The hunger wakes me cold and hard
First thought has gone
The need takes hold
The pain is there for what ive done
And driving now
For what must come
My love of all ill never see
With thoughts of death
Distracting me
Blood runs thick sticky and sour
Feels like darkness
Feels like power
But all i long for what i need
Is someone close
to see me bleed

FATHER

where were you then when i needed you
I pleaded and i begged you too
My soul went cold as his lips turned blue
Where you when i needed you
I woke to screams "he's fucking dead"
I left at once with nothing said
I ran with everything i had
To escape the sight of tears so sad
Sorry i couldnt stop and see
The pain inside was too much for me
How could i not feel it when he died
It was weeks before i even cried
You ignored my pleas, i never knew
Where you when i needed you

For -R-

Sixteen times ive been here now
Sixteen times ive been through hell
But your in my heart now thats the change
You give me strength to fight the pain
Ten years it took for me to see
Id find the one thats just for me
It hurts me still that your not mine
But im sure you will be given time
All i am is just for you
I only hope you feel it too
My soul is yours and yours is mine
and will be till the end of time
Sixteen times ten years of pain
All worth it now to love again

The night cries silence
Heavy and cold
With icey breath

All who hear foresaken
Cold as stone
Cast into the dark

Eyes echo in the silence
Reflecting in
Fueling fear
The beast is born

Death becons in the silence
Bringing pain
Blood stained tears
All alone

I am the night
Silence is my pain

Your work is really good.
I can relate to much of it.
Hope to see more soon :)

Peace,
Mourning...

Thank you im quite new at this
So that means alot :)

Yes You work is beautiful. Keep it up.
Rose

ha ha do i smell kin ....yes i do .......your work is really good .....its interesting what lurks in that dark soul of yours my friend
...

welcome to dark whispers ....you will have fun...


julian

:) I love your work...holy crap it's great. Please please make more, I love it. I can realte to it, as well as a lot of other peoples writing on this site. I hope you do post more. :)

-Freak-

i watched you hunting last night ...your very good my friend ..swift as light...ill lookforward to hunting with you again mate...

lol

:punk: Thank you all for the kind words

Julian, yes the hunt was good
No kill
But a wicked chase

matt my friend it was indeed .......

more to come im sure wednesday lol... :jawdrop: :pile: :pile: :pile:

Nothing

Hit me in the back as i walk away
The only you'll ever beat me
Your nothing, no one, a poor excuse
The worst of whats within me

What you are sickens me
I see exactly what you do
I see the pain your heading for
I feel it pumping through

With one deep breath my will is swift
What i say is done
Sorrow reflecting in my eyes
For penance just begun

Nothing

Hit me in the back as i walk away
The only way you'll ever beat me
Your nothing, no one, a poor excuse
The worst of whats within me

What you are sickens me
I see exactly what you do
I see the pain your heading for
I feel it pumping through

With one deep breath my will is swift
What i say is done
Sorrow reflecting in my eyes
For penance just begun

good poem...mate


julian :tank: :tomcat: :rasta:

Thinking of the spell i did
The power
The feeling
The pain

So young and yet so powerful
Afraid
Knowing i could be tricked
Visions hunting me
Never wanting to see

To much
To little
To young




hi i am a new member here and this is not my best peom

Love is Pain

Beauty with one hand becons me
With the other says fuck off
Whispers love me in my ear
Then tries to bite it off

Love cures all saddness
Mends all pain
But an open wound
Will bleed again

So love me now
Make me bleed
Pain is love
Is what i need

Prayers wont help
To see the day
If fear of pain
Stands in the way

:sadangel:

Staring at the celing
Riseing from the walls
In cold sticky sweat
i feel my hot skin crawl
My stomach feels like fire
my limbs like blocks of ice
But in my heart i know it
Heavens heavy price
My life to feel its over
My soul to kill the pain
All i have ill pay it
To live a life again
Now the blood runs down my arm
Drying as it goes
Tightening on my sickly skin
Cleansing where it flows

I like all of your work....it's very insightful....this piece in particular touches a cord in my heart...so very true, yet so sad and torturous....
Great Work.
Hope to see more soon.

Peace,
MourningAngel...
:ph34r:

goodl poems my friend.... they say alot....and i know it helps for you to write them ...more please

julian

I love your work. I'm a stickler for poems' flow and you always seem to make it work... the piece above is my favorite as of yet but I hope to see many more in the future... keep writing hungerandpain

Outside life

Hollow people surround me
Empty puppets made of glass
Weak and unknowing
All beneath me all dead
Suffering to ease my pain
Deep bleeding razor cuts
Sharpend tongues lick my heart
Kiss to cut me lick to bleed
Fuck me for the scars ill leave
Hollow eyes blind with apathy
See me without my darkness
See the face of the man
Dont hear the deamon softly whisper
Do it you know you can
Break them all
Use them all
Fuck them all
Kill them all
Hate the world that hates me
And carry round my shame
Aflicted with this sickness
Burdened with your name

Walk through the cold of winters night
My need for warmth consumes me
Through underworlds of decaying streets
Its perfect love that drives me
Hold me tight in you tomb
Never let me go
I bleed myself to feel your love
But shiver in its flow
Love you hate you need your kiss
Your allways on my mind
But still i cant help blameing you
For all my wasted time
One day ill beat you put you down
And leave you in the ground
Burried under tons of earth
Gagged and tightly bound

wow. you are a great writer. you write everything that i felt before but could not write as well so i too can relate to much of your work. it is great stuff. i wish i could write like this long ago. i can not wait to see more.

This line is so true. I have been there so many times.
Rose

Wow, your work is wonderful. I felt the heaviness of your emotions throughout. I cant wait to read some more!




-Necurata

i just have to say i really could read you stuff all day.. I keep coming back to read it again and again.
Rose

This stuff is damn good, couldn't stop reading till I read all of them, great job I look forward to more ^_^

Saronin

:angel:


R.I.P.
Winston my friend
Eternal peace
is your reward

Goodbye mate !

Thank you all, its good to know that people out there like my poetry
Im still quite new at this so all the possitive comments will definately help me write more. Thanx !

All is lost in a sea of pain

Sickness in me holds me back
Like a millstone round my broken neck
Living lost in dreams to die
Failing before i even try
A sleeping death consumes my day
In my eyes just shades of grey
The one i want and need to hold
Please take me in from all this cold
I beat my fists till grazed and raw
My pain to feel content once more
But what i am is all i'll ever be
Damaged, wrong, and lost at sea...

Save me,
Love is my lifeboat.

your a good poet matt ...

we need to go out on the hunt again soon
ive seen to much shadow the last two weeks stuck in this box

julian

i think you may poss be the greatest poet on darkwhispers

julian

well its about time you gave this forum some more off your new poems........you should be able to write one about gettiing up at dawn for no reason lol.......

come on then poems????

julian

I could feel this....it was good....i enjoy your works....

Lesa....

wow you are a wonderful poet!! I re-read that 3x and I just love it. I'm really looking forward to going back thru your thread to catch up on you work.

i like ur work chalk filled with emotion and love...no really not be sarcastic. ur a really good poet...me wanty some more

When i started writing on here i was very unsure of myself as this is the first time ive ever let anyone read my work, so its great to feel appreciated.
Although im no where near as prolific as most on here the kind words and encouragement that everyone has given when replying to my thread definitely makes me feel that what i write is worth posting.
:robot: Thank you all. :devilpiratesmile:

Consumed by the darkness
She cries
Tears of love decayed
Whimpering
Heard only by the wind
Its cold embrace
Where once I was
Held only now
By memories of love
Alone and empty
My dream has died
I looked at the sun
To burn my eyes
Carried by a kiss
On wings of doves
Brought down so hard
I killed our love

good poem my friend ...nice to see some new stuff

I love this so very good.....please post more quick quick must get fix.....

Lesa.....

Empty hollow devoid of light
Stuck in a gruelling loosing fight
To rise and be beat down again
Each day week month and year the same
Lower and lower each time I fall
On my knees I dream of standing tall
Each day I try I hope and pray
Ill beat this fucking curse today
But still it goes on all the time
Dark deeds to ease this pain of mine
My racing mind just needs to feed
To feel warm and calm I need to bleed
But I fear that death is all that will
Finally let my mind be still

good poem matt....your writing style is good ....hope you are looking forward to sunday

julian

Racked with guilt for crimes untold
My loved ones eyes have grown so cold
Judgemental looks burn through my head
They make me wish that i was dead
Things ive said and what ive done
The man ive been to come undone
All who loved me rue the day
They let me in and heard me say
Trust me would i lie to you
But lies for me are nothing new
I believe myself ive lied so much
Bringing heartache and pain to all i touch
Still id like to be an honest man
But a lying thief is what i am
I am what i am
Its all ill ever be
So i deserve my pain
Eternally

Sad....A very good piece, but so sad.
One who realizes his/her shortcomings and owns up to them, can pass them by and grow into a better, stronger person..that is my humble opinion.
Pain is but a fleeting moment...that sometimes lingers for too long.
I know and can relate to this work...deeply. Though I'm a woman, not a man, I feel the emotion that comes forth from this poem.
For another to feel such work so deeply can only attest to your sublime talent.
Your writing is superb....
No writing is useless...for it's a purge if nothing else....but here you have found beauty and flow in your pain...
I love it!

Peace~
:ph34r:

II love this.....could feel it and it hurts.....
you are an awsome poet...

Lesa...

Nylasa and ravenous your encouragement means more than you can know, without it i probably wouldnt feel comfortable sharing half as much as i do, thank you.
Your new friend

Matt x x

I am certain no thanks are needed.....only speaking the truth your works intrigue me please write more......good meeting you Matt.....

Lesa.....xoxo

Rewind my life back to that day
Start again no debts to pay
Light of love shines in my heart
Just like it did back at the start
Darkness fades to morning light
No demons now no constant fight
But the clock turned back is a fantasy
To delight dreams of normality
The mistakes ive made are mine alone
I can’t take them back I must atone
But Into this world ill never fit
I made my bed and ill die in it

good stuff mate ...i think next week we will have to go hunting ....i feel the hunger start to burn....and this city we live in is ripe in its bounty ...lol

hurry up and get yourself 2 more posts so i can pm you save me on mobile phone txts then lol