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Ive never submitted any of my work anywhere, but i feel quite comfortably anonymous here so ill give it a shot. heres one of my poems off the top of my head(cant find the written version! scatter-brained artist!)

I sit with my back against the wall
the tears stream so easily now i neednt think at all
the mother sends raging winds at me to help me dry them away
but Melancholy overpowers her
even in the light of day

i close my eyes to hide my soul
i wait for darkness to arrive
enveloping me
swallowing me whole
and in its sinewy fingers grasp
my mind
the ones upon those giant hands which now control us all

so stop these tears as you stopped this heart
from pumping loving warmth
and halt this futile fault
that i used believe was love
just shut it down
end this searing pain
turn me into stone

stop this river flowing
endlessly from my open sore
cease my mind from knowing
so i dont feel
anymore

now that ive written it looks so amateurish. guess you gotta start somewhere...
oh well enjoy!

i liked it ....welcome to dark whispers ..you will be fine here....

love it, good job. hope to see more soon. welcome to the forum. i think you will do well here.

deadly

You are a great poet and welcome to the forum.

thanks guys you've been kind. more coming soon. lick your lips in tasty anticipation...

Wonderful work of art.
I really like it, and hope to see more soon!

Peace~
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If mothers chastizement doen't dry tears perhaps the person who gave you the reason to cry in the first place will end your sorrows.

Heh.

Find someone who will give you life where he gave you death.

Then kiss your mother for caring.

Very descripive.

Feed us more.

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i liked and it wasnt amateurish it was good