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MYKL
Ok I wanted to see what would happen if I posted this here!

Forgive me if someone else has already done this.

I've gotton to know some of the RPers now I'D like to meet some of the plethora of poets here.

Haiku is a Japanese verse form that relies on brevity and simplicity to convey its message.

It is usually three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, and frequently includes natural images or themes.

For Example:

Morning light appears (five syllables)
The new day has awoken (seven syllables)
Nature stirs and sighs (five syllables)

Here I will write the first Haiku and then you will pick a word from the haiku above yours and use it somewhere in your Haiku. Do not cop out by using non-discriptive words like the, and, if, they...

You can tell a syllable has been used if you hold your hand near your chin and count how many times you have to move your jaw down to pronounce a word.

I will start with a Haiku about the forums...

Strangers meet online
They share thoughts, dreams, ideas
Soon they become friends
MYKL
((Its easy, really it is...))

Strangers in Darkness

Mine heart Black, Tired, Emptied now

Perhaps I'll take yours...

((I took a word from the last Haiku and built a new one. I know you can do this...))
Haioli-Asonali
Passing a shadow
I see into your spirit
All you hide from me
MYKL
((Thank you so much!!! ITs a beautiful Haiku!))

My spirt is strong

I share it with the hungry

It consumes my friends
Azriela
The rule of friendship

that it is everlasting

sorrow knows no place
prince of the dead
The thought of death

consumes me in life

but stay the same
Azriela
reality hits

like like a storm in the morning

only rain, no sun
prince of the dead
it hits us both

at the time of our death

is it real or plain
Azriela
pain is what we know

life is what we think it is

it is subjective
Haioli-Asonali
Thought is subjective
We know only of emotion
everything else is death
prince of the dead
death can not wait

it only comes when ready

than its time
MYKL
Death is a release

A return to beginning

Food for a new life
Azriela
release is painful

and pleasure is bittersweet

how does it come together?
Haioli-Asonali
Together we are
held in a final embrace
and to just exist
MYKL
I exist to love

Without love I am Darkness

People tend to run from that
Azriela
darkness is sultry

pain is intoxicating

love me, please love me
MYKL
Feed on my heart beat

Tear what is left from my soul

It is all I have
Haioli-Asonali
Love is eternal
as immortal as this one
but one is alone
Azriela
eternity's meant

for no one to have fully

i'll not ask for love
MYKL
An eternity

For imortal love is'nt long

Once true love is found
Haioli-Asonali
Asking cannot take
what you desire the most
and leave one alone
Azriela
I am so alone

anxiety fills me so

like a vat of oil
Haioli-Asonali
You are not alone
one can never be alone
when your dreams are real
MYKL
Alone is the sea

But is she really alone?

With the shore holding her close?
Azriela
the shore is my envy

the wave cary all the pain

the sand, my burden
MYKL
Within her bosum

Lay a great power untouched

Let envy go, live
Haioli-Asonali
I’m hidden away
like the waves in the darkness
watching you in pain
MYKL
Come into the sun

It will burn away Darkness

Start all over again
Haioli-Asonali
Burn to ash and soot
covering the earth and rocks
forever condemned
MYKL
From the ash new life

Thriving on deaths nourishment

Exhillarating!
Haioli-Asonali
Starting finishing
the path is all you follow
death birth are equals
Tindomerel
Rushing down the path

Freedom's too easily gained

For those without strength.
MYKL
Most distiguished friends

On this path you give me hope

Beauty undeserved

((Thanks so much for your poems!))
Haioli-Asonali
Strength not power
no freedom to live in fear
life holds all beauty
MYKL
Beauty is power

Otherwise why give such color

to helpless flowers
Haioli-Asonali
Light is beyond us
for colors are infinite
some we only feel


(ok this one sucks...)
MYKL
Infinate wisdom

Seen in all things created

The weak and the strong
Haioli-Asonali
Wisdom is a cage
that traps anothers deep faith
leaving them sightless
MYKL
Faith is subjective

It has brought all the worlds pain

It should not be forced
Haioli-Asonali
Faith is all some have
belief in what is not there
darkness is their fear
MYKL
Ignorance is death

Blind faith kills millions each year

Embrace love and live
Haioli-Asonali
thus to live in fear
casts a shadow on your heart
til its beats are still
MYKL
I'll eat from your heart

Suck every drop of hot life

Leave no trace of pain
Haioli-Asonali
A puddle grows red
as sounds of drop after drop
echos down the hall
MYKL
Quiet sounds echo

My heart emptied, devoured

Sounds of salty tears
Haioli-Asonali
Tears fall in ever grace
one longs for someone’s embrace
in ones forlorn place
MYKL
Reach out to embrace

You will erode alone

Friends salve loneliness
Haioli-Asonali
All is alone here
always to exist apart
even in a crowd
Haioli-Asonali
Hidden in plain view
blending into moving crowds
I stand here alone
MYKL
Most will hide themselves

In a place of darkest thought

Here freed from Judgement
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