the gift of your gorgeous poems and soft, sweet words is enough..

your last poem was wonderous.. and speaks much like the cries of my heart..

:5:

I understand what you say Yuui, and you are right in that sense. But I'm just giving you the credit you deserve for the poetry you write since you seem to not think you amount to anything. I just think you're wrong.

Escape: thank you so much, my friend… but you know what? I only write about what I see, just look out of your window and you will see what I see..Dear friend i accept your thanks and am glad that this friendship between us is real....we each have our own set of eyes...too people will see thing's differently.....you are gifted see/like it or not...it's beyoned your control...and we all as you said have our own set of problems....

escape sighs he's having a tough time thinking....

I hope you won’t come to found out this kind of “feeling”, and you are no childish. If anyone is that, it would be me. *smiles* I may not be a child, but in many things that is what I am…I have to much to learn, to understand and feel, before I can call myself grown past the stage of a child....so do i dear friend and weave talk about this in the past i feel like you've surpassed me in alot of ways....what are the right words.......i still act the fool do childish's things to be happy...i am struggling, it's realy hard to explain...i know i have so much to learn yet....

And it’s true that there really is nothing as normal, well at least if you look past the scenes of life. But in life as we see it, there is something we call normal, the norm… sure it is a fake image/reflection, but still it is there and can’t be denied, as long as we live inside this vision of ours…mm, this in a way is what i mean you see and put things like this in to words...that to me screams maturity...were as i could not put it down so clearly.....escape sighs.....

Mm, I know that there is nothing as being alone.. still there is loneliness. You see loneliness is what we feel, it may not be what really is, but it is there. And in this I don’t think loneliness is something bad, in loneliness I can be me. *sighs* how shall I explain this, by being me I am in away alone, cause I know that all people are unique. Nothing wrong with that, ne? I am starting to understand now what you mean...though a part of me says lonelyness is bad...because perhaps i know what it is like to be with some one...who love's you for your self....escape takes a deep breath.... i dunno i battle lonelyness alot.....but i like my own space some times....no theires nothing wrong with being who you are...ummmm i dunno i guess we are all alone in a sence...

I don’t think you know how much your words mean, my friend..are... you are smart to pick up on that...and yes, in the past i would spreed them around with out fully understanding them...but now i am honest and mean them....weather or not you belieave it is up to you...it realy does not matter because there meaning will always be here....Thank you, but one day you will forget me.. with age, with time memory will wither, and erupt to be....

escape smiles....and looks into her eyes...once again dear lady your words claim to know me...more than i think you do...if i was "normal" this would be true but....and perhaps people think it's a blessing....though it's feel's like a hurtfull blessing...because i don't forget my firends weather they be here or over seas, or just not talking to me, or even the people who use to be my friends....and infact and i hate to say this but you will be the one to forget me...and i not coming down on my self i am just working off experience...for i am the invisable seen really sirpostadly cared about...forgoten very quikly...often just another persons stepping stone..


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thats ok....i sorry to hear you not been sleeping *escape give her a hug* not much of substertute...but best i can do......he disapears.........

hey yuui! ive bben wondering for some time now..
uhh how do you pronounce you name here?
is it..like...(u-u-I) or (u-eee)or(u-i)?

*wanders in* where am I?

Black dragon: Well Yuui, is in reality a Yūi… Y is pronounced like the Y in the English word yard. And the i is pronounced like the two ee:s in see. Then we have u, which is pronounced similar to the u in could. However when the u looks like this: ū, then the u becomes a long syllable. Which means that it should be pronounced as a single unbroken sound twice the length of the corresponding short syllable.
*smiles* I hope that I have given you a understandable answer.. cause I am not that great with explaining such things like this.. [and I have had alot of help from my “grammar books”.. *hehe*]


Escape: You have mail!

Ummei: thank you, my friend.. for thinking I am wrong..*smiles* it means alot..

Astarael: thank you so very much my friend… I can’t really say anything, but thank you.

The Forsaken: thank you, my friend… yea well, I guess the moon were thinking my thoughts…

endlessly I stare_____into the oblivion, hearing your movement
echoing through my mind___bound to the floor, unable to leave
_________my voice touch the transparent skin_____and I reach out
to my own reflection____destroying the image, with dropping sounds

fragile, it takes its old form____still becoming me_____unchanged, but new

daydreams in-motion_________arms enfolding my cold limbs, just holding
holding me______hold on, I know what we’re living for…
_________________________Your voice

sometimes even I believe in miracles_______I continue
into the eternal space…

wonderful poem yuui but why those spaces between words ( excuse my ignorance ) there is some reference to the eternal space you mentioned in the end (ok... i said a big bullshit... BOOOOOOOOOM)

wow...your words move me

Not sure what to say... your work leaves one speechless.
~M*

Your "____" accound for sazoras right? If they do or not, they are put into the right places, it makes a person go back and rethink what they just read, proves for many interpritations. Very well written.

love your poems .. can't wait to read more
:banana00:
sam xxx

love your work



My world collides
I am lost and found
The hollowness eats me everyday
Feeding on everything i hold dear
The pain, the screams of my conscious
The weight of it all crushes me
Intoxicating me until i am gone
Fading out of this world
My only regret not saying anything

gorgeous work as always my friend :5:

ahhh finally i have read more good things.....have been absent for a couple of days

THE FORSAKEN: thank you my friend…mm I never really thought about it like that. *smiles somewhat distantly* it’s more like the poem came to me like this..

Buddha: ….

Falling star: hem.. thank you, for such kind words…

Ummei: well I don’t know what “sazoras” means.. maybe you will tell me, some time. anyway the poem just came to me in this form… I don’t know why really, maybe because of what it’s about. and thank you Ummei, for reading the poem…

Darlk_angel thank you so very much, for so kind words.. it means a lot.

Lonely_soul002: mm...thank you

Astarael: thank you, my friend… your words are always giving, thank you

Donovan: mm…I know, and you been missed.. good things hu? Something you want to share?

ah. But your words, make my oblivion seem so small. I feel new as I read your works. Yuui you are such a talented poet. Visions in Blue, Visions so True.

A sazora is a poetic device that poets use to have a break in the middle of a line. usually it's a ";" or just a "." It's used for a mood, or when the tone changes.

Its funny how this poem really got to me...as to the fact I've read it literally one hundred times or more now...it truely is a piece of art...I will definityl be coming back to see more of your work.

yuui,
touched by the words and greatness still to come,
makes the dragons reading on the run.
but the truth of the wisdom writtin beyond
dragons eyes,
causing sadness into happiness surprize!

Death_victorious: *smiles some* mm, well they are true for me at least. after all they are my visions… and thank you for thinking that I have talent, it’s very kind of you.
………well I really didn’t mean for that to happen.. maybe you have to stop seeing thing in the way of having beginnings and ends… the oblivion is beginningless and endless. It’s just everything that is and isn’t..
mm… you feel new? how do you mean? (if you feel like telling me)

Ummei: thank you for explaining it to me… well that is really not something I did on purpose. Sometimes I see my poems, the words as hum art…and at times my mind decides that it needs more air, in them… well that’s really the best way for me to explain it..

SaveMySanity: thank you, so very much… it means alot

BD: *smiles* thank you so very much, for such words that you give me… but why so surprised?

more pretty star

dark_angel55: hem...star????

well what elas hangs so high above is so beautiful and shines paths for the lost?

but what has that to do with me?

well you have all the quailties of a star and more....i was just calling it how i saw it

hem...I don't know what to say to that.. thank you, it's very kind of you to say that

your welcome...sorry if it sounds like i'm comming onto u

Sayonara my beloved dream

ripped paper flakes; spread by the aimless wind..........a passage Of parts
................it’s becoming real...........when astray;my cloths leave

awakening the candles.......My fingers touch the flame; hungering for air
my limbs fall.....disappearing Into the sheets, on my bed
holding.........................you inside...............maybe you will stay

always drifting, so far away.............with the same set of dreams
................scrambled between my calls On the phone
…always coming............always going…

mm...don't worry, I really didn't see it like that. I was more hum... somewhat surprised. ...well I have to go now, so have a nice evening/night/day [not sure of what applies to you...]

I liked this one. I love how all your work is written in a different way then everyone elses....very nice...and it pulls me in. :)

loved your last one! Truly original, inspiring, your talent is above all others, truly Yuui you are a great poet.

I understand what you meant by that. *smiles*

You're latest poem... I don't really know what to say. I mean.. it's very beautiful, but I really dont know what to say....

love your latest poem my friend :5:

sweet poem... sorry but i'm restless on commenting poem about dreams, they stand alone with their beauty... eheh sigh

@~~~~~~~yuui rainfall.~~~~~~~~~~@
Black rainfalls,
falling on the open
page.yuui...yuui...
come back on stage!
new poems from your
mind and heart,
makes the world not fall
so far appart.
standing in the warm
snow and sand,
where u go,
i must clap and stand.

BD, I really don’t know what to say but: thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, my dear friend… I am still blown away over the fact that you wrote me a poem… thank you so very very much BD

THE FORSAKEN: thank you so much.. but you know, you don’t have to say anything..

Astarael: thank you, my friend. It means a lot

Ummei: ah, good… well then, don’t say anything, words aren’t always needed.

Death_Victorious: thank you, my friend… original hu? That’s really kindly said.. I really don’t know what to say, I am not that good at taking hem…what’s the word for it, positive feedback.. I think that is it… ah well anyway thank you so very much…

SaveMySanity: thank you so much.. it’s very kind words that you give me…

I dress my skin With pouring water…like warm rain …my fingers Find yours..

a melody Filled with morning-tea.. ..white cream, our tasting lips..

white and black fragments…of places we lost, moments we found.. photographs

..of you and me… us, becoming we…it’s a Paris feel, embracing our limbs..

in the shower Of our awakening…

:banana00: LOLz! yuui my friend
u r welcome!u made me laugh so hard..hahahaa...
yessss..u r most welcome.

[quote=Yuui,Mar 11 2005, 08:51 PM]
[font=Garamond][size=4]BD, I really don’t know what to say but: thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, my dear friend… I am still blown away over the fact that you wrote me a poem… thank you so very very much BD

oh man last one was so beautiful! WOw I could just imagine a calm soothing scene, this thread is truly a sanctuary for my mind!

i love it! i love it! awesome.....the use of words and imagaition fantistic!

BD; I am glad that I can make you laugh… mm, that’s really good..

Death_Victorious; thank you so very much for your kind words… although I wasn’t really sure about the last line, mm still aren’t… will probably come to edit it in the future.. *smiles* ah, well… thank you, my friend.

Escape: thank you, my friend… *smiles* but I have decided to edit it… ah well, thank you…


Okay so a explanation; all I really done in this editing is to take away one line [the last one].. cause it really didn’t seem that necessary. At the same time, to make a more smooth and floating ending; I changed the structure of the hem… new last line… ah well, I hope this doesn’t ruin anything for ya.. it’s just that this speaks more in the way I see the poem… sorry for the mess-up, I should have taken some more time before posting it… *smiles some* well…anyway here it is:

[edited version of Asa Tanoshii]

I dress my skin With pouring water…like warm rain …my fingers Find yours..

a melody Filled with morning-tea.. ..white cream, our tasting lips..

white and black fragments…of places we lost, moments we found.. photographs

..of you and me… us, becoming we…it’s a Paris feel.. Embracing …our limbs..

wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very romantical and passionated, i can't imagine my little girl under the moonlight in a shower with a man nononononononononono >_<

yes thankyou it was good for me to laugh again.
first time to laugh..sence i become depressed..thankx.
the part thats...been..{{{}}} it the best part out
this one i love.i dont know why..but..it catches
me eye.heh.

beautiful! Thank you Yuui for sharing such marvelous talent with us.

i love your last poem.. it really takes me through a whirlwind of memories and makes you think of how you will look back upon those you care for..

THE FORSAKEN: *smiles some* nether can I… and thank you very much, for calling Asa tanoshii for romantic and passionat.. not really what I had expected..

BD, it glades me to hear that… maybe we all need to laugh more. And thank you so very much, that is my own favourite part of the poem… of I were to distinguish anything in it..

Death_Victorious: thank you so very much, for such kindness…

Astarael: thank you, my friend… it is kind of what the poem is about… thank you so much my friend.

I love this Just this This moment Of absolutely nothing
Nothing, But this drowsiness; Between sleep And awakening
Cuddling The pillow closer, Closer to my cheek
My blanket; Closer to my skin Hoping That it will stay
This feeling Just this feeling, Of absolutely nothing
Nothing, But nothing
...

Nothing can be very beautiful *smiles* especially when cuddled up with a pillow and a blanket.

Yes, this is what asa tanoshi inspire to me... in great lines, pheraps cause i don't know him/her.

Mmmmm the new poem, talk about the nothing, i like the nothing, the void, but not the feelings he carries in, feeling of nothing... make me one step closer to death, to a kind of death sometimes i wish to escape, the death of my mind... i need continuosly to be filled with something, and my hunger will never finish