that distant shore
tell i love you for ever more

when i look into your eyes
i feal you deep inside
you can see rite through me
i have no where to hide

yea....i know what you mean. i just hope one day i will say it and she will say it back and really mean it. how is it even possible to talk it as a compliment? i dont get that. are maybe hes just scared...maybe no ones ever said that to him b4...he mite not know what to think......

I am sorry that they wont say it back.... My bf said it first to me... it scared me... but i still said it...

It was about 6 months ago the first time I said it to him. And it's always hard for me to actually come out with my feelings to someone's face, so when he came over one day I was looking him in the eyes and we was standing there and he was holding me and I just told him, and of course as soon as I start I look down >< but anyway, I looked down and I was like " These feelings I feel are so hard to express, but the only term I can think of that describes them entirely is love. So I feel as if I love you.. I can't stand to not be with you, although we've never been together but I still wish we could something in the future.. but this emotion of love is so true and promising.." and well , he smiled and said, " thats the best compliment that anyone has ever given me" call me crazy, but I don't understand it either. And you know what they say, Love is blind. Maybe it really is.. I don't know. About a month ago he called me up telling me how he has "strong feelings fro me" but won't actually tell me what they are. He's been hurt in the past over after expressing his love.. maybe you're right. He is scared. :16: And since then, I haven't talked to him.. so now it only scares me.. that he just said that and it was like a goodbye or something.. :25: I don't know, I read him a poem I wrote.. and only then, I was blind to realize it could possible either scare him away, or make him run away..

anyway, love the new poem. So pretty and true. :5:

I hope it works out for both of you and maybe he was just being nieve and didnt know what to say....

love


what is love, is it just a mere word
or is it something more, something unheard
it can tare you apart, it can make you cry
it can make you smile or bring a tear to your eye

love is real, not just a word
you can see it in your eyes, you can feal it in your heart
love can be bad, love can be bad
it can give you new life or take all you have

dont say you dont believe and push it away
because in the end you will probly stop and say
love is real not just a word
and you gave me a whole new world

this was my favorite. the use of drugs to try to tranquil the pessimistic views of the world.. of your world awaiting the day you die, but it comes sooner than you think. as you try to cease the sorrow alone by yourself only to find that your life was spared by luck.

awesome!

thanks....i thought it was pretty good my self.... :icon5:

It is beautiful

the pain and the fear that sourrounds me
the scars and the scabs that cover me
all the hate stored inside me
all the drugs that have tryed to change me

my life on it own is nothing
im stuck in the dark just thinking
my life is yours for the taking
just kill me now and quit thinking

the blood runs down my face
as the nails are put into place
cut me one more time agian
and beat me untill the bloody end

with chains around me feet
and the bolts in my hands
the nails in my head
and fthe fire below my feet

there is nothing left i am almost gone
with the fear and hate driving me on
i hang on the wall to by bloody end
for now i am nothing all over agian

every thing that i see
every thing i here
reminds me of you
i wish i was there

i just want to hold you
run my hands through your hair
tell you i love you
let you know i care

as the day goes by
i keep seeing your eyes
and think about the pain
that you have stored withi in

my pain and my tears
its all for you
to see you hurt
it tares me apart

i hope you know
how much i care
i love you forever
ill always be there

I love this one it really shows how people try and drowed the pain of life in drch and achohol. I have been ther. I know that pain that you feel. You other stuff is great but this one really suck in ym mind.
Rose

I loved this one...every thing that i see.... it was beautiful!!

jody just want to let you know that i DO like you...more than you'll ever know. i just dont believe in love. im waiting for someone to change my mind. maybe that perosn will be you.

im trying jody i really am.

AWHHHHHHHHH

so beautiful. this poem brought a tear to my eye. I love your poetry, it's filled with many different emotions.

thanks every one for all the good comments.

heres one i wrote about a week ago and just never had time to post it.


tears on the inside
just kep falling
the cut on my soul
just keep bleeding

i have no life
no reason to live
it just all seems
its comming to an end

i try to drownd it out
with all the drugs
but it just come back
the pain of love

i lie awake
crying at night
wishing she was here
so i could hold her tight

the only fear
i hold as my own
the fear of the pain
of being alone

i tell you i love you
i tell you i care
i hold you in my heart
but your not even there

i wish i could see you
i wish i was there
i just wish you knew
how much i really care

Your work, really makes me reminise on how i used to feel for my x and stuff,
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i hope you know
how much i care
i love you forever
ill always be there


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I really like it, Im so relating to all you work,
love yaz
sarah
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wow the one u just posted is wow! N i love! xxx

i like your work

deadly

great new poem!!

shattered dreams
run through my mind
as i sit and think
and pass the time

a bleeding heart
and an empty soul
thats whats left
and im so damn cold

my soul was taken
riped apart
and all thats left
iis a bleeding heart

my dreams of forever
are gone for good
now a bodie
lie where i stood

LOVE!

how i love you
how i care
how i always wish
i could be there

to run my fingers
through your hair
tell you agian
how much i care

you beautiful eyes
and your soft skin
i just wish
i could hold you agian

look deep into
your eyes
tell you i love you
and always will

it was beautiful! :5:

krissi

I really liked the how one, it was just really good!!

sitting in my room
watching the clock
wating for the time
for it all to stop

smoke rings drift by
as time counts life
every secound is pain
cause every day im insaine

my life it gone
its been taken away
i have nothing to hold
and live through this day

i pick up the gun
it has to be done
i live no more
i lay dead on the floor

wow. that poem was amazing.. :5: I've felt that way many over many times.. It's hard. Life can be hard, and at times everyone thinks there's something not there to hold on to.. or live for.. but there is. The experience of living, and feeling love for the first time. Being able to do all the things you never could've if you were to die, or in the beginning never born..

:5: Love,
Krissi

ok......she tells me she cares about me alot and i have to believer her cause i have no reason not to. i still havent herd her say i love you back when ever i tell her that but im hoping it will be soon or what if she never says it....if and when she does...that would make me happer than almost every thing........ :huh:

it is really great

you dont know me
you never will
you were never there
you didnt even care

you try to control me
but it too later now
you should have took the time
now im not there

you treat me like shit
like you know who i am
but you were neer there
look at my hands

see who i am
what i have become
its all because of you
your so damn bumb

i will destroy you
your coming to an end
your rain will fall
my blood is on your hands

I love this one I can relate too it in so many ways .
Luv
Jenny

i sit by the door
and toke up agian
and forget the pain
of scars on my brain

with nothing left
with every thing gone
all i sing i
is the same old song

pick up the knife
and wish for no life
i stab it in my thy
hit the floor and cry

i pull back agian
i stab for my thy
the blood rushes out
and covers my eyes

with the gun in my hand
and the knife in my thy
all i can do is sit and cry
and say ive got to try

gun to my arm
i pull back in harm
the bullet goes through
and burns like iron

blood and the floor
and blood on the door
my bady lays numb
but im not no more

with one last breath
i pull back agian
standing blind
now i know death

wow that one was great. It really sent chills down my spine.
Rose

thanks....after i wrote it i went back and read it agian and i could picture me doing all of it and just the bloody sein. the things pain can cause........

that is ever so true, it was truly a good piece of work.
jenny

jody, these are great babe. yur one of the best things to ever happen to me. im glad yur in my life.

keep writtin....to read them makes me happy.

<333 k8.