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Marilyn_LaVey
i could just copy and paste my poems gradually, but i simply cannot be bothered, sorry candidates, so here is a link to my poetry page on my website +

http://www10.brinkster.com/lughlavey/poetry.html

enjoy my unenlightened droogs...
Marilyn_LaVey
thank you, but i am considering changing the layout, not content, purely layout.... it is too bare....

i appreciate all comments....

keep them coming plz..
Nische
† Untitled Trust †
Lugh LaVey

I speak these words, to decieve your trust
To impail your wounds that once were fresh
To tear your soul, a depiction of your suffering
Every word said, is a drop consumed
An array of evil, is the puddle within
Drowning your light, for the darkness to compose
The wounds are open, and your regret is the trail
Your weakness is my gift, for I now hold you
To teach your soul that all is empty
Your strength lies beneath, what you have met
Trust is cut as you lay alone


I think they're beautifull.. I read them all and I especially liked this one. Keep up the good work, love..
NN
Marilyn_LaVey
thank you gorgeous... i appreciate it....
Divine Sin
As usual my friend, u have a way with words that takes the breath away....sucj dark, mysterious beauty u write of....
Marilyn_LaVey
i thank you indeed sin....
Zeodus
Marilyn_LaVey.. you indeed possess a mysterious presence my friend.. and I must say your poems are quite thought provoking. Keep up the good work, and I would like to see more of your work if at all possible?..
Marilyn_LaVey
my creations will continue Zeodus, and i shall let you know when the site is updated with new poems.... and thank you for your comments...
Animal
wow... such great poems... Great Job Marilyn... Keep up the good work!
Marilyn_LaVey
thank you Animal, and i like your avatar....

the next creation is coming in 7 days......
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