Exodius
Nov 20 2004, 07:07 PM
Your Brains
Your Brains,
Delicious they are.
Ripping open you fucking skull should be a pleasure.
I take out your brains in big handfulls.
Slapping them into my frying pan.
Ever wonder what it would be like to eat your own?
Here!
I'm going to shove them in your fucking mouth.
Haha.
Fucking psychotic, right? WRONG!
Oh shit!
I forgot,
You can't chew them.
Self Mutilation
You make me laugh.
You think thos cuts are bad?
Shit,
You haven't seen anything yet.
Give me a machette,
I'll show you bad!
I'll cut your arms off!
Them shove them up your ass.
Can't eat now, can you?!
I'll give you "Self Mutilation"
But without the word "Self"!
Cutting you into pieces.
I'll sever your fucking skull,
And feed you to my dog!
Exodius
Nov 20 2004, 07:08 PM
Your Eternity
You say you're living an Eternity of pain.
You're a fucking liar!
One little break up...
Big fucking deal!
You think people care about your problems?
You're fucking wrong.
It's every man for himself.
Fuck you,
And your pain.
No one fucking cares.
Give it up.
Put a gun to your head.
Remember when I said I'd always be there?
Well, if you need help pulling the trigger,
You know who to call.
Lies
Your lies humour me.
Most would be overwhelmed.
Quit calling and saying you love me.
You're a fucking liar.
You call me emotional...
I think you're wrong.
I'll slit your throat.
Just like the rest.
It doesn't bother me,
So why press the issue any further?
Times up.
Give me my knife,
It's time to die mother fucker!
Exodius
Nov 20 2004, 07:09 PM
Fucked Over
You've just been fucked over.
Too bad.
Did you like my little scam.
I bet you did.
You like being hurt?
Oh,
You're going home to cut yourself?
Can I help?
I'm fucking you,
Just like you fucked me.
Bleed
Go ahead,
Cut yourself.
I want to watch you bleed.
Do you take requests?
Here's on for you:
Rip open your chest cavity,
And tear out your heart.
You like that don't you?
When you're dying of this action,
I'm goint to laugh, and piss on your chest wound.,
Laughing histerically.
Now I watch you truly bleed.
Exodius
Nov 20 2004, 07:10 PM
Potray
I potray your absent mind.
Filling you with lies.
Consider this a gift.
An early birthday present or something.
Feed me with your lies,
I'll cut you up.
This is no fucking game.
You're my bitch now.
Can you say:
OWNED!!
Truck
See truck.
Truck go fast.
100 m.p.h. straight into your ass!
Oops,
You're dead.
Hit and run mother fucker.
Exodius
Nov 20 2004, 07:10 PM
Anarchy
You think your god?
This is no anarchy.
All you are is an anchorite.
A stupid religious hermit.
Yes,
You heard me right.
The only god here is me!
My animosity rules all!
Who runs the anarchy now?
Anomaly
Irregular.
Abnormal...
Is that what you lable me?
Why not just call me anomaly?
Doesn't bother me.
I'll lable you dead in your sleep.
I'll hammer a nine inch nail into your fucking head!
It's 2 a.m. ...
What else should I do?
SaveMySanity
Nov 21 2004, 01:08 AM
WOW.......very impressive....extremely powerful as well.....I love it...
Exodius
Nov 22 2004, 09:44 AM
Thank you. I appreciate it.
hebz
Nov 22 2004, 10:07 AM
My fav is anarchy thats the best!!!!
Exodius
Nov 22 2004, 07:33 PM
Thank you, Hebz.
Psycho Deity
Nov 23 2004, 01:42 PM
kICK ASS!!!! EDGY! i LIKE IT ALOT!
RoseBud
Nov 23 2004, 01:46 PM
wow full of anger. Kinda Scared me. But that are awsome.
Rose
THEDUDE2
Nov 24 2004, 12:31 AM
You know if I was some sort of phsycologist, which I am not, I would probably say something deeply true and cutting about your poems, but since I am not, I laugh my ass off.
Truck, thats funny... If your a sick bastard like myself...Oh and by the way, I love the random threats, chest cavity... yeah, nice..
the dude abides
Exodius
Nov 24 2004, 06:53 PM
Thank you. I should have more coming when I get angry at someone, or feel like killing my mom or something.

Sick and twisted? Some what, yes... Ever blown up a kitten? That's fucking awesome!
Exodius
Nov 25 2004, 08:41 AM
Old Man
An old man once walked these streets,
He'd pick pocket everyone he'd see.
And one day,
He did his daily routine.
And then got shot in the head.
Now he's dead.
He payed for fucking with the wrong person.
It's time for a new assertion.
Deadlysoul
Nov 25 2004, 03:06 PM
i can feel your rage. i agree with THEDUDE2, truck was hilarious!!!
deadly :punk:
mentally_forsaken
Nov 25 2004, 04:24 PM
heh for a quick touch of something dark and odd i know just where to come. very original work. nice.
Exodius
Nov 25 2004, 09:24 PM
Thank you very much. You know, I don't think I've ever received this many complaiments before. On *****, the site I used to be on, I never recieved anything from any of the members... Maybe 2 or 3 comments if I was lucky.
Living_life_as_a...
Nov 25 2004, 10:01 PM
Your work is very dark yes expressive i love it. It amazes me how you can turn your anger around and put it into words.
Deadlysoul
Nov 26 2004, 08:56 AM
QUOTE (Eternal Lies @ Nov 25 2004, 09:24 PM)
Thank you very much. You know, I don't think I've ever received this many complaiments before. On *****, the site I used to be on, I never recieved anything from any of the members... Maybe 2 or 3 comments if I was lucky.
same thing was for me on the other sites. im doing a little bit better here. hey i like your signature.
deadly
Exodius
Dec 2 2004, 09:56 AM
I've got some new shit coming in after school today! Be prepared!
lyricallyrotting
Dec 2 2004, 11:46 AM
wow. i like your poems. i can feel the anger. are these all towards one person? or are they even towards a person at all? or just people in general? i really do like them. very strong.
~the silent lover
Exodius
Dec 2 2004, 09:19 PM
Stupid people in general. Emotionally attached as well.
Exodius
Dec 3 2004, 05:02 PM
Fulminate
I've found your foible.
You are not invincible.
I've found your weakness.
I'm going to fulminate you.
Do you realize what you're getting yourself into?
You've entered a void.
Exodus
You're left alone.
I seems everyones began an exodus.
I'm not free of killing you,
And not having a witness.
Tree cheers for a victory.
Both mentally and psychically.
Limb from limb.
I'll decapitate you with no remorse.
I couldn't have done it without the Exodus.
Exodius
Dec 3 2004, 05:07 PM
Departure ----Lyrics
Your departure has left me pleasure.
No more of your imcompetance.
I don't have to listen to your ramblings any longer!
My heart is free of the torture.
A bleeding heart has recieved it's medical attention!
Chrous
No more of your shit!
No more of your imcompetance.
Spit on you is what I do.
Pain is what I've given you!
A tortured sould now healed.
Left in the dark is how I want to be.
You've left me with no choice!
Now take your fuckign leave!
Chorus
I've felt as I never have before!
You took your leave,
Now let me be!
A departure so giving.
You dwell in a corner.
Every living memory now locked away!
When you die od depression,
I'll be there to piss on your fucking grave.
Keep in mind, I don't expect and good comments off these three. I thought they sucked.
RoseBud
Dec 3 2004, 05:07 PM
QUOTE (Exodius @ Nov 24 2004, 05:53 PM)
Thank you. I should have more coming when I get angry at someone, or feel like killing my mom or something.

Sick and twisted? Some what, yes... Ever blown up a kitten? That's fucking awesome!

awww...kittys
SaveMySanity
Dec 3 2004, 05:13 PM
I agree with rose about the kittie, i guess thats cause I have one but you know.....the whoel blowing up part of anything is pretty kool....love doing that. Blew up a thing of gasoline at our school once with some friends....and btw I like Exodus and Departure :)
Exodius
Dec 3 2004, 05:37 PM
I think you're a fool.

J/k I think they SUCK
adOrkable
Dec 4 2004, 12:31 PM
QUOTE (RoseBud @ Dec 3 2004, 05:07 PM)
awww...kittys

Hm. You should feel ashamed of yourself. Blowing up the innocent kittens when they done no wrong. *Hmph* Ever heard of animal cruelty?! Yeah, that's what that is. Lol. How can you do that? Blowing up other things is fine, but animals!? Sorry, I'm a really big animal lover and I cry when one gets hurt or dies. Because, I have a heart.
Well, anyway. I liked exodus, and departure. How can you think they suck? I don't believe that. I think they're good. And I was reading back at other works of your's too. They're all full of anger and rage. I like it.
SaveMySanity
Dec 4 2004, 11:56 PM
lol I know, the poor kitties, but either way the writing is still awesome
adOrkable
Dec 5 2004, 12:34 AM
I agree, although his hobbie is blowing up kitties, his talent in writing is still good.
krissi
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