Marilyn_LaVey
Jan 20 2003, 10:22 AM
i could just copy and paste my poems gradually, but i simply cannot be bothered, sorry candidates, so here is a link to my poetry page on my website +
http://www10.brinkster.com/lughlavey/poetry.htmlenjoy my unenlightened droogs...
Marilyn_LaVey
Jan 21 2003, 04:05 AM
thank you, but i am considering changing the layout, not content, purely layout.... it is too bare....
i appreciate all comments....
keep them coming plz..
Nische
Jan 21 2003, 05:03 AM
† Untitled Trust †
Lugh LaVey
I speak these words, to decieve your trust
To impail your wounds that once were fresh
To tear your soul, a depiction of your suffering
Every word said, is a drop consumed
An array of evil, is the puddle within
Drowning your light, for the darkness to compose
The wounds are open, and your regret is the trail
Your weakness is my gift, for I now hold you
To teach your soul that all is empty
Your strength lies beneath, what you have met
Trust is cut as you lay alone
I think they're beautifull.. I read them all and I especially liked this one. Keep up the good work, love..
NN
Marilyn_LaVey
Jan 21 2003, 05:30 AM
thank you gorgeous... i appreciate it....
Divine Sin
Jan 21 2003, 10:22 AM
As usual my friend, u have a way with words that takes the breath away....sucj dark, mysterious beauty u write of....
Marilyn_LaVey
Jan 21 2003, 10:25 AM
i thank you indeed sin....
Zeodus
Jan 22 2003, 11:57 PM
Marilyn_LaVey.. you indeed possess a mysterious presence my friend.. and I must say your poems are quite thought provoking. Keep up the good work, and I would like to see more of your work if at all possible?..
Marilyn_LaVey
Jan 26 2003, 08:31 AM
my creations will continue Zeodus, and i shall let you know when the site is updated with new poems.... and thank you for your comments...
Animal
Jan 26 2003, 03:07 PM
wow... such great poems... Great Job Marilyn... Keep up the good work!
Marilyn_LaVey
Jan 26 2003, 05:34 PM
thank you Animal, and i like your avatar....
the next creation is coming in 7 days......
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