MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 11:51 AM
Ok I wanted to see what would happen if I posted this here!
Forgive me if someone else has already done this.
I've gotton to know some of the RPers now I'D like to meet some of the plethora of poets here.
Haiku is a Japanese verse form that relies on brevity and simplicity to convey its message.
It is usually three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, and frequently includes natural images or themes.
For Example:
Morning light appears (five syllables)
The new day has awoken (seven syllables)
Nature stirs and sighs (five syllables)
Here I will write the first Haiku and then you will pick a word from the haiku above yours and use it somewhere in your Haiku. Do not cop out by using non-discriptive words like the, and, if, they...
You can tell a syllable has been used if you hold your hand near your chin and count how many times you have to move your jaw down to pronounce a word.
I will start with a Haiku about the forums...
Strangers meet online
They share thoughts, dreams, ideas
Soon they become friends
MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 12:59 PM
((Its easy, really it is...))
Strangers in Darkness
Mine heart Black, Tired, Emptied now
Perhaps I'll take yours...
((I took a word from the last Haiku and built a new one. I know you can do this...))
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 3 2004, 01:00 PM
Passing a shadow
I see into your spirit
All you hide from me
MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 01:11 PM
((Thank you so much!!! ITs a beautiful Haiku!))
My spirt is strong
I share it with the hungry
It consumes my friends
Azriela
Nov 3 2004, 02:42 PM
The rule of friendship
that it is everlasting
sorrow knows no place
prince of the dead
Nov 3 2004, 02:53 PM
The thought of death
consumes me in life
but stay the same
Azriela
Nov 3 2004, 03:03 PM
reality hits
like like a storm in the morning
only rain, no sun
prince of the dead
Nov 3 2004, 03:06 PM
it hits us both
at the time of our death
is it real or plain
Azriela
Nov 3 2004, 03:21 PM
pain is what we know
life is what we think it is
it is subjective
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 3 2004, 03:27 PM
Thought is subjective
We know only of emotion
everything else is death
prince of the dead
Nov 3 2004, 03:30 PM
death can not wait
it only comes when ready
than its time
MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 03:47 PM
Death is a release
A return to beginning
Food for a new life
Azriela
Nov 3 2004, 04:09 PM
release is painful
and pleasure is bittersweet
how does it come together?
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 3 2004, 04:24 PM
Together we are
held in a final embrace
and to just exist
MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 05:39 PM
I exist to love
Without love I am Darkness
People tend to run from that
Azriela
Nov 3 2004, 05:40 PM
darkness is sultry
pain is intoxicating
love me, please love me
MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 05:44 PM
Feed on my heart beat
Tear what is left from my soul
It is all I have
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 3 2004, 05:45 PM
Love is eternal
as immortal as this one
but one is alone
Azriela
Nov 3 2004, 05:46 PM
eternity's meant
for no one to have fully
i'll not ask for love
MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 05:50 PM
An eternity
For imortal love is'nt long
Once true love is found
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 3 2004, 05:51 PM
Asking cannot take
what you desire the most
and leave one alone
Azriela
Nov 3 2004, 05:54 PM
I am so alone
anxiety fills me so
like a vat of oil
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 3 2004, 05:59 PM
You are not alone
one can never be alone
when your dreams are real
MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 06:02 PM
Alone is the sea
But is she really alone?
With the shore holding her close?
Azriela
Nov 3 2004, 06:03 PM
the shore is my envy
the wave cary all the pain
the sand, my burden
MYKL
Nov 3 2004, 06:09 PM
Within her bosum
Lay a great power untouched
Let envy go, live
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 3 2004, 06:52 PM
I’m hidden away
like the waves in the darkness
watching you in pain
MYKL
Nov 4 2004, 11:09 AM
Come into the sun
It will burn away Darkness
Start all over again
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 4 2004, 11:40 AM
Burn to ash and soot
covering the earth and rocks
forever condemned
MYKL
Nov 4 2004, 01:03 PM
From the ash new life
Thriving on deaths nourishment
Exhillarating!
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 5 2004, 10:15 AM
Starting finishing
the path is all you follow
death birth are equals
Tindomerel
Nov 5 2004, 10:46 AM
Rushing down the path
Freedom's too easily gained
For those without strength.
MYKL
Nov 5 2004, 10:50 AM
Most distiguished friends
On this path you give me hope
Beauty undeserved
((Thanks so much for your poems!))
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 5 2004, 11:56 AM
Strength not power
no freedom to live in fear
life holds all beauty
MYKL
Nov 5 2004, 02:31 PM
Beauty is power
Otherwise why give such color
to helpless flowers
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 5 2004, 02:52 PM
Light is beyond us
for colors are infinite
some we only feel
(ok this one sucks...)
MYKL
Nov 5 2004, 04:38 PM
Infinate wisdom
Seen in all things created
The weak and the strong
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 5 2004, 04:57 PM
Wisdom is a cage
that traps anothers deep faith
leaving them sightless
MYKL
Nov 5 2004, 05:22 PM
Faith is subjective
It has brought all the worlds pain
It should not be forced
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 5 2004, 05:49 PM
Faith is all some have
belief in what is not there
darkness is their fear
MYKL
Nov 5 2004, 06:15 PM
Ignorance is death
Blind faith kills millions each year
Embrace love and live
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 5 2004, 06:50 PM
thus to live in fear
casts a shadow on your heart
til its beats are still
MYKL
Nov 5 2004, 08:37 PM
I'll eat from your heart
Suck every drop of hot life
Leave no trace of pain
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 5 2004, 10:14 PM
A puddle grows red
as sounds of drop after drop
echos down the hall
MYKL
Nov 8 2004, 11:50 AM
Quiet sounds echo
My heart emptied, devoured
Sounds of salty tears
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 8 2004, 12:40 PM
Tears fall in ever grace
one longs for someone’s embrace
in ones forlorn place
MYKL
Nov 8 2004, 12:55 PM
Reach out to embrace
You will erode alone
Friends salve loneliness
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 8 2004, 01:56 PM
All is alone here
always to exist apart
even in a crowd
Haioli-Asonali
Nov 9 2004, 12:37 PM
Hidden in plain view
blending into moving crowds
I stand here alone
MYKL
Nov 9 2004, 01:25 PM
Most will hide themselves
In a place of darkest thought
Here freed from Judgement
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