Alright i imagined afi preforming this one,well their vocals,caps is yelling,lower is davey casually singing and ( ) is the band in unison caps and lower applies.please tell me if you like it and please use your imagination to get the best results-mookey-

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the band was playing
the people were moshing
i stood back to wait just watching
she came out and pulled my hand
took me closer toward the band

she looked pretty
dancing around me
i stood back smiling slightly

i looked at her eyes
she looked at mine
i just knew there was love to find

the band was gone
we were walking
cracking jokes while we were talking

she played flirty games
unaware i didn't know her name
i just knew she was my flame

her eyes were blue
oh how they shone
remembering them
i feel so alone

she held my hand
and leaned on me
that's when i knew we were meant to be

she kissed my nose
and said goodbye
later that night she would die
(MURDER SUICIDE!)

oh how i dream
(oh how i dreamed)
of my midnight girl
(of my midnight girl)
oh how i yell
(oh how i yell)
for my midnight girl
(my midnight girl)

OH HOW I YELLED
OH HOW I CRIED
IF I WERE THERE SHE WOULND'T HAVE DIED
(oh my midnight girl)
oh my midnight girl
(i love you)
I LOVE YOU
(i miss you)
I MISS YOU
(all i wanna do is hold you and kiss you)

OH MY MIDNIGHT GIRL!
(MY MIDNIGHT GIRL)
I LOVE YOU
(I LOVE YOU)
I MISS YOU
(I MISS YOU)
ALL I WANNA DO IS HOLD YOU AND KISS YOU
(ALL I WANNA DO IS HOLD YOU AND KISS YOU)
(OH MIDNIGHT GIRL,YOU WERE THE ONE,I ONLY FEEL SORROW NOW THAT YOU'RE GONE!!!!)

oh my god
i think i'm going to be sick
get away
i think i need some air
get a bag
where's you're trash
i need to use a toilet!!!

oh my god
I drank too much
and don't think i don't know it
in a while
my vomit's gonna show it!!!

gimme a bag,!!!
gimme you're trash!!!
it's gonna come out
my vomit's gonna show it!!!

help me up
i need to leave the room,
look at this mess
some one get a broom
sit me down i need to get some air
sit me anywhere
i don't really fucking care

oh my god,i feel like crying
i can't really hold the vomit in
oh god i'm really trying
holy shit it's blood coming out
it's gagging me i cannot scream or shout

blacking out
turning blue
no one has a clue
about what to do

distorted vision
Asphyxiation

cannot help but close my eyes
faintly hearing melancholy cries
they're shaking me
up and down
upon my chest
they don't know to pound.

BLACKING OUT,CLOSING EYES,DON'T WORRY EVERYONE DIES!!!!

death in my eyes
just looking at you
waiting to see
what you're gonna do
I want to kill you
right here and
right now
i'm just contemplating how

maybe a knife
it might be too messy
dragging your body
they might detect me

straight to your throat
or maybe your chest
pondering which
will make pain the best

maybe a bat
hit you in your head
keep on swinging
until your dead


maybe a gun
and shoot you in the eye
watch you twitch
and bleed until you die

maybe i'll hit you with a car
hoping you get caught
so i can drag you real far

you'll shout and you'll scream
"I thought you were my friend!"
I'll wisper back
"I just wanna see you dead."

Wow, many views, fewer comments? How caould you not comment? I liked them I liked the vomit one, I didn't expect it. Very well done! Sometimes I couldn't get the metor, but they all had good flow! HAHA! They make me laugh, is that a bad thing? Except the "midnight girl" didn't make me laugh, I think it would make a good song, you should add musical commentary to it, tell us how you imagine each mood, like Vachel Lindsay.

I enjoyed your works you are quite talented.....
Lesa....

here's another goofy one
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ooooooohhh
yummy yummy yummmy
it's time to fill my tummy

to eat away my sorrows
cause i don't love my mummy

oh yummy yummy yummy
it's time to fill my tummy

i had an emotional fight
so i guess i'll eat all night

oh yummy yummy yummy
it's time to fill my tummy

cause i hate my mother
i wanna kill my sis'and'brother

oh yummy yummy yummy
it's time to fill my tummy

gonna go to my room and cry
and eat untill i DIE!!!

DO YOU SEE?DO YOU SEE HOW GOD LOVES ME?DO YOU SEE IT?!
HE'S GIVEN ME THE PLAGUE AND KILLED MY FAMILY!
LET NON- BELIEVERS RAPE MY WOMEN!
HE LET THEM LIE,CHEAT,STEAL MURDER!
HE HAS TAKEN MY HOME!
MADE ME FREEZE IN THE WINTER!EAT THE SCRAPS OF THE POOREST OF POOR!!
DO YOU SEE?! DO YOU SEE HOW HE LOVES ME!!DO YOU SEE HOW GOD LOVES ME?!!
HE LOVES ME SO MUCH HE FAVORS ME!!!
HE SPITS IN MY FACE AND CURSES MY NAME!!BECAUSE HE LOVES ME!!!
HE TORTURES MY EVER LONGING FOR LOVE BY BREAKING MY HEART!!!PEOPLE SIN!!CURSE AND FORESAKE HIM!!!DON'T BELIEVE HE'S THERE AND i GET FUCKED!!!i GET RAPED MORAL,EMOTIONALLY!!!
YOU DO IT BECAUSE YOU LOVE ME HUH!!??DON'T YOU!?!YOU DO IT BECAUSE YOU FUCKING LOVE ME DON'T YOU, YOU FUCK!!??YES YOU DO IT BECAUSE YOU LOVE ME WAY TOO FUCKING MUCH!!I HATE YOU!!I HATE YOU!!BECAUSE YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!!AND FOR WHAT YOU FUCKING SHIT!!???.........because god loves me.......

very interesting..

i hope to see more.

love,
nick

so deep: ' = make it one word/spaced out pronounce as single words each



in'a'fight
pulled'a'knife

missed'my'jab
stuck'in'abs

i flinched
he flinched

i cried
he laffed

we'started'walking'back

i was
still bleeding
oh how the blood was fleeting

he was my only friend
right to the very end

we went to
the doctor
my mom cried
oh how we mocked her

she thought
i would die
so she started to cry

in the car
i blacked out
i barely had heard them shout

i woke up
in a bed
in 15 minutes i was dead

16 AND DRAINED OF LIFE!!
HE TOOK IT WITH A KNIFE!!

i did not live for long!!!
16 and my life gone!!!

16 and in the ground
in the eulogy
i was the class clown
my best friend looks so sad
first goes his sister
then his dad
now his best friend's outta his life
he'll take his own with the same knife
my mom will overdose
on her
sleeping pills
my dad'll drive over a cliff
never stopping his car wheels
my brother'll be depressed
shoot himself in the breast
and when their all done and gone
no one will sing my dark sad song......

Your work is interesting, but good. I like it..
*Krissi

watch the red moon
watch the blue sky
watch as i slowly
continue to die
watch them cry
from far away
as they weep
on my dying day
watch as the bird
sails across the day
for my soul they will pray

they will PRAAAAAYYYY!!!!!!!!


the sun will set
the moon will rise
i will listen
to your cries
the day will pass
another will follow
without your love
my soul is hollow

so remember me
remember my name
remember the the day
i came and went away

PRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy....

I'm the ghost beside your bed
please look at me
I am dead
need your help
to solve my death
didn't overdose
someone took my breath
i ended up in a house of thugs
held me down injected the drugs
the thugs had skattered
into the dark
i had wondered into a park

so won't you please solve my story
so i can keep my honor and glory?

no.

I like the new ones. You have a very unique talent.

THIS ONES ABOUT A JOCK :super cool:

oh my god i fucking rule!
i'm a jock, i'm so fucking cool
men hate me,women lust
high school record about to bust
dances,keggers,women are beggers,
ladies love me,don't need no grades
i only focus on pefect plays.
walk around strutting my stuff
everyone knows i'm fucking tough

SUPER COOL!!!!
SUPER COOL!!!!

I'M SO

SUPER COOL!!!
SUPER COOL!!!

defend my manhood everyday
by telling people that their gay
adrenaline pumping through my heart
once i stop i just wanna start
question my mathimatical past
i'll stop and say "I can kick your ass!'
so yes i'm a jock,oh yeah non-stop
i'm a badassed jock oh yeah i rock
i tell everyone "suck my cock!"
i don't plan ahead
i talk without thinking
blame somone else when something's stinking
i keep my pride as best as i can
but deep inside i'm not really a man.

I like your work...
Seems you have quite a talent there.
Hope to see more soon.

Peace,
MourningAngel... :ph34r:

wow, super cool was quite different. Sounds like a "Jock" though. :D by the way, I posted another poem if you're interested in reading it..

wordless poem:

I
I think i'm missing words to a poem
inspiration way back at home
over here i'm all alone
my girlfriends gone
my dogs is dead
i guess i'm trapped in my own head
slit my wrist and i just bled

still watching
still waiting
to weak to be contemplating

you know how
i love you
so why don't you just come back home

cause.....I........
AM WRITING A WORDLESS POEM
INSPIRATION WAY BACK HOME
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME ALONE

i want you
i need you
please let me breed with you
i'm dying
on my bed
writers block i'm trapped in my head

just writing my wordless poem
you're my inspiration in this home

please do
come back here
you know i love you my dear

i wanna love you
i wanna hold you
say all the things i never told you

i am yours
you are mine
be together till the end of time

and past that
are souls are one
with you
i had so much fun

now you off and run
leave me on the couch
slit wrist and a gun

and when i'm dead and gone
please just come back home
so you can write my wordless poem

madman madman:

don't judge me
i hate you
i wanna kill and rape you
i keep your
dead bodie
still dead
i think you're a hottie
30 years old
wearing women clothes
I, madman
it's just how it go's
slowly i eat you
inside i will keep you
i kiss you
your lips are cold
your carcus building up mold
i continue to penatrate you
oh no
someone found out
curl in a ball
and scream and pout
they put me in a ward
i still say you name
"i love you beth"
live out my life loaded up on meth

to all the broken hearts
i sing your sorrow
don't give up hope
find love tommorow

oh mommy earth
is a very cold mother
please find warmth
in each other

kiss me gooday
kiss me goodnight
against your love
i will not fight

hold me close
love away my fears
love me so much
chase away my tears

i think about you
all the time
and when i do
i find myself crying

you're like a drug
i wanna overdose
oh will you please
...HOLD ME CLOSE!!

oh please don't go
please remain
your departure
will cause great pain

OH PLEASE DON'T DON'T GO!!
STAY WITH ME!!
I LOVE YOU
DON'T YOU LOVE ME?!!
STOP SAYING THOSE WORDS!!
THEY GIVE ME AGONY!!!

SO BROKEN HEARTS I SING YOUR SORROW
I HOPE YOU FIND LOVE WHEN YOU WAKE TOMMOROW!!!!

hi i'm denise:
my father wasn't there
i guess he did not care
know i do anything
and i fuck anywhere
i skip class
don't take a bath
I get drunk
act like a punk
i get dumb
no pain i'm numb
tatooed my thumb

hi i'm john:
my parents don't give me my own space
afraid they'll raise a fucking disgrace
i'm mad as hell
they can tell
to stop me
they don't know how
i rant and rave and partly gay
I'm who I am
do what i can
i hate my life and everyone around
i score drugs from all the town

robot ass:


oo yeah dance near the glass
i wish i could get some robot ass
tittanium sex turns me on
i don't fuck people they usaully yawn
doesn't matter iron or brass
i just want some robot ass
shake it for me
in my face
i'm so horny
my heart starts to race
oh yeah
let's get it on
i hope i
don't make you yawn
make me come
make me yell
i'm so naughty
i can go to hell right now
so metal or copper
i'm a machine hopper
have no class
just want robot ass

i'm no good:

look over here
look at this shit
look at this maggot
in his mental pit
if you want you can spit
kill me
hate me
even rape me
pull my hair
punch me
kick me
life's not fair
slam me damn me
take my life away
bite me smite me
label me gay
i don't care
i don't have a say
so take away my soul
and take away my power
just make sure to slit my throat
within half an hour.

for the poets here:


they've got a body of feelings
and a mind of words
and within their beings these items start to emerge

everyone here contemplates and sits
beautiful thoughts bestowed from their fingertips

their heart and soul
from a dark hole
onto screens their emotions flow

beautiful brains
with everyone here
fear of judgement
washed away from here

And you said my shit was good, damn dude you blow me away.

Saronin

cutie wootie:

crunchy pinchy
you're kinda bitchy
fuzzy wuzzy
getting drunky
getting buzzy wuzzied
getting dark
throwing up
trying to find big beer cup
getting goofy
kinda loofy
me fall over
see the roofy
music booming
wee-wee shooting
me so drunk
i get booting
walkie talkie home
with a pair of girlys
they were biggy
on the flirtys
me get them naked
to see their booties
me get laid
cause i'm cutie wootie!!!

no trees
blue skies
arizona starts to fry
bugs are hiding pets are to
about the heat
nothing to do
annoyingly sweat
that much i bet
try to keep your head real wet
hardly ever fucking rains
when it does no one complains
mountains are nice and girls are to
how to talk to them
(you've asked the wrong dude!)
only in the shower i've been nude
all old bastards are fucking rude
never let play around
sit still or lay on ground
well fuck you and fuck him too
i'm gonna do what i wanna do
got a problem?
kiss my ass!
once i get it off the grass
once i'm gone you're in the past
so is it a great state?
who the fuck knows
too fucking lazy
to twinkle my toes
so here's the ending
there it goes
where it stops
no one knows

a shollow man's perspective:the girl next door:

the girl next is fucking ugly
8ft tall and fucking harry
won't be surprised
if she doesn't marry
smells like shit
got the smallest t***
god she makes me sick

she's very dumb
and so annoying
she lifts her skirt to she what she's got showing
all we see is ankle hair growing
she chases us after 5 steps she starts slowing
oh god how i hate her

:alright this one sucked mky

omg..hahahaha...sorry but this one is kinda funny

their chasing me!!
their chasing me!!
some one help their chasing me!!!
their gonna grab me
and eat me alive
oh my god
it's how they thrive
peel my skin
wear my bones
wear my face as part of their clothes
please help me
please help me
don't let me die!!
if i get caught they'll tear out my eyes
they'll put me in a pot
and boil me alive
then they're gonna eat me
i say it's how they thrive!!!
oh my lord
they've got my leg
let me live i beg
i beg
please not today
please not tonight
for my life i fight
they're dragging me into a pit
and a pot i'll have to sit
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

damn..fearful maybe?...lol...yeah you'll just have to sit

the greatest band in the world;
let me tell you about the greatest band in the world

they make me cry
they make me sigh
they go by the name
A.F.I.!!!!
when i hear it
i lose it!!!
i jump up and down
davey havoc should get a crown
i love it
when they play
i listen to them all night and all day
my emotion
statrs flowing
when they get their music going
the music means so much
by the fire i've been touched
to their fans they mean so much
suicide,insanity,that's what you fended away from me
you helped me in so many ways
and you don't even know my name
when you're gone the fans go to
because they were inspired by you
A..........F...............I!!!!!!!!!! :icon6:

wow..it is so nice to see passion instilled in others

would it be cool to have an alien attack
they shoot us
we shoot back
we have a war
a lot of things destroyed
so many troops deployed
shooting and killing
wouldn't it be thrilling?
to see them scream and try all while they die
to make a strategy
fight out on the sea
where would i be
would i die
would i fight
would i try to destroy with all my might?
will i attack
would i retreat
will i succeed
or will i be beat
the only way to know is for aliens to attck
until then i'm just gonna slack

alright
everyone get down!
down on the floor
i'll shoot anybody who gets near the door
don't scream or pout
bitch or shout
do what i say and you'll all be okay
don't sound the alarm
and i'll go without harm
no one get loud
and you wan't get shot down
c'mon hurry up man
(shut up ass
i'm going as fast as i can)
okay now every one stay down
we'll be on our way and get out of town.

my life's a waste
just in case
you didn't know
nowhere to go
no one to love
not even to hug
so lie my head on your lap
as i take a nap
caress my hair
show me that you care
please show me how to live
how to both recieve and give
please whisper
in my ears
tell me poems that bring me tears
why wont you
just hold me
fend away all this cold from me
i love you
and still do
haven't had a reply from you
please tell me soon
for i will be killed by noon

no?damn.

haha..the first two were quite funny..lol
and the last one brought tears to my eyes..so sweet and wanting

in my heart lies a hole
exposed out of it is my soul
as it pours out
i struggle to to hold it in
as the words pour out
i don't know where to begin
so love me
rape me
just don't date me
so please abuse me
even use me
i'm just a slut
i love it when i get cut
fuck me
use me
just abuse me

hillbillies:

way up high in the mountain sky
are little know folk a tad bit shy
ugly teeth and cut up jeans
when they talk no one knows what they mean
never shower they're never clean
stop anywhere and start peeing
don't like gays and don't like change
they live out in the open range
so next time you're up near a hill
please speed away from a bill.......y

oh wow..your words get better and better

oh ghost in my closet won't you come out
i wanna dance with you
i wanna dance now
oh ghost in my closet you're .....a cow?
oh great
this is lame
I'm gonna go blow out my brain

Bang!

omg...that was sadly funny...lol

don't eat every day
freeze by night
hobos like me
to eat we fight
we have no cheer
we sit around
asking for change
to get a beer
getting old the end is near
getting old
need to survive
in guess tonights
they night i die

what is this world
where am I?
who am i
this is not me?
they're all after me
what are these numbers
every thing looks so surrel
all this pain i cannot feel
oh my god
i've been hit
that's it i'm done
but once again i can run
oh wow this is fun
do it again
once more i say
oh wow what a joyous day
oh if only i could hug
what the fuck who pulled the plug?!

:video games:

body quaking
body shaking
addiction got me
can't stop shaking
oh please let me have juust one hit
please let me have just a bit
just a little and no more
i swear it
please a little
we can share it
i want my drugs i want them now!!!
leave me alone !!go to hell!!!
just give it
gimme gimme
you fucking prick
don't restrict me!!
just a little
for today
just a little
please i say!
give it please
give it please
i'm begging on my hands and knees!!!!

damn..some funny ones..the last was amazing depiction of the drugs...wow..so good you are

Dude, have you ever thought of starting a band? Sounds like you'd make an excellent vocalist. I'd have to say so far, cutie wootie is my fav ^.^

Saronin

no one can understand
a word that i say
cause i'm from a land
far far away

to them it sounds like jibber jabber
to me it makes pefect sense
I just wanna know
what it says on the fence

i found some one who barely understands
he's giving me directions
with his shifty hands

i walk away
i say goodday
them i'm finaly on my way

i'm going to sleep now:

today was a full day
and i am really sleepy
alone in my room
it is kinda creepy

looking at the ceiling
i let my mind wonder
i let it roam
i let fly
i let it ponder

i think about the future
i think about the past
i realize i let my life
by me pretty fast

48 all alone
no little wife
for me to come home

and as i think
i start to sink
to the dreaming process
we call sleep

Wicked stuff dude, I find myself wandering into your thread most often I think, my's can't get enough ^_^

Saronin

there is a man in a box
he plays music and he talks

i listen to him
not knowing his face
he talks about coming bands
and my blood begins to race
they come to visit all their fans
give them greetings and shake thier hands

he gives out passes
in the masses
to see your favorite band
he gives them to you
even if they're on demand

so when you get one
please thank the guy

the man in the box
the one that always talks