Mario Chiarotti
Oct 12 2004, 03:46 PM
Though the light fades in the distance
I feel drawn to it's essance.
As if it was a part of me.
I yearn to feel what light would be.
No matter how long.
Far or strong.
I run to the light.
This fact I can't fight.
In darkness is I.
As is my will to try.
Try to run to light but am pulled to darkness.
To try to hard will leave me lifeless.
To struggle, to fight.
To toy with that which is light.
Forbindon it is to me, me myself.
In darkness is where i am with no one else.
So I write in blood these words of kindness.
"To those who live in light, but can't escape the darkness."
:punk: ~Dracta Angu~ :punk:
the lizard Queen
Oct 12 2004, 03:50 PM
I really like it
*smiles*
I like your style of writing alot.
Mario Chiarotti
Oct 12 2004, 03:52 PM
Thank you very much Lizard Queen*bows in respect*
Mario Chiarotti
Oct 12 2004, 04:02 PM
Me here, me like a stone.
My fear, me alone.
My self unfit in each eye.
Here myself, alone to cry.
To have a freind, uknown to me.
To know what a friend would be.
In my house I sit, today, each day.
Trying to find some how some way.
A way to fit in with any crowd.
Why...why in my head screams loud.
Thug, or goth, hot, or not, all have seen me unexceptible.
Each person I see I find predictable.
Perhaps one day I'll find a friend.
To know I will have one through out my end.
the lizard Queen
Oct 12 2004, 04:06 PM
I like this one too.your emotion are really well described.I like the way you structure your writing it's different.
*blushes*
you are hot.well you look hot from your picture.
Mario Chiarotti
Oct 12 2004, 04:09 PM
You flatter me Lizard Queen.....I like it lol
the lizard Queen
Oct 12 2004, 04:15 PM
*curtsises*
I only speek the truth if that is flattery so be it.
I like your poems you must write more....
*smiles*
RoseBud
Oct 12 2004, 04:23 PM
QUOTE (Dracta Angu @ Oct 12 2004, 03:02 PM)
Me here, me like a stone.
My fear, me alone.
My self unfit in each eye.
Here myself, alone to cry.
To have a freind, uknown to me.
To know what a friend would be.
In my house I sit, today, each day.
Trying to find some how some way.
A way to fit in with any crowd.
Why...why in my head screams loud.
Thug, or goth, hot, or not, all have seen me unexceptible.
Each person I see I find predictable.
Perhaps one day I'll find a friend.
To know I will have one through out my end.
*hugs* I really like you work the way you write. Well there are no words
Rose
Mario Chiarotti
Oct 12 2004, 04:25 PM
Mirror mirror on the wall.
With no reflection as if not seen by all.
Invisible to those passer bys.
I stand in crowds and close mine eyes.
Hoping that somone will see me.
They'll say hey what friends we'll be.
Unlike the world they won't see through me.
They'll tap my shoulder and say "open your eyes it is okay to see."
With a mirical i open my eyes.
And see groups of people stareing at me to my suprise.
Together we all sit and talk.
Vow that together we will walk.
Together we listen to the rock and metal.
And I'll look around once more to see it but a fable.
Mario Chiarotti
Oct 12 2004, 04:27 PM
Thank you both it means alot.
the lizard Queen
Oct 12 2004, 04:29 PM
it's ok your good I wouldn't write here if I din't think so.
Mario Chiarotti
Oct 12 2004, 04:33 PM
:banana00:
the lizard Queen
Oct 13 2004, 04:17 PM
QUOTE (Dracta Angu @ Oct 12 2004, 04:33 PM)
*Smiles*
Mario Chiarotti
Oct 13 2004, 04:30 PM
Lol I realy dance like that bannana lol
Divine Sin
Oct 13 2004, 04:39 PM
Very nice work Dracta. The rhythm and flow is easy on the eyes and in the mind.
Mario Chiarotti
Oct 13 2004, 04:45 PM
Thank you Divine Sin
Mario Chiarotti
Dec 16 2004, 01:52 AM
My heart it beats, cries of sorrow.
All this pain, you let me borrow.
All this shame, you put me to.
All the hate, inside me grew.
Pain that flows through a single thought.
All my darkness in which I fought.
I can't escape my sin.
It follows me outside and within.
It tears at me and makes me remember.
It tears my soul from January through December..
I refuse to dream so I lay awake.
Offer my pain for you to take.
I see all emotion through mine eyes.
I see you suffer, and I feel your cries.
dark_angel55
Dec 16 2004, 02:49 AM
I love it more i plead!! more
Mario Chiarotti
Dec 16 2004, 03:03 AM
*Bows* There shall be plenty for your plead just make sure to check it each day and more shall have become of my poetry if that is what it should be called lol
dark_angel55
Dec 16 2004, 03:14 AM
*wraps her arms around ur knees* more now?...i shall call u master i shall be ur's just i plead write more!!
Mario Chiarotti
Dec 16 2004, 03:22 AM
To sleep, to slumber never more.
To rest, to be 6 feet in the floor.
To nest my pain, it filters through.
To know this emotion if it's true.
To see the world through my eyes.
To see what others don't realize.
To keep my eyes open wide.
To see the darkness feed inside.
To sleep my dreams so me true.
For when I dream I become a part of all of you.
My pain not mine, but someone else.
I fight the darkness not for my self.
I fight in hope to save you all.
I fight for you short or tall.
I will care for everyone and each thing.
For as long as you scream that song you sing.
dark_angel55
Dec 16 2004, 03:27 AM
my heart is ur's....*huggles ur knee's tightly*...i'm jennifer or jennie
i love ur work master
Mario Chiarotti
Dec 16 2004, 12:47 PM
*Puts hand on Jennies head and with my eyes tells you to run off into the darkness* :rockon:
Mario Chiarotti
Dec 16 2004, 01:08 PM
What does the future hold, will I be anlone.
What visions shall I hold, what will I be shown.
Will I escape this pain, will I escape this hate.
Will I die alone, is that to be my fate.
I can't escape the sin.
I've abandoned all my kin.
I shy you all away.
What will I be today.
Will I be me.
Or the monster that I see.
It grows within me, my heart.
I try to break it, but we can't be a part.
I cannot run away, I've got to be brave.
I fight against my hate, who will become the slave.
I fight through these tears.
I fight through my fears.
I fight through the cries.
And I fight through these lies.
I refuse to disapear, resuse to fade away.
I will fight this fight, each and every day.
Embrace me in your darkness.
Embrace me if you're heartless.
I will fight you're hate.
And I shall break you fate.
The visions I have seen, the fate that I've been shown.
I'll fight it, even if I'm, to be alone.
dark_angel55
Dec 16 2004, 02:31 PM
hello master..eye candy more!!! *huggles*
Mario Chiarotti
Dec 16 2004, 02:55 PM
Hide the dark, show the light.
Unseen the battle that I fight.
Through my eyes, in my soul.
Enternal rest I dig a hole.
I close my eyes I see more.
Forever to sleep in this wet cold floor.
Death it comes with swift and cunning.
I find no use in me running.
I am no one, I am no where.
Mustn't show them that I care.
Disrespect me, as you break me.
But my tears you shall not see.
All the screams within my head, screams you thought were your's.
Now all your screams belong to me, pains that treat me like a hore.
They come and go, and always again.
I try to fight them, this much I can.
I am awake yet I am dead.
I see you all inside my head.
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