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Exodius
Your Brains

Your Brains,
Delicious they are.
Ripping open you fucking skull should be a pleasure.
I take out your brains in big handfulls.
Slapping them into my frying pan.
Ever wonder what it would be like to eat your own?
Here!
I'm going to shove them in your fucking mouth.
Haha.
Fucking psychotic, right? WRONG!
Oh shit!
I forgot,
You can't chew them.



Self Mutilation

You make me laugh.
You think thos cuts are bad?
Shit,
You haven't seen anything yet.
Give me a machette,
I'll show you bad!
I'll cut your arms off!
Them shove them up your ass.
Can't eat now, can you?!
I'll give you "Self Mutilation"
But without the word "Self"!
Cutting you into pieces.
I'll sever your fucking skull,
And feed you to my dog!
Exodius
Your Eternity

You say you're living an Eternity of pain.
You're a fucking liar!
One little break up...
Big fucking deal!
You think people care about your problems?
You're fucking wrong.
It's every man for himself.
Fuck you,
And your pain.
No one fucking cares.
Give it up.
Put a gun to your head.
Remember when I said I'd always be there?
Well, if you need help pulling the trigger,
You know who to call.



Lies

Your lies humour me.
Most would be overwhelmed.
Quit calling and saying you love me.
You're a fucking liar.
You call me emotional...
I think you're wrong.
I'll slit your throat.
Just like the rest.
It doesn't bother me,
So why press the issue any further?
Times up.
Give me my knife,
It's time to die mother fucker!
Exodius
Fucked Over

You've just been fucked over.
Too bad.
Did you like my little scam.
I bet you did.
You like being hurt?
Oh,
You're going home to cut yourself?
Can I help?
I'm fucking you,
Just like you fucked me.



Bleed

Go ahead,
Cut yourself.
I want to watch you bleed.
Do you take requests?
Here's on for you:
Rip open your chest cavity,
And tear out your heart.
You like that don't you?
When you're dying of this action,
I'm goint to laugh, and piss on your chest wound.,
Laughing histerically.
Now I watch you truly bleed.
Exodius
Potray

I potray your absent mind.
Filling you with lies.
Consider this a gift.
An early birthday present or something.
Feed me with your lies,
I'll cut you up.
This is no fucking game.
You're my bitch now.
Can you say:
OWNED!!



Truck

See truck.
Truck go fast.
100 m.p.h. straight into your ass!
Oops,
You're dead.
Hit and run mother fucker.
Exodius
Anarchy

You think your god?
This is no anarchy.
All you are is an anchorite.
A stupid religious hermit.
Yes,
You heard me right.
The only god here is me!
My animosity rules all!
Who runs the anarchy now?



Anomaly

Irregular.
Abnormal...
Is that what you lable me?
Why not just call me anomaly?
Doesn't bother me.
I'll lable you dead in your sleep.
I'll hammer a nine inch nail into your fucking head!
It's 2 a.m. ...
What else should I do?
SaveMySanity
WOW.......very impressive....extremely powerful as well.....I love it...
Exodius
Thank you. I appreciate it.
hebz
My fav is anarchy thats the best!!!!
Exodius
Thank you, Hebz.
Psycho Deity
kICK ASS!!!! EDGY! i LIKE IT ALOT!
RoseBud
wow full of anger. Kinda Scared me. But that are awsome.
Rose
THEDUDE2
You know if I was some sort of phsycologist, which I am not, I would probably say something deeply true and cutting about your poems, but since I am not, I laugh my ass off.
Truck, thats funny... If your a sick bastard like myself...Oh and by the way, I love the random threats, chest cavity... yeah, nice..
the dude abides
Exodius
Thank you. I should have more coming when I get angry at someone, or feel like killing my mom or something. laugh.gif Sick and twisted? Some what, yes... Ever blown up a kitten? That's fucking awesome! laugh.gif
Exodius
Old Man

An old man once walked these streets,
He'd pick pocket everyone he'd see.
And one day,
He did his daily routine.
And then got shot in the head.
Now he's dead.
He payed for fucking with the wrong person.
It's time for a new assertion.
Deadlysoul
i can feel your rage. i agree with THEDUDE2, truck was hilarious!!!

deadly :punk:
mentally_forsaken
heh for a quick touch of something dark and odd i know just where to come. very original work. nice.
Exodius
Thank you very much. You know, I don't think I've ever received this many complaiments before. On *****, the site I used to be on, I never recieved anything from any of the members... Maybe 2 or 3 comments if I was lucky.
Living_life_as_a...
Your work is very dark yes expressive i love it. It amazes me how you can turn your anger around and put it into words.
Deadlysoul
QUOTE (Eternal Lies @ Nov 25 2004, 09:24 PM)
Thank you very much. You know, I don't think I've ever received this many complaiments before. On *****, the site I used to be on, I never recieved anything from any of the members... Maybe 2 or 3 comments if I was lucky.
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same thing was for me on the other sites. im doing a little bit better here. hey i like your signature.

deadly biggrin.gif
Exodius
I've got some new shit coming in after school today! Be prepared! laugh.gif
lyricallyrotting
wow. i like your poems. i can feel the anger. are these all towards one person? or are they even towards a person at all? or just people in general? i really do like them. very strong.

~the silent lover
Exodius
Stupid people in general. Emotionally attached as well.
Exodius
Fulminate

I've found your foible.
You are not invincible.
I've found your weakness.
I'm going to fulminate you.
Do you realize what you're getting yourself into?
You've entered a void.



Exodus

You're left alone.
I seems everyones began an exodus.
I'm not free of killing you,
And not having a witness.
Tree cheers for a victory.
Both mentally and psychically.
Limb from limb.
I'll decapitate you with no remorse.
I couldn't have done it without the Exodus.
Exodius
Departure ----Lyrics

Your departure has left me pleasure.
No more of your imcompetance.
I don't have to listen to your ramblings any longer!
My heart is free of the torture.
A bleeding heart has recieved it's medical attention!

Chrous

No more of your shit!
No more of your imcompetance.
Spit on you is what I do.
Pain is what I've given you!

A tortured sould now healed.
Left in the dark is how I want to be.
You've left me with no choice!
Now take your fuckign leave!

Chorus

I've felt as I never have before!
You took your leave,
Now let me be!

A departure so giving.
You dwell in a corner.
Every living memory now locked away!
When you die od depression,
I'll be there to piss on your fucking grave.



Keep in mind, I don't expect and good comments off these three. I thought they sucked.
RoseBud
QUOTE (Exodius @ Nov 24 2004, 05:53 PM)
Thank you. I should have more coming when I get angry at someone, or feel like killing my mom or something. laugh.gif  Sick and twisted? Some what, yes... Ever blown up a kitten? That's fucking awesome! laugh.gif
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awww...kittys crybaby.gif
SaveMySanity
I agree with rose about the kittie, i guess thats cause I have one but you know.....the whoel blowing up part of anything is pretty kool....love doing that. Blew up a thing of gasoline at our school once with some friends....and btw I like Exodus and Departure :)
Exodius
I think you're a fool. laugh.gif J/k I think they SUCK
adOrkable
QUOTE (RoseBud @ Dec 3 2004, 05:07 PM)
awww...kittys crybaby.gif
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Hm. You should feel ashamed of yourself. Blowing up the innocent kittens when they done no wrong. *Hmph* Ever heard of animal cruelty?! Yeah, that's what that is. Lol. How can you do that? Blowing up other things is fine, but animals!? Sorry, I'm a really big animal lover and I cry when one gets hurt or dies. Because, I have a heart.

Well, anyway. I liked exodus, and departure. How can you think they suck? I don't believe that. I think they're good. And I was reading back at other works of your's too. They're all full of anger and rage. I like it. biggrin.gif
SaveMySanity
lol I know, the poor kitties, but either way the writing is still awesome
adOrkable
I agree, although his hobbie is blowing up kitties, his talent in writing is still good. biggrin.gif

krissi
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