Heres one of my faveourite poems ive written, hope u like it.

We walked through,
And saw you,
Standing there alone.
You reached out your hand,
To welcome us home.
Your pale complexion,
That tortured your soul.
Your feelings so simple,
So complex,
So cold.
The sun is so bright,
We can see through your eyes,
And the gothic portrait makes a good disguise.
Scrawling your name on it so we see,
The portrait you painted was writen for me.

yes..this is nice..complexin a story..but the words say so much

Thank you very much. heres another poem

Angel

Riding through my nightmares,
I watch the angels die,
And I know I’m not one of them,
I laugh in the trees of time.
I lie awake dreaming,
Of all the things to come.
I walk outside,
And see you there.
My dieing angels gone.

awww...thats so sad..very well written poem though..good imagery

I Like it Here

"The age of grace,
Returns my faith."
He whispers softly to me.
His lipstick fades,
And so does my minds,
And he doesnt know,
I like it here.
New people will come,
And they're locked up in chains,
Like the rest of us,
Crying, and screaming for life,
And still I will stay,
Because he doesnt know,
I like it here.
He unlocked my chains,
And took me away,
From this torture I need,
To keep me awake,
And still I will stay,
Because he doesnt know,
I like it here.

thats my favorite part. im not quite sure why but thats my favorite part. well i guess it reminds me of someone. well anyway, i like your art. i like angle the best.

This poem was written when I was very unhappy, and felt like everyone thought i was pretending to be unhappy. This was probably one of the most horrible time of my life.

The Special Girl

I'm messed up,
But you don’t want me to be,
You wanna be the only one,
The only fucking special girl,
And some times I feel like dieing,
Just to make you feel I’m wrong,
Sometimes I wanna kill you,
Cause you don’t even know I'm gone,
and maybe I’m boring,
You fucking self obsessed cow,
But thats cause you won't let me be,
A messed up little girl.

Wow, remarkably well written work, aI wish my writing could be so creative, all mine seems to have the same message in it. I hope you post more, I really really like the angel one, and I like it Here. I hope you post more so I can read more. :)

The poem "I like it here" I enjoyed that very much.

Rose

Im very happy that so many of u like that one, its probably my favourite one ive written.

Raven

Raven wings the blood will stain,
Hell it burn and rots in pain,
You taunt me telling me my name,
Talking passed me die in shame,
This raven will not live to long,
Burning black and flying strong,
Stolen emotions give me stength,
To fly away with blood stained wings.

I like all of them but this one really stands out to me. *huggles*
Rose

i think this one stands out so much cause it is a very angry poem, unlike the rest which are all nice and pretty lol

heres another not so happy one lol called I hope...

I Hope......

I hope that hell is painful,
And I hope you end up there.
I hope that you are playful,
'Cause he'll swallow you my dear.
I hope that you like music,
'Cause he'll play tunes on your bones.
I hope you like the sound of
His victims screams and moans.
I hope you learn a lesson
When he tears apart your skin.
I hope you take away with you
What happens when you sin.
I hope you know the meaning of
Friendship never dies.
I hope he gotthe point across
That friends would never lie.

I Hope He Laughs

I want to die
And i hope he laughs
I hope he sees my pain and laughs
The greatest sight he'll ever see
And only will he remember me when
He needs something to laugh about
Something to stop his pain
The pain that I now feel
The pain that makes him laugh

These are some song lyrics I wrote, as you can probably see I cant really write lyrics but I try anyway.

Burning me

My feelings burning me deep,
I cannot sleep,
I need to find my home,
My heart is corroding in me,
And I cannot see,
Where i can be alone.

There was a place for you and me,
Where dark could not see and
The light was all around.
Then you appeard in the dark,
And lighted my heart,
And made it all so clear that,

My feelings are burning me deep,
And I cannot sleep,
I need to find my home,
My heart is corroding in me,
And I cannot see,
Where i can be alone.

Theres nothing left for me here,
You've all disapeared,
And I dont care at all.
All I ever wanted from you,
Is you to be true,
And leave me here to die cause,

My feelings are burning me deep,
And I cannot sleep,
I need to find my home.
My heart is corroding in me,
And I cannot see,
Where I can be alone.

And I know you've all been through this hurt,
But you'll see theres nothing good about me,

My feelings burning me deep,
I cannot sleep,
I need to find my home.
My heart is corroding in me,
And I cannot see,
Where I can be alone.
My feelings are burning me deep,
And I cannot sleep,
I need to find my home.
My heart is corroding in me,
And I cannot see,
Where I can be alone.

your stufv is awesome i like it keep it up

The Graveyard

The pain and suffering is ours,
And these marks they are my scars.
The normals still need to evolve,
But these are problems we wont solve.
We take childrens mentalities,
As stranges are normalities.
I feel for you, I really do,
But am I me? and is that you?
My skin it burns when come near,
Because my feelings dont appear.
The graveyard is our sacred place,
The darkness hides my missing face.
The look that almost killed your son,
He'll spit on you in years to come.
When the world was in black and white,
And killing you was still a fight.
Now i'm wishing you weren't dead,
But meaningless and empty instead,
My broken but healing heart,
Sadly now falls apart,
Now I'm lieing in my grave,
With other lives they couldnt save.
The graveyard is our sacred place,
The darkness hides my missing face.

very nice, i loved it :icon2:

lovely....


Lesa..

Just What I've always Wanted

This village is a place no one comes,
My minds been used and left,
To shatter in the winters breeze,
And end up with the rest.
And as you thought,
The goblins will come,
And give you something pretty to be,
But I will avoid,
This beautiful toy,
And take whats given next.
This evil trail of heart-felt pain.
You torture me the best,
Like nothing else you've ever felt,
The goblins will now feast.
This village is a place no one comes,
My minds been used and left,
Just what I've always wanted,
To die here all alone.

my favorite parts:

But I will avoid,
This beautiful toy,
And take whats given next.
This evil trail of heart-felt pain.
You torture me the best,

My minds been used and left,
Just what I've always wanted,
To die here all alone.

i really like those parts!

deadly

Thank you :10: , i rly like that poem, and for some reason i was reading great expectaions when i started writting it lol.

great poem and i love the picture...u have to post some more poems

your welcome *wating for more*

deadly

i like the graveyard poem ....its good

Cry

Black tears fall from her eyes,
You will not see her when she cries,
But when shes dieing will you see,
The darkness inside her for me.
She tries to hide her bleeding tears,
Shes dieing but she has no fears,
Just regrets and reasons why,
You never get to see her cry.
now she's gone,
I say goodbye,
Now and forever,
She will cry.

i like it a lot! it reminds me of me, i wont let anyone see me cry. can't wait for more

deadly

If u dont like swearing dont read this lol
The Devil's Gone

Go kill yourself,
You fucking whore,
And burn your soul out even more.
With devils dreams,
Their hearts are torn,
You'll find your childs been reborn,
Into a laugh of painful tears,
Into a cry your soul regrets.
This isn't why I came here,
So i could cry and bruise in fear.
You call me wrong,
You fucking cunt,
Go burn in hell,
I know I can't,
Inside your mind,
Your feelings strong,
Against my birth,
NOW I AM GONE.

Bleeding Girl

Come back to me please,
Bleeding girl,
That is me,
You've seen me right?
You've seen my face,
I'll hide it but it's hard,
In my corner alone,
Sitting down is the main thing,
In my corner alone,
Away from my judgement,
Away from my home,
I was a nightwalker,
And that is myself,
It's not that bad here,
She wont see my face,
But maybe thats better,
This heartbreak is torn,
I'm bleeding now,
I guess its my home.

Crucifixion

You feel yourself falling,
As they rip appart your skin,
The blood drips into your eyes,
And crucifies,
And burns inside,
And never lets you in.
You feel yourself calling,
Praying for my life,
But careing for anothers pain,
Is not the same,
Is not like you,
So stop it right away.
You feel yourself dieing,
Crying out it pain,
Dance on your grave,
In happiness,
Emotionless,
The end is very near.

very nice, i like the devils gone, and crucifixion the best.

deadly

wow. This one got to me. I've read your poems, and I loved them all but this one stuck out at me. This would have to be my favorite, along with graveyard.

love,
krissi

Immortal Dreams

On his flesh of white,
He wears black sleaves,
In the shadows it stains,
So his arms can bleed.
He loves me so,
He'll kill me now,
He drink my blood,
Now it's my turn.
Our immortal dreams,
Our candles bleed,
In our sacred place,
You'll hear us scream.
My last words passed,
Through his lips,
My last goodbye,
His last kiss.
They found us in,
Our sacred place,
As the candles burnt out,
And out bodies bleed.

Calling me Closer (Angel)

I look out off the window,
And I see the people cry,
I wonder what’s going on,
As all my feelings die.
As I walk through the graveyard,
I hear the whispered voice,
And I feel your breath on me,
Like a thousand piercing knives.
Calling me closer,
And like a child to the flame.
It burns me deeply,
As I fly away in shame.
And up here with the angels,
I don't fit in at all,
Because they're all dieing,
As I'm chewing on their souls.

Taste in Men

I've not had a man's kiss for days,
Do you think they notice?
Do you think they pay attention?
Can they see us go to play?
I try to hide you,
But they see your reflection.
I have not cried this much for days,
Because I'm happy,
Because I hide my feelings.
Can they see something in you?
Could you love me?
Could you change your taste in men.

Fake Little Child
I'm not your fake little child anymore,
You can't dress me up or wear me down.
I'm not your pretty girl no more,
You can't feel me,
I'm not yours.
So this fake little chile won't kill for you,
This child won't pay or die for you,
Won't hunt for your own selfish needs,
I'll be herself,
For all that means.
I can't feel pain,
I can't be bought,
I don't need you no more,
I can not die,
I am reborn.

Glass Butterfly

He's a glass butterfly,
Dancing in the rain,
So delicate,
I say,
"Come sit with me today."
He's my vision of perfection,
Flying passed with wings of gold,
So calming,
So close,
Please talk to me again.
He's everything I've dreamed of,
He's the light that guides my way,
So near,
So far,
But in my heart he'll stay.
He's my glass butterfly,
Dancing in the rain,
So beautiful,
So sure,
I'll love him more each day.

Hi I really like your work
I liked Calling me Closer (Angel) a lot!!!!!

thank you so much and thank you everyone else who's left a possitive coment. It makes me so happy, alot of ppl say that my stuff is rly bad coz im so young so ppl sayin im good means alot thank u very much
Fred(thegirl)x

Ghost

I think you may know,
That my heart is alone,
So will you talk to me?
Can you tell me your secrets?
Can you tell me your dreams?
They think I'm crazy,
But you see my hearts not broken,
Just my minds a little torn,
And my ghost will see to you,
He'll make you feel right at home.
Can you tell me your name?
And maybe some day,
Why you torture me?
My hearts opened and left,
The stains cover the rest,
Or aren't they still here?
When you're gone it leaves a mark,
And people see me fall apart,
And i know you do not see me,
Like I saw you from the start.
I think you may know,
That my heart is alone,
They think I'm crazy.

This is the first poem I wrote its about my family and i wrote it on christmas day.

Inside My Head
I hear the laughter form my room,
I scream inside my head,
But I never say a word out loud.
I hear them talk about me from room,
I cry inside my head,
But I never let a drop fall from my eyes.
I hear the screams from my room,
I die inside my head,
But I stay alive to everyone else.
:blowup:

Passion
I am a man who has left his women,
And taken their child as a sick punishment.
I'm a woman who does all she can,
To show her hearts beating as fast as a mans.
I am a man who was killed all alone,
Growing my hair to show I'm feminine.
I evoke the evolution of the man,
A I am he who was evoked by the evolution.
To assume, to imagine, to imply, to expect,
To inspire with foolish or short-lived passion.

Love, love, love the new poem its pure brilliance!!! Keep writing! love yaz xxxx

:24: thank ya

I stand alone and watch her,
She tears apart my skin,
I see her cut into my heart,
She doesn't want me here.
I lie alone bleeding,
It steins the things I see,
But clear to me as ever,
I see her make me bleed.
Daddy come and catch her,
Mommy stop my tears,
You'll still let her torture me,
Until I disappear.

Heres part of a (very angry) song I wrote...

Slaughter

I know that you need me,
To help you see your pain,
To scar your inner-self,
To help you fucking bleed.
You stear at me,
And say you are alive,
But without me,
You will DIE
As you
Slaughter the FLAME,
You hurt me AGAIN,
SLAUGHTER THE FLAME.

i love your new work! hope to see more soon!
deadly