Amy let a wisp of dark hair fall over her forehead as she concentrated on the road map. She could not believe she was so lost. Pushing her hair behind her ears, she cast her beautiful eyes around for a furtive glance at her surroundings. The rain pounded on the exterior of her small car, as the tinny sound of the ancient sterio system warbled. She quietly pondered how she got herself into this mess. A stirring from the passenger seat signalled that her travelling companion, who was, in essence, a hitchhiker, Tim was waking up. He slowly surveyed his surroundings, first the dark, dank lane they were parked in, then the angry, thundering sky. He checked the clock on the dashboard, pausing as he let his eyes be drawn up the slender length of Amy's exposed thigh. He wasnt exactly a stranger. Amy and Tim went to the same University, and lived in the same town. However, they did not know eachother prior to Uni, and upon overhearing Amy tell her classmates that she was intending to make the long journey to her home town this weekend, he prompty introduced himself, and bagged a ride. If Amy was honest, she was grateful for the company, as the long, dark country roads usually creeped her out, plus the petrol money was welcomed!
"Ok, we are officially lost." She admitted, defeatedly.
Tim's eyes twinkled as he took in her esquisite beauty, from the cutely furrowed brows, to the dowturned mouth, then to her ample breats rising up, and down again in time with her gentle breathing. But mostly he marvled at the fact that she had no idea how staggeringly stunning she was.
"I'm sure it's not that bad," he assured her as he caefully took the map from her slender (yet definately capable, he thought) hands.
Amy looked at Tim, for the first time in any great deapth. His dark, messy hair, his deep blue eyes...she suddenly sensed that she had been staring perhaps a little too long, and slid her eyes towards the floor. She was unable to resist the urge to take a glance at the impressive bulge in his equally scruffy jeans. Catching herself, she gave an inward blush. She had no idea what was wrong with her, she was a good, respectable girl. But ever since he stepped foot in her car, Amy felt such geat sexual tension between them that she had a hard job thinking of anything else. Thus finding herself lost, on a journey she knew like the back of her hand. It was sad to say that any man had this affect on her, but it was true. Amy shifted her weight, as her she felt her pussy heat up and start to throb. She slowly ran her mind over the scenario she had in her head ever since they left Uni, the scenario that had got her so heated earlier, that whilst Tim was sleeping, she had to pull into the petrol station, dash to the toilets, and get herself off.
In her scenario, they had gotten themselfs lost, and could not find thier way in the dark. This meant they had to stay in the car that night...
Suddenly, snapping out of her fantacy, Amy felt Tim's hand gently touch her thigh.
As if reading her mind, he gave her a hungry look, and said,
"Looks like we'll have to wait here, till it gets light, then?"

Amy took a few ragged breaths, as Tim continued to stroke her thigh. She wore a black skirt and shirt, seemingly conventional, but she had chosen this skirt specifically with this journey in mind. It had a long, thigh-high slit up either side and sufficiantly showed enough of her near perfect body, enough to make any man crazy. And Tim was no exeption. He knew she wanted him. He saw it in her eyes as he met her by the car, he saw in in her shaking hands as she reached to the glove compartment, blushing as she brused his knee. He saw it now, as she looked at him square in the eye with new found sexual confidence, and placed her hand on top of his.
By now, the rain had subsided, and Tim got out of the car. He went around to Amy's door, opened it and helped her to her feet. As she got to eye level with him, he pushed her against the side of the car, pressing thier groins together. Amy let out a shaky moan as she felt her pussy contract with pure wanton. He slowly rubbed his hard cock against her as she threw her head back in extacy. He traced a line of kisses along her bare neck toward her mouth. Amy, in he heat of the moment arched her back towards him, put her hands around the back of his neck and pulled him into a passionate kiss. As thier tongues found eachother, she grabbed his hand and trained it up her thigh. He obliged, taking his palm under the hem and working against her pussy, on the outside of her panties. Amy's groin tingled and twitched in a fit of lust. Tim slipped a finger beneath her lacy black underwear, finding her clit, and vigorously circling it, in a way that Amy definately liked. Tim pushed harder in her clit, moving in rougher circular mosions. Amy shook. It felt so like she was high. Her vision clouded as her whole body screamed for him. Just when she thought she could not feel any higher, he unexpectedly slipped his fingers fully inside her, making her her back curl backwards in extacy. He slowly pulled his fingers out slightly and drove them straight back home. Inside of her she felt him explore her, she felt him against her walls, she felt herself contract against his touch....

This story is beautifully written I cant wait to read more!!!!!!

Oh wow, thank you! This is my first ever post!
Dont worry, Part 2 is coming either later today or tomorrow.
Gems

Awesome I'll be waiting!

Cool. BTW thank you so much. Its so great to have support!

...Amy let out a moan. A low, gutteral moan. A moan so animal that she never thought she could muster.
Tim reached behind her and fumbled with the back door of her car, releasing it and pushing them both into the warmth. He pressed his body into hers.
Giving in to a new wave of passion he pulled them up to sitting position, and traced a finger down the length of her bare neck, pausing just at her top button, before looking into her eyes and taking the button in his teeth. Urged forward by her fingernails in his back, Tim himself became more animal as he tore each button off, one by one, revealing her black lacy bra. His hunger for her burned as he licked every inch of exposed flesh. Finally getting too frustrated with that bra of hers, pawing at it, and exposing her beautiful breasts, he let out a moan and cupped them with both hands. Amy winced as the cold air reached the tip of her nipples, making them even harder. They were soon warmed by the soft urgency of Tim's tongue. He gently took her nipple between his teeth, flicking the tip with his tongue. Tim sat fully upright and placed Amy straddling on top of him. Amy could feel his hardness pressing against her moist pussy, that was contracting with sheer hunger for him to fill her up. Tim slid both hands up her silky thighs, finding this mositness. Ripping her panties, freeing her to his touch. He fratically entered her with his fingers. She tensed, and lowered herself further onto his hands, thrusting urgently as the pressure built up inside her pussy. She could feel all of herself rubbing against him, from her clit, which was causing here sheer, wanton extacy, to his fingers deep insider her delving and thrusting further into her, bringing her to the peak. He plunged his hands deeper and faster, whilst she shakily rocked agaist him. Just before she reached her climax he withdrew his sticky hands, looking her in the eyes as she licked his fingers, sexily. Kissing him deeply, her hands found his zipper. She worked on it untill he was free of his denim restraints. Caressing him through his boxers, she felf him swell further to his touch. They grinned at eachother as she knelt in the footwell, sliding his underwear down as he lifted his hips towards her. she bent her head, and left a lingering kiss on the tip of his head. Clamping his cock in her mouth she rapidly flicked the tip with her tongue. She licked her way up and down his shaft. He thrust towards her, moaning.
She sucked along the large vein on the underside of his impressive manhood, stroking his balls as she did so. Shuddenly, without warning, she took him full in the mouth, sucking with such force that Tim felt lightheaded. He pushed himself in and out of her willing mouth, as she covered the length of him with her sweet saliva. After a few minuits she could feel him twitching, and moaning above her, and she new he was almost about to climax. She sucked him harder still, whilst pushing the front of her pussy into the side of the seat, getting herself off at the same time. She thrust urgently into the seat moving back and forth. She was getting off from this and they both new it. Tim grasped her ass and shoved her back and forth into the seat, and in turn back and forth onto his cock. She could feel the first of the warm bursts inside her mouth as she tried to cry out in extacy but couldnt. She swallowed it down, and continued to suck, completely wrapped in the pure lust...

Whoa....that was very good.
Anyway, we have a rule of only one thread per user, so I merged Parts 1 and 2.
(And in case you don't know yet, I am one of the Forum Admins)
Good work.

Oh, thanks! I am going to be posting further parts to this, can you tell me how to add it on to this thread (I'm new here :)

...Tim stroked the silky soft skin of Amy's thighs, circling his hands around and firmly gripping them, hauling her back on his lap. A small gasp escaped her lips as he kissed her deeply. Letting thier tastes mingle, the taste of thier juices, the taste of the purest instinct.
In an istant Tim had flipped her over so that she now lay under him, totally in his control. This pleased Amy as she curled her legs up and around his hips. He moved against her, slowly pushing her against the back seat. With each firm action Amy moaned a fratic moan, and Tim's breath quickened. Amy pushed her feet against his hips, forcing him to press harder into her. Tim put a hand on each arm rest, giving him the support he needed to slide his cock up and down against the top of Amy's pussy. This put pressure on her clit and took her breath away. As his pace quickened, Amy became frantic, steadying her self and putting her feet on each head-rest, allowing her to raise her hips towards his burning touch. Her vision started to cloud over as her legs turned to jelly at the prospect of this climax. She had never felt something this amazing, without penetration. But this was all to change. Tim took the tip of his head and slowly ran it along the lips of her pussy, teasing her. He then used it to circle her throbbing clit. Amy twitched with anticipation.
Tim teased her some more, sliding his cock into her welcoming moistness, then taking it out, just as fast. Amy gasped, grabbing his hips and forcing him down into her. With a loud moan, Tim delved deep inside her, grinding into her as far as he could. Picking up the tempo, he thrust into her with amazing force, causing her to cry out in a mixture of pleasure and pain. Moving his hips in a circular motion, making sure his cock pressed agains every single part of her in turn. Amy dug her nails in as she felt it rub against her G spot.
"There...Th-thats it" She rasped, with a shaky breath. Tim watched her face contort with pleasure as he found this spot, again, and again, thrusting and rubbing against it...

Wow. That is so...
Its artfull, is the only way I can describe it. Everything in the magazines is so impersonal. That one... its just wow. You are a very skilled writer. Not many people can write about sex as well as that. By all means, continue...

Aww, thanks. Its really great for me to get positive feedback like this as I have never really posted much of my writing anywhere before. Thanks x

What time is it on your side of the puddle? I'd do the math but I'm a lazy product of the american education system...

It is 10.20 am. I'm actually at work, lol. But obviously there are more important things to be done :)

tee hee hee hee...
its a quarter past 1 here in Alaska... anyways, I shouldnt hold you up from finishing that peice, lol. Or if you arent interested in that, do you think you could take a look at something I've written? I know this is a shameless plug on my part for a script I wrote, but I would like to know what people think about it before I start filming... I've only had 1 person read the damn thing...

untitled script

Yep, I have checked it out and commented :)
And, yeah you should be ashamed of you're major pluggage. Lol ;)

...Amy could feel herself coming to a climax. It was the most thrilling experience she had ever had. She felt as though she was being tipped over the edge of a cliff...she felt like she had the most amazing itch that she could not scratch. Arching her back, all of her limbs aching and writhing. She felt it rising up through her body and manifesting itself as a series of frantic moans. Tim could hear that she was ready, flinging his head back and letting all of himself go, deep inside her, an explosion, like fire throughout.
They both relaxed, catching thier breaths, as they steadied eachother.
Looking up at him through sooty lashes, Amy gave him a smile that told him the night was far from over.
Straddling him again, Amy started to foldle as grasp at her breasts. Following her lead, Tim took them each, in turn, into his mouth, licking and sucking them. Amy gave him another sexy look and took a long fingernail to her breast, tracing it along her silky, perfect skin, drawing blood as she did so. She slowly, carefully took her finger to her mouth, sucking off the blood that had collected there. Tim looked at her in awe...this girl was amazing. Amy bent and drew him into a long seductive kiss. He could taste her salty blood. Amy pulled away, bringing his mouth to her breast. Tim tongue found the incision, gently tracing along the cut. He let out a low moan as he started to suck. He could feel her blood, filling his mouth. The tangy copper taste meeting up with his own. dancing inside his body, melding and fusing to form an unstopable fire. Her blood, his blood. It was all the same now. He felt the stinging substance shoot through each of his viens, taking his body captive. He clamped to her breast harder, needing more of this. He could not understand what whas going on. A dull ringing in his ears started, as he fed his need for the fire they had created. Finally, he gave up all human resposes and gave into the urge to tear at her cut, giving more of her blood the free release it craved for. Biting into her breast with hunger, Amy moaned. Tim could not control himself. He felt her nails in his back, he felt them dig deeper. Then he realised he had felt them grow. Fighting all his urges, Tim tore himself away from her breast, looking, searching her eyes for the answer...what was going on?
"A-Amy?" He stuttered.
Amy drew a taloned finger to her crimson lips.
"Shhhhh" She said, soothingly,
as she sank her now developed canines into his neck...

Never get into a car with a beautifull woman you've never met before. Unless of course, you want wild, bloody sex with a vampire.

true.

...Tim felt the pain searing through him, racing, playing into all the dark corners of his being.
Amy locked her jaw and greedily drank, snaking her hand down Tim's exposed torso, and clasping at his cock. Feeling around, she noted that it was hard.
'This is definately one to keep for myself' she thought.
Tim could not understand his own body. By rights he was sure he should have passed out through sheer pain by now, but instread, the bittersweet feeling of being taken in was mingling with his damning lust for this woman. He stirred to her touch. He was already insanely aroused, but her soft hands caressed him in a way that told him that he was no longer his own. He belonged to her.
Eventually, he felt her fangs retract from his neck, and her nails shorten.
All that was left was her slow and deliberate licking.
Pulling away from him to look into his eyes, Amy saw a glint that was not there previously.
"This is what you were made for..." she said, before drawing him in to a passionate kiss, "Do you want to see everything I could show you?".
Uttering a low growl, Tim grabbed Amy, spun her around and pinned her to the back seat, by her wrists. She knew then that he was ready, infact he was nearly there without her help. All it would take was a drop of her blood at this stage...
Tim kissed Amy with a hunger that she knew only too well.
'This is it' she thought. However Tim was too caught up to notice. He kissed and licked his way down her naked body, pausing just before he reached her pussy. Amy splayed her legs in answer to his questioning tongue. Tim sucked at her clit, flicking it with his tongue, licking it with delight. Amy arched her back and thrust her self towards his lapping tongue, feeling fresh waves of pleasure wash over her. Tim probed him tongue deep into her, causing Amy to gasp as he bagan his exploration of her. Tim went on for some time, pleasing her, bringing her to the peak of her climax, then stopping to start all over again. He was enjoying being in control, working Amy into a frenzy. She could not take it anymore and, grabbing the back of his head, she forced his mouth back to her groin. Resting her feet on the head rests again, she worked herself up and down, forcing his tongue in and out. Just as she was about to orgasm, Tim drew himself up to her face, kissing her, leaving the lingering taste of her own sweet moistness on her lips. She was almost there. She thrust herself towards his now acessable cock, gripping him in the throws of passion. Tim finally granted her wish and entered her, driving his cock all the way home. Amy screamed in pleasure as he then granted her the ulimate wish. Clamping his jaws onto her neck, Tim fed on her familiar blood, making the final short leap. Pulling away from her neck, Tim looked Amy in the eyes as he continued to pump into her, at last, feeling her juices flow around him.
Slowly, he licked up the last of the blood from her neck, as she purred with satisfaction, for she knew he would be eternally greatfull.

End of part 1

Right, so basically I'm at the stage where I could go a few different ways with this now, and i'd like to know what anyone thinks.
should !:
Drop the whole idea and start a new?
Carry on with Amy's escapades...you know, see what, and who she does from here.
Or keep Amy and Tim together and they can go on a Spike and Dru type rampage?

Gems

Very nice.
I think you should continue on with her 'escipades'. Like I said, experiment with differant ideas. You can always bring back Tim in another story.
This person uses people for her own amusement. She'll most likeley keep him locked up in a basement or something...

I agree that was an awsome story. keep it going that way.
Rose

Wow that was a beasutiful story I think you should have them go on a murderess rampage but whatever you think is best!

wow. I'm totally speechless for words. I love how you made it look normal, like the little is to be expected and then BAM! ;x truely amazing.. I can't wait to read part 2!!!

luv,
krissi

:D Thanks everyone! I dont know what I'm going to do yet, but thanks for all you're comments!
Gem

Hmmm, Thanks for the ideas.

so would it be too foreward to request some lesbian erotica?
: blushes :

I dont know... I mean, I personally would not have a problem with it. I dont know how well I could write that tho. I dont wanna turn this into plain Porn. Lol.

good point.
cant say I didnt try, lol.

No, its not that. Its just, let me be honest:
I post my stuff on here becuase it's not the kind of stuff I would really post on my LJ. Also, I get a bit shy/nervous when people I actually know read stuff I write, wether it be songs, poetry, or stuff like this. So anyway, a friend of mine found this forum, and found my stuff. And I dont think it went down too well. Now Im starting to think that maybe it was a bit porn-like, just masquerading as normal writing. Dunno. guess it just knocked my confidence.

Thats completally understandable. None of my friends even know I go here...

Yeah, it's wierd, I guess I just feel like...a perv or something. I mean, just cos I write about something doesnt mean...
Do you get what I'm saying. Ok, say you knew me in 'real life' and then you saw I'd written stuff like that, what would you think? Would you go 'yuck' or would you be supportive of your friend?

Well, considering the majority of people I actually hang out with, I wouldnt really be that surprised. I think if its what you want to write about, there should be nothing stopping you. Its self expression.

*~*PoEtRy*~*


Styx.

It does not flow,
it only drifts.
To take your soul,
your spirit lifts.
The smell of death,
A sickly taste.
Repentance for
The life you waste.

WOW !! ! !! ! !! ! !! ! !! ...... thts really good , .....once agen wow ! , .....maybe you could submerge the murdering rampage idea in with their ' escipades ' ..... just an idea....cant wait to read more !

Oooh, why thank you. I dont really know what comes next. Waiting for a lightening bolt of inspiration. :D

wow..nice..I like your style..it seems so very close to my own

Aw, thank you. That is actually a huge compliment as I find you're writing amazing. I have been reading it alot lately, only now I'm a member, I can actually comment, Lol. :D

wow..well I am pleased to know that you actually read my words....they are just reflections of my thoughts and feelings...lol...well you are certainly welcome

Great *Grins*.
Yes I think you are definately a very skilled writer! :)

Wow this poem itselfs flows and paints a picture in my mind I love it I hope to see more soon!

Yay, thanks! :D

well, talented master worder...what can I say
when I can't find any words?
I read and fall...fall into the words, of yours
trapped as the eye of the beholder...your words are hard to let go of
that's why I hope to see more from you and your pen...//Yûi

Yes. Post more, damnit!
If you must, remove the link from your livejournal, and make up a new username so your friend's wont think you are a smut peddler, lol.

Yuui: Thank you...you have a most beautful way with words yourself, even just you're comments sound like poetry. Thank you!

Wylak: Lol, I honestly dont know what to do. I dont know if I have the inspiration to write any more of the previous story.! But I'm gonna try!

I suppose maybe I should quit hounding you like a creepy stalker, lol.
Just write as it comes to you. I understand the way writing can work... its almost like giving birth. That story was your baby. Do you want to have sex again? Hell no, your still sore from giving birth!

Er, sorry, what? LOL! Oh, I see, I get it. Very good analagy. Lol.
No and your not pestering, hun, I find it really encouraging. :D

Oh, alright.
Anything else you might have going through your mind?
What do you do for work?

Yeah, sorry. Im such filth. Lol.
I work for a company that procures valves for Oil rigs and and other oil related stuff. Im a buyer and contracts manager :D

Ahhh, so its pretty much just you, a computer, a spreadsheet, an order form, and probably a telephone, sitting in a cubicle?