Hey,
I'm not all that good at poems but I'm hoping I'll get better.
:angel:
Rose of Life and Death

yey i get to be the gfirst tp post on you thread. Go me cant wait to read your stuff
Rose
Welcome honey you will love it here and never want to leave.

I hide my eyes as I cry, I don't want their sympathy, It hurts me worse than their teasing, I want to run away but someone has chained me in place. i can't move, i can't speak, I can't do anything but weep.

No worries sis, you's do fine here. ^_^

Saronin AKA Boggsy

Thanx for the support! I really appreciate it!

Hhhhmmm, not bad, not bad at all. A little short, but it gets the point across. Keep it up Sis ^_^

Boggsy

yes i agree it is very well writen. I cna understand the pain good job hon.
Rose aka Jenny

Thanx I have found that my poems are either too long or too short. It's strange.

no such thing as to long or too short. Poetry is poetry.
Jenny

short sweet and very good hun. sometimes long wordy poems arent good because its easy to loose the point in all those words,..so those words are good not really words at all,..jus a blob of letters that might appear to formw words,.....*rambles on incoherently*



oh yea back to my point,..very good work hun

I hear a voice as it calls my name, it's barely a whisper on the wind I wish to follow it to see who calls, but you grab my arm and tell me no that it's a trick the voice is lying. You tell me this but the voice is knawing at me, I have to listen. I break free of your grasp and run, run as far as the voice will take me. It takes me to a cliff that falls into the ocean, then I hear the last call, "Come Dear, and end it"

Thanx I think you all are just being too nice to me. But I don't mind.
:angel:

not nice jus ask anyone here,..im the meanist badist,..angriest,...*breaks off in laughter

That was interesting........My's didn't realize you had such stuff in your head Sis.......shows what my's knows -_-; At any rate, it's still good ^_^

Boggsy

aww *hugs you* That one was wow. *hugs you again*
Jenny

Yea, but hey, no one knows everything.

Thanx *hugs back* lol

feeling left out in the hugs department....*hugs everyone

They say that life is a game so what do you play with this game that you're given? Do hide, and hope they will play around you? Or do you jump right in the middle of the board and play your way?
What to choose, that is the real game.

Ohhh...i sorry Willow *huggles*

Damn straight you tell them sisiter. I really like that one. It speaksthe truth.
Jenny

Thanx

it ok im easily over looked lol....*hugs back*
i liked that one,..a choice indeed......screw them all and play ur game right through

I'm glad you liked it.

i did i did i realy did

Right on Sis, My's knew you had talent, but my's guess my's didn't realize how much.......Keep it up ^_^

Boggsy

i agree with the talent part...but the rest of the sentence confuseded me,...why u keep saying 'my's' that was too many 'mys' in a sentence,...my head is about to *explodes*
lol

I'm falling into the darkness, I'm hurt and numb.
I want to cry but the tears won't come,
my heart closes itself, frozen with hurt,
I don't care that I'm falling,
I'm not afraid,
I knew that it would happen I just didn't know when,
I see your face so very clearly, in the dark,
Even now you laugh at me for the fool that I had been,
I hear another sound though, a familar sound annoying though it is,
I wake up to find it's my mother waking me up for another day of painful life.

I like that one it reminds me of my school days. Wow bad memorise..
Jenny

thanx :bunny000:

Actually i'm surprised, i could write poems. :shy:

You's no worries bout that Willow, tis just how my's is at da moment ^_^

Dat was good one Sis, my's knows what you's feelin in dat one, all too well my's knows.

Boggsy

well honey all is.. Is what is in your heart. And you do it so well.
Jenny

yes i liked that one as well..very good.

*grins* ok hun if u say so so shall it be

I sit alone and wonder where the time has gone,
What happened to the child that I once was,
You took her away from me,
You hid her somewhere,
Why did you take her?
She was persious to me,
She made me remember,
Who I used to be,
she made me remember,
What it's like to be loved.

awww *huggles* she is still there deep dpwn. good one all girls go trew that i know that i did.
Jenny

ditto i luved it very good,....yup so did i,...its not final till ur mom calls u a slut,....for me at least

Tis good, specially the song that goes with it. ^_^

Boggsy

lol thanx but if it's a phase then it's a long one for me *smiles*

In time love it does end. Promise
Jenny

I used to ask what it meant to be loved,
I never knew that love could be so cruel,
I learned my lesson, well,
You can never tell what love, will do,
Love has the power,
To hurt or heal,
Love, choose to hurt me,
I will never be the same,
All I can do is hold my head up high,
And hope that the world,
Won't see my scars.

i really like this one. I have been there sorry that you had to go trew that a such a young age,
Jenny

I sure hope so....:angel:

It's ok....life goes on.....*smile*

When you think of love,
What do you think of?
Do you think of a waterfall,
torenting over the rocks,
into an endless pool.
Does it feed a river?
Where does the river go?
Does it go into your heart,
giving life to hope,
or does it lead it hate,
inside your soul to grow?
Let me know today,
before you go away,
and leave me here alone.
What do you think of Love?

what do i think about love .......well it is one of the greatest feelings in the world untill you lose it.. i really love that one. It makes you wonder
Jenny

yea really.....*smile*

That's interesting, especially the time you posted that....very interesting....

Boggsy

lol sorry i didnt think about that
Jenny