None of my old poetry will be posted in this thread. I'm working on some new ones at the moment.

I bet you are good I bet you are good *feels tinggly* brrrr it gives me the chills to just think how good you are!!! *walks away happy*

*~*~*~yay~*~*~* new poetry from the lovely cinder

Lost beneath the brilance of the morning sun
Seeking within it's painful rays a bit of truth
Will there be mercy in the grip of a sun bathed death?
Or shall it be the same as always?
Fear breathing too closely to the skin to give into the maddness
If only...
If... what a painful and horrible word
If...it fits into every sentence I have spoken as of lte
If only there had been time
If only there was more love in the world
There is no end to this sadness
Nothing but a large void in the depths of my being
Being ever so slowly opened by each coming day
The gaping mouth of hell opening at my feet ready to engulf my broken soul
I give in once more and seek the shadows to sooth my burning flesh
If only the morning brought death...
If only tomorrow were not so far away
If...the word of sadness
If...the word that enslaves us all

~smiles~ Well that made my night. Thank you dear

~smiles~ Thank you dear. No promises of any thing great but I'll try my best. My brain is still a bit foggy and not spilling so many great ideas at the moment.

If - this poem is so true.. we spend so much time thinking what could have been instead of putting forth the effort to make what we have better..

*blinx* woooooooooaaaaaaaaa you are goooood yes very muchie goodie. Wow you are such a skilled writer, it's way very much impressive. Can I stay? pwetty pwease!!

~nods~ very true. I hate that word but find myself using it. The poem made snse to me when I wrote it and I had hoped you'd enjoy it. Thank you dear

~smiles~ Thank you so much dear. Yes, you can stay but I warn you these poems could turn...dun dun dun..UgLy lol

i more than enjoyed it hun.. i loved it

Nothing is as becoming as the reflection of the pale moon light upon the puddle of your life
The growing ruby lust that pours from your soul bringing with it the lustful sent of death
You once were the most beautiful creature I had ever gazed upon
Now you're but a withered flower in the garden of hell and there is no mercy left for you
How I long for the days when you were my strenght
Your strange power to dominate my world pulling me towards you
The nights of passion where I could barely phatom breathing with out you
Those days are gone now they faded when you choose another much weaker than I
Though I forgive you for your weakness for soft flesh and tears
We could have ruled the night together you and I
I would have followed you any where but you took too much pleasure in my pain
So tonight I'll feed on your destruction and smile as your eyes dim under my kiss
It seems still that there is passion in your touch and I wish I could have you longer
Yet you fade to quickly to reclaim this time
Good bye my love death awaits you know

~smiles brightly~ Thank you for the much needed ego boost hun

Did you hear the creeking in the night?
The low sad drumming in the back of your mind?
That was me slipping farther and farther away from you
That was me growing and changing so slowly
Did you hear the tear drops burst upon the floor?
The slince that fell between my thoughts?
That was me trying to love again
That was m moving on
Did you hear the air shift?
The door close as I said good bye to emptyness?
That ws me beginning to love again
That was me being happy

wow..such amazing words from your mind




this one brings me memories of other things...it has great imagery in talking about pleasure and pain...and in the end..gone

and the last one is sweet and full of courage and new beginnings..I love it as well..It makes me smile when I read your words

Thank you Budha your words mean much to me

In darkness lay the power to be reborn
The ever growing warning of something truely disturbing
Sickness twisting from the depths of a lurching stomach as the new design took place
Eyes dimming to the sun but awakening to the depths of shadows
Hands that no longer would seek warmth but dank earth as refuge
The rhtym of a heart fading into the silence of the last breath
Lips meant for softness becoming nothing more than a longful kiss
Flesh turning to cool marble under the soft pressure of a bite
All things coming undone from a single moment of lust
Never begining never ending from that moment forward
Rather turning slower than the earth allows for ones own sad desires
Burning a new flame in the heart of the night to draw in the lonely and the abused
Pulling with it all the sickness that man has spat out over time
This inbreed creature being nothing more than a puppet of death in his clever ways
Bringing in the sheep to the hateful shephard for the slaughter
This creature you created with your love and with your lust
Breaking through her flesh with your bitter kiss to change her into what you pined for
I am nothing more than a cast way in the eyes of God and a child to death
The broken remants of a life long forsaken by any whom would speak of it
Your dirty little secret forming new lines and breaking all rules of science by night
I am the begining I am the end

i loved this one.. mixing imagery with such dire emotion.. you did a marvelous job hun.. and the ending was a flawless one for this poem.. it just all came together so well.. so heartbreaking.. yet it lends hope to those who have none..

~smiles and bows her head slightly~ Thank you dear your words are too kind but mean much to me. I only wish i could provide you with better work but as it stands my mind is cluttered with stress and undue thoughts and there's not much room for writing.

clear your mind and rest your heart.. in time it will come

It will take time away from this borad and other online distractions and such with just myself and some peace and quiet to do so. I may be gone for quit some time but none the less I'm sure I'll return when my mind is clear again.

if it is your best interest hun then i wish you safe journey clarity in your life

~nods~ Thank you dear. You'll know before I leave just watch my post count. When I reach 10000 post I'll be heading off to find some rest.

well then i will enjoy your company while it lasts

~eyes start to tear up~
My sexy goddess is leaving me?? ~sniff~
How will I ever live without your enchanting words?
Some time away is always nice though, I remember when I took my, (much needed), 8 months off.. Gave me a lot of time to think... And when I returned I was full of inspiration, and new ideas and my poetry was better than ever. It really changes you. And its nice to just live in reality for a while. And omg, your almost at 10 000, wow I cant wait! There will be MUCH celebration my little FUCKING AWESOME SHE-DEVIL OF ORGASMS ;) ~wink wink~ heehee

As I will enjoy yours as well.

Awwwww ~hugs~ if all goes well I'll be back in a couple of months. I just need some time to breath dear and I won't forget about you.

wow you are so talented. But I don't want you to go! I was just getting to know you! You better come back lol *luv*

Thank you dear but I do belive almost every one here knows I leave for a few months at a time to clear my head and come back again. After all you can't get rid of Cinder lol

OoOOO well I didn't know that! lol mesa new dark blood here lol But it's so nice to meet you. YEp!

Nice to meet you as well dear. I am the forums night shift regular so to speak. You'll see me on laste at night and just as the sun comes up for the most part. Before I opened this thread yesterday I had one deleted which was much larger by a few hundred post in it you may have found a few better poems. I hope before I go to write a few good ones to leave behind.

My mind is racing with thoughts of destruction
Nothing fiting into the groove on sanity
Tearing things to bits hoping to find a clue to humanity
Nothing fitting into the groove of sanity
Thoughts of you and I breaking me in two
Nothing fitting into the groove of sanity
Bleeding fingers searching through old words staining the soft white pages of the phone book
Nothing fitting into the goove of sanity
The phone ringing off the hook tears streaming down my cheeks
Nothing fitting into the groove of sanity
Thoughts of despair creeping in driving me to be numb
Nothing fitting into the groove of sanity
The window open and the night air fridged
Nothing fotting into the groove of sanity
The pavement looming far below inviting me down
Nothing fitting into the groove of sanity
The ledge my perch as doom breaths on my neck
Nothing fitting into the groove of sanity
The impact shattering all hope of mortality
Nothing really ever fit me but insanity

Ill precived images of an empty vessle
Being whipped about on the breath of the morning star
Silence only to the ears of whom angels hold
Nothing more than a parlor trick to those whom do not belive in the grace of solitude
Frenzy whipped antics of a growing crowded of pagens longing for hope
Hope of nothing more than ignornace and empty promises of tommorow
Chilled desception of love and gratitude breed in secrect
Slipping farther and farther from the grasp of reality
Leaving but a faint glimmer of truth written amoungst the lies of the world
For we are all sinners and we are all empty vesles
Whipped about in a sea of longing and dead thruths

Silence only to the ears of whom angels hold

wow..your words..wow..you are truly amazing in your skill...you have perfected such a style with such thoughts..my dear I love your words

~smiles brightly and bows slightly~ Thank you dear your very kind

~bump~ new poem to be posted

*is defeated by the perfection* wow the words that you own are so beautiful and so hard to be mastered by anyone, you hold great luck in you for holding such talent.

Lick the wound that is my heart
Rape my senses again for old times sake
Stalk my dreams and haunt my vison
Nothing fits the way you do when sadness washes over me
Snatch the collar and drag me through the streets
Your my god and I'll never refuse to bow at your feet
The abuse you give sets me free in such a different way
Never choking far enough to escape the brillance that is life
Your nails breaking the skin just to watch me flinch
The crimson streaks bringin you a bit of joy
Maybe some day your set me free
Tell my I'm beautiful under it all
That maybe I don't you after all
Show me that I can live with out the pain you give
Until that day I'll take the beatings and all your shame
Just to hold you close

*bows slightly* your too kind but I thank you. I hope to one day make it some where with my words.

wow that was. . . I don't even know what word to use wow. . . *hugs tight* you are so awesome *tears*

~Huggles back tight~
I know what you mean,
I will miss you tons & wish you good luck on your quest! lol

wow..now I don't know whether that is love or obsession..but indeed your point comes across really well..ver good poem
thefeel is tortutous but rewarding

~hugs back and smiles brightly~ Thank you so very much you are far too kind.

Thank you so much dear I'll do my best to hurry back though I promise

~smiles~ Thank you Buddha as always your words mean so much to mean I am very glad you enjoyed it.

a poem that makes me feel thats a rare find treasures from the mind of an angel

Thank you very much dear your kind words mean much

I lost my taste for human flesh
Bought myself a new lease on life
Took with it the baying of the light
Never joining the fight for love
Dancing in the morning glow
The simple show of normal ties
Lies all of it simple stones of hurtful truth embedded in dust
All in all a flaming sword to cut us down amoungst the rest
I'll take my chances amoung the living for a time
Bidding on the small hope of a wonderous lie
A lie that love lives in the heart of God
That I to could be forgiven
Taken from my daily slumber and given peace in the angels arms
Never more to cause such discouraging harm
So today I take back what was stolen so long agao
I step once more into the light
Death becoming of me so well that this morn I greet it once more

such a tale of new beginnings and things of which may yet come to pass..
so great to see your thoughts..I soak in all of them I can to get closer to the angel of our hearts

Thank you dear. The angles of my heart have a few problems though. lol I am very glad you enjoy me work it brings me much joy. I hope to write better ones though. I just need time.