Darkness is creeping
Over shadowing
The sun goes down to a blood red moon
Haunting howls of doom
Taint the silence
The sense of coming violence
Leaves frail flesh crawling
Deep chiming of a cruel bell
From the place were evil dwell
Darkness spreading from the fallen church
Evil once buried rising
The shadow forever reaching
Clawing across ground bathed in blood red light
Leaving nothing but darkness behind and nightmares before it

That is really good!
Brutaly beautiful is how I would describe it.
I really like it.
Hope to see more soon.

Peace,
MourningAngel...
:ph34r:

Lost poet
Lost in his ways
Left with nothing to gain
Tried to believe in so many things
Nothing came true to him
But the miles that show on his face
Lost poet
Lost in his ways
Bearer of sad stories
Of a life so bitter
Nothing came true to him
But the tears that he cried
Lost poet
Lost in his ways
Gave up on life
Put the noose around his neck
Nothing came true to him
But the way out he took

Hi there, what you have here seems to be some good stuff, I especially liked the one about the poet, very nice. I hope there will be more to come from you to read....^_^

Saronin

pretty creative stuff

*two thumbs up*

very nice. i love it! very beautiful!! can't wait to see more.

So many pieces of broken dreams
They lie littered on the floor
Like the pieces of a broke mirror
I can see parts of me in reflection
Traped in each in its own little hell's
I try to pick them up in my hands
In vain I cut myself trying to hold onto them
Cutting deep inside my skin
Splinters of dreams causing me pain
That I can never let go
As the blood pools in the sea of shattered dreams

good stuff ......loved lost poet.....poets are such strange creatures.....

oooo very nice work. i tryed to pick a favorite part but i love all of it. great job!

deadly

I like them all but the last one was the best...very good!

*waiting for more*

deadly

“ The Truth In The Lies”

Hiding behind his happy disguise
He is hurting inside
Always says he’s fine
But behind the lies
All he does is cry

Every time at night
He holds his hands held tight
Praying that this could all just end
But he has no way of knowing its just begun
His dreams have turned to nightmares
The after affect of his loving affection

For her

Thru all of this he is broken
Shattered he claws for breath choking
His sweet runs cold and his skin is clammy
He is half way dead
But in his mind he is half way free

i loved it! i can relate to it in so many ways, well if you change the hes to hers and the her to him lol. but anyway, i loved it, hope to see more soon.

deadly

Walk with me thru weakness and depravity
Follow the dream
Let me lead, I will take the point
Throw my soul into the fires of hell
To stand at the gates of heaven
Now we bleed
Follow me
Be damned to are own deaths if the need be
We would die for the ideal
The dream given form
Draw thy sword
Raise it high
Knights of A new dawn we shell be
Now we shell bleed for are creed
Follow me now as the dreams die
Look now as the mothers cry
As are life’s gets thrown a thunder
Tossed a side like useless plunder
Sorry days filled with sorrow
Looking like there was no tomorrow
Followed me to your death you did
I see in lifeless eyes you can’t forgive
Chased with me a dream
And we bleed
Living a nightmare full of pain
Watching as the souls fly away
As life gives out and dreams fall
Now we have bleed are last
Dieing for the creed
Upon are honor did are souls go to rest
Are faith was proven
Are life’s are forfeit
To the dream in which we believed
And died to follow

The truth in these words sting
It burns me now as I begin screaming
You are the one who give me all of this
Now you are the one that takes it all away
Everything but what I hold in my heart
Trying to believe in the words that you say
Now it is coming out in the mad rage
I leave etched upon this page
Leaving me Powerless
Trapped inside the Fold
Because I can’t stop
I can’t stop the flood
The outpouring of nightmares
Pools of blood
The fanciful dreams
White flowers and a quiet forest
The focusing, reshaping
Of who I am behind these eyes
By the gentle touch
The love you gave me
Now taken away
Leaving me lost in the images
Dreams of happiness
Slipping into hunger nightmares
With every spiteful word you say
Struggling to keep my head
Against the out rush
Pulling me
Tell it fills my lungs
Taking away my breath
Then the madness lets go
The mad pounding to soft hums
A gentle melody and I rest
Bathing in the beauty
Of my last moment
Remembering the time’s I was with you
And you were in my arms
Then it just smashes back to reality
As my heart beats keeping time
Tell my last bit of breath gives out
Fumbling downward in the release
No more struggle
Just peace

very nice
deadly

Where your teeth touched me it still feels right
The hole in the neck that I still bleed
Pouring out my love tell I'm dry
As you soak in my pain
And take all my love can give you
I'm so tired I cant stand anymore
How can emptiness weigh so heavily
Collapse as it pulls me down
So little can save me
Cut into your veins and bleed for me
Let me taste your love across my lips
Feel it burn across my tongue
Fill the emptiness inside
Give me the strength to stand
In are love now eternal
blessed by your vampire kiss
And fade away together into the night
Under the moonlight