HATE ANGER

youve got me mad
youve got me pissed
all this anger inside
i try to resist
i cant hold it in
its like a sin
im going insane
experience my pain

i run to my room
lock the door
pop some pills
i need more
look in the mirror
shed a tear
dont like what i see
is that really me

so here in my mind
i try to hide
i let it all out
and start to cry
cause i cant hold it in
its like a sin
im out of control
such a dark soul

ive broken down
start to scream
it all flows out
its obscene
ive fallen apart
whyd it have to start
dont tell me to calm down
im hellward bound

i turn up the music
start to yell
write my note
see you in hell
this is my fate
overwhelmed by hate
i grab a knife and take my life

(chorus)
hate anger
got me pissed
hate anger
i need more
hate anger
held within
hate anger
had to start
hate anger
grab knife
hate anger
take my life






what do u think?

GOTHIC DELIGHTgrim and darkness covers the night
i look around but see no light
to me theres nothing left in sight
i hold back my feelings with all my might
my mind is filled with so much fright
i no longer wish to pursue this fight
and knowing that im not alright
i grab a blade and grip it tight
it seems my future's not so bright
i wish to die in GOTHIC DELIGHT

WOW! your words ... Man ! i love it of it had GREAT rythm lol ... then i found out it was a song lol ... but great Song.. Gothic ... and welcom to the fourm ...

Destin4darkness
AKA
Lady Black wolf

I love this too keep it up

D4d

CRAZY EVIL MONKEYS

crazy evil monkeys
born to kill
crazy evil monkeys
like a deadly pill
theyll take a knife
stab you in the head
and they wont stop
until you are dead

crazy evil monkeys
theyre full of hate
crazy evil monkeys
make you meet your fate
but if for some chance
you do survive
you best thank god
your still alive

crazy evil monkeys
theyre fucking insane
crazy evil monkeys
they strive on your pain
those sons of bitches
want you to die
and now its time to
kiss your ass goodbye




inspired by a malcolm in the middle episode

Aww they sound cute still want one lol .... Good work ....

Ps : malcolm in the middle Rocks!!!

D4d

TIME TO DIE

i dont understand why u persist
ive had enough and now im pissed
it is me you had to discieve
it is you i no longer believe
dont you understand im not ok
i no longer wish for you to stay
i wanna meet you at this place
so you best be there you fucking discrace
it is here you will cry
as my spikes gouge out your eyes
so you start digging your grave
it is too late to try to behave
you ask what is wrong with me
and i reply im just fucking crazy
your future is short and clear
the fact is your end is near
i know the ending to this story
it is very bloody and also gorey
so you can run and try to hide
but the train to hell you will ride
so tell everyone you know goodbye
you stupid bitch its time to die!

NICE ... LOVE ITS ....feeling ... vibe.. lol keep it up...

lady

thanks, as long as my soul is dark and twisted i will keep it up

Wow! you remind me of well ME ! I LIKE YOU .... lol i'm jaliesa AKA lady who are you ?

im sparky,
a gothic punkish preachers kid running the other way

MY SACRAFICE

lie there
dont move
its ok
youre just
my sacrafice

fine go
ahead and
scream now
youre just
my sacrafice

stay still
quit crying
its alright
youre just
my sacrafice

no one
can hear
you scream
youre just
my sacrafice

this knife
is going
into you
youre just
my sacrafice

it will
be a
fast death
youre just
my sacrafice

why do
you weep
its ok
youre just
my sacrafice

no one
can help
you now
youre just
my sacrafice

take my
knife and
stab you
youre just
my sacrafice

the blood
flows out
its complete
you were
my sacrafice

Nice "it will be a fast death youre just my sacrafice" i love that .. lol nice to meet you sparky, keep this up ...

Lady

thanx, do u hav any thing to read like this

I think these would sound great as a heavy metal tune, your poems would go really well to music. In fact i see them as lyrics rather than poems.

Well, I can feel what you're trying to say, if that's any consolation. Just even it all out and set it to a theme so that it doesn't sound like everything else that's ever been written. For example, you might want to pick an object such as the sky and take out your anger on that. Make your parents or whatnot, whoever you're angry at, let them symbolize the sky. Then, through words, attack it, and by the end of the poem, have the sky come crashing down. It's really easy and it gives you a working goal to move towards in a storylike progression. Just try it.

Good job and keep writing and shit.

thanx for the suggestions, but i dont think im smart enough to grasp that. ill try but right now this is just old stuff i find in my room stored away.

and i do think of them as song lyrics sometimes, im gonna add some of them up and make a song for my best friends band to sing.

HATE YOU
i take my fist
and put it through the wall
this anger surrounds my hate
i cant take it anymore
break mirrors
smash glass
back off
ill kick your ass
you dont really wanna stay
please just get the fuck away

im insane
im going crazy
nothing can help you
just leave now
the blood is pouring
and the fire is burning
i hate you
just leave now

the voices are taking over
they say to hate you
and i listen


im past the point
of thinking straight
i can only watch
as you die
i watch the blood
drip down your head
i just cant wait
till your fucking dead
i have no conscience left inside
hey fucker, why havent you died

im insane
im going crazy
no one can help you
as you scream
the blood is pouring
and the fire is burning
i hate you
just die now

the voices are taking over
they say to kill you
and i listen

dedicated to my exgirlfriend
just got pissed and started writing what i felt

DISSAPEAR
why the fuck did you have to lie
now i wish youd curl up and die
you fucking bitch
fall in a goddamn ditch
youre nothing but a fucking whore
nothing less and nothing more
i hate you fucking slut
in my skin your words did cut
did is the key word there
dont you get it now i dont care
i hate you cant stand you
and all the shit you do
now pain and death is on my mind
im no longer gonna be kind
im gonna fucking shout
and the damn truth will come out
im gonna come to your place
then youll dissapear without a trace
dissapear off this earth
like if you werent given birth
im gonna cut off your fucking nose
this is the death for you i have chose
and if you dont like it
tough i dont give a shit
so fuck you straight to hell
you will try to get away but fail
you will feel alot of pain
for youre the reason im insane
so just fucking die die die
as i bid you goodbye bye bye

Haha, the last one sounded like a Korn song.

BETRAYED

i feel disieved and betrayed
like our friendship has gone astrayed
you fucking stabbed me in the back
now our friendship has gone black
what the hell is wrong with you
why you do the shit you do
i dont fucking get it
she likes you cuz you talk shit
and its about me
cant you fucking see
she pretends its you she likes
when that aint true, fucking dike
how long till you figure that out
cuz right now i wanna fucking shout
youre supposed to be my friend
or was that fucking pretend
i cant fucking take this
now im fucking pissed
so fuck her and you
soon youll know she aint true
then youll need a shoulder to cry on
but most likely ill be gone
so go ahead do what you want
fucking be pretend and flaunt
cuz shell be gone in the end
and i wont be your friend

NOW YOURE DEAD

sick smile on my face
your blood is on my hands
your body lies there
in a pool of blood i stand
why dont you get up
oh thats right your dead
i took a mighty axe
and chopped off your head
oh ha,ha,ha
you live no more
your spirit is gone
in the clouds it soars
i get the last laugh
my revenge is complete
now the medic will come
and cover you with a white sheet
i didnt give a shit
that you pleaded mercy
i have no conscience
im too fucking crazy
so your death is done
now i have a decision to make
should a burn the body
or drop it in a lake
whatever i decide
i cant get caught
cant go to prison
i like my freedom guite alot

this one was my favorite one!!! i love it, good job. hi im kelsey aka pirate. your stuff does sound like songs. i write a lot of songs too but i post my poems here and rarly my songs. is this all your work or do u have more?

good stuff, true potential. i liked the first post the most. yet remember, you will grow to write stuff 300 times better all in time. even in a month you will see a huge difference. trust me.

nick

Ah, so much anger...I can relate to that.
Your work is good..
I hope to see more soon.

Peace,
MourningAngel...
:ph34r:

ive got more i just gotta find time to sit down and type it all. my parents are always around which doesnt give me much time alone on the computer. they would flip out and send me to another shrink and lock me up in padded walls if they saw this stuff. so i must hide all of it. i know this cuz they found my drawings of twisted and demonic things. being preaching godly people they flipped and asked me if thats how i really feel. i just told them sometimes and walked away.

NOW YOURE DEAD

sick smile across my face
your blood is on my hands
your body lies there
in a pool of blood i stand
why dont you get up
oh thats right youre dead
i took a mighty axe
and hacked at your head
oh hahaha
you live no more
your spirit is gone
in the clouds it soars
i get the last laugh
my revenge is complete
now the medic will come
and cover you with a white sheet
i didnt really care
that you pleaded mercy
i have no conscience
im too fucking crazy
so your death is done
now i have a decision to make
should i burn the body
or dump it in a lake
whatever i decide
i cant get caught
i cant go to prison
i like my freedom quite alot

this is actually anti suicide but how i felt one day.it really doesnt fit in with this other stuff...the next few arent homicidal or suicidal but things that i feel or just pop in my head. if youre a prep you wont like some of these...but i doesnt care

STAY

please stay
i need you by my side
dont go away
cuz theres too much i try to hide
i just need someone
to stay with me
it seems hope is gone
dont you see
i bid you not to go
i need help fighting
pulling myself from below
its so frightening
i feel so much pain
i feel so much madness
i cant let it reighn
all this anger and sadness
i feel so scared
i feel all alone
yes i do dare
try to break this heart of stone
i could take my life
but i must go on
so i put down the knife
cuz hope isnt gone
im headed the wrong way
i need help from you
i need you to stay
so i can stay true
face down in the dirt
all these tears ive cried
all the times i am hurt
i look to you as a guide
so help me please
and take this pain
let it decrease
so im not so insane
i cant live like this
always sad
or always pissed
dont wanna be so mad
and i cant accept defeat
i continue this fight
lay everything at your feet
cuz without you im not alright

DAMN PRISSY PREPS!!!!

you damn prissy preps
you try to classify me
but i dont care what you think
dont you fucking see
oh how i hate you
you preps rule the school
and if we dont listen to you
supposably we are fools
so im a fool am i
well fuck you asshole
i dont care what you think
i dont wanna be cool
i dont wanna look like you
i dont wanna wear abercrombie and fitch
i prefer chains and spikes
you stupid bitch
i dare to be different
in everything i do
i rather slash my throat
than look like you
so according to you
im a foolish punk freak
so i aint a fucking jock
being popular aint what i seek
you damn prissy preps
you try to classify me
but i dont care what you think
dont you fucking see!!!

i loved the poem Now Your Dead. it reminds me of me. *sitting and waiting for more poems*
----------------
You know that im dark
But i guess you didn't know
That i have a heart
It's people like you
That tear it apart -deadlysoul

MY HELL

this is my prison
i am bounded in chains
for everything ive done
and times i caused pain
i can never return
to this world again
my mind begins to burn
just thinking of all my sin
darkness is all around
everything is black
screams are the only sound
i realize i cant go back
this is my hell
and it is a terror
i scream and yell
but no one cares
"god help me"
my eyes burn out
i can no longer see
i begin to shout
"i wanna go"
"i wanna leave"
"dont wanna be below"
"i still have goals to achieve"
but its too late
im already dead
this is my fate
i made this bed
now i must lie in it
though i dont want to
im full of regret
of everything i did do
this isnt a dream
nor a nightmare
i begin to scream
but no one cares
for i am a criminal
and this is my jail cell
my tormented soul
cast to my hell

i really liked my hell, very good.

hey i was just wondering what everyones favorite is. please answer

my favorite is my hell

my computer was dead now i have a new. so the spark and his twisted mind is back. but the next things to come r my true feelings.


rejected
rejected since day one
my name is preachers son
never did i fit right in
rejected once again
i never was accepted
always was rejected
why do i even try
just a freak in their eye
im just all alone
now my heart is stone
these scars run deep inside
to no one i will confide
everything they have said
words flow through my head
everything they have done
through my mind things just run
time to accept my fate
its me theyre gonna hate
but now i do not care
im their worst nightmare
beaten and abused
give up i refuse

this one goes off my true feelings subject or does it...
its long but ive been told it was good, what do u think

STALKER
hiding in the shadows
watching everything you do
for quite some time now
my eyes are on you
youre paranoid as hell
you know someones there
but you can not see me
you become so scared
looking over your back
you begin to run
youre freaked out as hell
look what ive done
yes its my fault
im the one to blame
watching your every move
where youve gone and came
tomorrows our anniversary
ive been watching for a year
laughing in my mind
as you crenge in fear
you run to your house
you cry on your bed
the fear is over powering
you wish you were dead
dont worry soon itll be over
i watch you grab a knife
shaking as you touch the handle
you wish to end this life
you just want it to be over
tears stream down your face
you never feel safe
not at a single place
you used to have a good life
but then i just came along
you were feeled with paranoia
everything just went wrong
shaking you slice your wrist
as i watch you die
i come to reveil myself
with sick pleasure i say good bye
now i move to someonelse
watch until they die
then reviel myself
and say goodbye
their suicide gives me pleasure
in their lives i infest
taking them out one by one
you could be next

this really happened to me and i still cant figure out if it is a dream or for real images.

DREAMING??

woken in the midnight hour
to an unwanted power
woken from this dream
to nothing but terrible screams
woken late in the night
just to be filled with so much fright
everything is black except those eyes
i hear whispers screams and cries
where the hell am i
in my sleep did i die
i just lie there in my bed
cant tell if im alive or dead
what are the voices trying to say
i try to get on my knees so i can pray
but i cant move nothing but my eyes
i cant cover my ears from those awful cries
i try to yell run and shout
i open my mouth but nothing comes out
hands burst from behind the wall
i try to get away but i cant even crawl
these hands are bloody wrapped in chains
the screams get louder filled with pain
flames burst from under the floor
a dark figure floats through the door
he waves his arms and all is done
i can now get up and i start to run

i still cant figure out if it was a dream
i can still hear those painful screams

this one aint done....if anyone has ideas let me know, ?= i cant figure out what to put

?TITLE?

so this is my life
not much at all
ive stumbled and fell
now i start to crawl
?
im down on my knees
screaming just for someone
to help me please
ive been infected
by all around me
it seems im blind
and i cant see
?
you might look at me
and say all is good
but youd be wrong
nothing is as it should
all my true feelings
i hide deep inside
i hold back everything
to no one i know i will confide
????????
????

wow, i love reading new work, yours is acceptionally good. keep it going.xxxsarahxxx

thanx dude, i like ur picture thing.

WOW! your words I hope to see more soon

dont worry, there will be cuz my life sucks and thats what inspires me.


STORY OF AN ANGRY YOUTH

my room is trashed
i was fine but
now ive crashed
theres many holes in my wall
i was up but had to fall
i keep this pain deep inside
i look for a safe place
to run and hide
but none in sight
out in the open
i cant continue this fight
so here in my head
is my only safe place
i wish i were dead
i cant hold in this rage
no matter how hard i try
it will not cage

you come busting in
here comes the madness
it all starts up again
all this anger i have for you
it all comes out
in everything i do

why do you stay
and continue this argument
please just go away
i dont want to fight
somethings bound to go wrong
cuz im not alright
i dont want you around
i wish i could hide away
and not be found
you just continue to yell
and you wont shut up
it feels like hell
when you do this
oh my god
i am so pissed
please stop
before it happens
and i blow my top
god help me
im going insane
i dont wanna go crazy
i cant control myself
here it comes....


to be continued when i can think of more
what you think so far? should even try to end it?

The new one rocks! xxx

*waiting for more*

sorry it took so long my internet was down.


conclusion.....

i slam you into a shelf
i grab a knife
threaten to slash your throat
and end your life
i look in your eyes
i see so much fright
you know your gonna die
i watch a tear
drip down your face
this was my greatest fear

but i cant finish it
no matter how hate
sending you to the firey pit
would be a huge mistake
i drop the knife
and start to shake
i breakdown and cry
i start to run
as i say goodbye


the rain pours
the lightning strikes
this pain i cant endure
i just keep moving
looking for something
some that might be soothing
i scream in madness
i just keep running
i cry in sadness
i dont know why
i just keep running
and i wish to die

what does everyone think of the ending?

I LOVE the last stanza!!! that was my favorite part
deadly

Wow, very dark, but Awesome:)

been a while....

THE END
my mind is terror
my soul is in pain
the fear is overowering
im going insane
the voices are screaming
inside of my head
i cant take it anymore
im better off dead
my hands are shaking
as i grip the knife
will i do it this time
will i end my life
i am all alone
theres no one around
the demons whisper
is the the only sound
nothing is alright
its the best way
but i cant go on
i must end it today
i know they are here
in the shadows they hide
the demons are waiting
for my suicide
i slice my wrist
lying in my bed
the blood spills out
now i am dead
so its all over
this isnt pretend
i am dead now
this is THE END

some wounds heal
many do
but blood to ground is how I fall
desperate I
search for you
but gravitation just pulls me down
still small voice
ear to sound but I feel pulsing
through my veines
the ground it shakes
speak to me and let me fall

my light is dimming see the water rise
is this my redeeming or your demise

you lit the water
you soak the flame
you melt the water into air again
how can I be in the middle of both love and hate
remove the oil
or watch me sufficate

drowning in flame going under it will cease
but then I'm drowning in the life you gave to me
water to share my burden
smoke to shade my eyes
when the only way to save me is to let me die

you..
lit the water
you soak the flame
you melt the water into air again
how can I be inbetween both life and death
remove the oil
restore my breath