The day the world ends

For me, the world ended, on the day you left my life,
My heart torn in two, my life was washed into hell.
For me the only thought that night, some pills and the end of a knife,
But instead, i crawled, to the darkest pit, my life from outside a shell.
But I see hope in the distance,
Just for one instant,
I thought I heard you cry out to me,
The joy flooded into my heart, I was blind but can once again see.
The times I hurt you, the times you cried,
The times I hurt you with lie.
But instead of banishing me, from your heart with hate,
You opened your self, opened the gate,
To let me in, for one last chance,
Like a djinni with a wish, that anything counts,
For this was the day the world gave birth,
No greater pleasure to be found on this earth,
Than when you told me you’d take me back,
t’was as if wings had grown from my spine.
I flew back to you, your arms and your heart,
to see once again, the great world shine.

I hope you like this, its taken me about 5 mins to write, but i thought i hit it nearly perfect so i thawt id post it now.

Gareque.

Your touch breathes deep upon my neck,
The blood speck seen upon my throat.
No other thought except your next kiss,
The thought of your lips, brings nothing but bliss.
The hunt,
The thrill,
The thought of the kill,
with you, it makes it all worth while.

The taste of your life,
As it runs through my veins,
Sends a power so strong,
An impulse of pleasure runs to my brain.
Then to lie by your side through the upcoming sun,
We know straight away our lifes just begun.

To lay by your side, throughout the day,
A pleasure so strong, it makes the wolves bay,
Then day turns to dusk, dusk then to night,
And rise by your side, from a coffin of delight.

To live out the centuries, with none but your pleasures,
Brings out life of unsizeable measures.
To live out each night, as if t'was our last,
And amount behind us, a love-lorn past.

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! It goes exactly with what i just went through...wow...I love it...please post more

I also love it I really hope tp read more.

There shall be more very soon, so il be postin sometime during the week, hope u like it.

Gareque

I like them i can't wait to read more from you.

.....what ices and rosebud said....peace...

cool stuff comrade but you didn't tell me about the update...
...new just to get you puttin that talent to some lyrics

just when you thought you had peace from me huh :icon2:

anyway peace out folks...

What is love

What is love, but burning desire,
like a vampire that throws itself to the fire,

for pain can be great, when your hearts torn in two
but now it has happened the thorn in my side grew
and the fear of darkness, grows in my head
the darkness of you, not in my bed
to hold me again, when the worst meets the worst
it feels almost like, my life has been cursed
but i know in my heart you werent the first
But for you to do this, it drives my insane
but there is no way, i can place the blame
maybe after all, to you t'was a game
but my soul feels lost, almost burning in hell
into the deepest abyss, my body fell
to land in the rocks and the and the fires that burn
when you walked out on me, your back being turned

Satan can have me, now nothing remains
of what i once was, a shadow of stains
from the tears in my eyes
as i look to the skies
and see you with him, holding hands in the night
as i hold to my throat, the first knife in sight
to draw crimson delight, despite the fright
to rest easy once more, without you by my side
but to know for all time, to me, you had lied

hope you like it all, sorry for the delay

Gareque

MY ETERNAL LOVE

I feel your kiss upon my neck, as you give your blissfull love
the sting of pain, ecstacy in its own special way

I want to be yours for ever more
to stand by your side for life
eternity with you seems only a second
for your my eternal queen

Id give my life, id give my death.
Id give anything to be with you
for the touch so tender
i will love you through and through

so take me to heaven, or send me to hell
as long as im by your side
give me your gift, of life eternal
and teach to me the life infernal

live with me for life and more
and never leave my side
ill tell you always what you want to hear
but never what you've heard before

I hope you like this, i dedicate it to my girlfriend :icon12:

Well she is a lucky girl that was perfect.
Rose

thank you rose

i call thins one

WINGS FROM HEAVEN

you took my soul with you on the night you died
took it to heaven, toward the skies
i know ill be with you
again some day
but until that day comes
im alone in my bed
some people do ask me
what it feels like inside
to me its just lonely, like im already dead
but the years dragged on, throughput the days
each minute an hour
hell in every way

but im old now, alone
no new love in my life
id kept to my promise
to save my heart just for you

but the reaper comes closer
to give me long awaited wings
so i may once again be with you
once again with my love


no by the way i am not old i am only 20, i just thought ahead to what would happen shud the worst ever happen. hope you like it though

Gareque

This last one was perfect. I really love your work.
Rose

hello dont worry people, i havent quit the forum i am just not adding more because i have no net connection for about another 2 weeks, i am only on now cuz im on my girlfriends dads pc, be back on asap, see ya then

hello im back now, n i shud be comin up with a lot more replies now. heres a poem i wrote a bit ago, I call it:

The way to you.

On glorious wings of feathery white
Im carried away towards the light
To get to you before comes the night
So to see your face, a beautiful sight.

To see once more, whats been gone for so long
How you were taken away was so wrong
But as t'was then and ever always
My heart is thine for eternity.

I look to the stars, wonder how long to go
Before I see you again.
A life time, a night time, i wait for the day
when things will be the same.

But the time has now come, or so i believe
To take to the skies, start my leave
And begin the search to find my beloved
Who was taken for so long, and waits above

So I spread my wings, and start to fly
And take my soul into the sky
So I may be re-united with you once more
To embrace once again, the one I adore.

Gareque

I'm at a loss for words....
The poem above is just so beautiful.
Too beautiful and bittersweet for words.

Peace~
Mourning...
:ph34r:

ty very much Ravenous.

In the flame dancing
I see you prancing
To tickle my pleasures of life

But what can I say
No words can play
Of how you should be my wife

For the words just roll out
Make me stand up and shout
About how i want you for ever

I'll take you aside
To fill you with pride
As I kneel down on one knee

To hope deep, deep down
Our love grows not drowns
And hope you see what I see

So I ask one more time
Time with you is sublime
So I ask will you be my bride

So I may hold you eternal
Deep within my heart
SO out loves blossom may start

So say yes to my love
Have gods shine from above
And be mine till death do us part.

Gareque
P.s this is also dedicated to my newly found fiance, as i did actually propose, and she sed yes

Why

I dont know why you did what you did
But maybe it was for the best
Cuz once you were gone, time did its thing
And now I feel better than ever.

So maybe it was best
When you turned from me
Took away only darkness
At last I could see
That it just was not working
It helped stop the hurting
From when i walked in on you with him.

But just like I said
It was all for the best
As I could never feel safe with you
And day by day I knew our hearts grew
even further and further apart.

So I did what I could and I got up and went
So I could begin a brand new start
With a girl whom I worshipped
Not one I mistrusted
To go off with the very first guy.

So I say now goodbye, as my heart is now closed
Tho it has been since when I dont know
But Iv opened my heart
Iv watched it grow
With someone you cant compete

So I leave with the knowledge
With you gone from my life
My soul is now complete.

Gareque.