My work isn't particually wonderful but i want to share it with you anyway. Perhaps in time i will get better and improve my skills but we'll have to wait and see. Here is one of my poems.

Reaching, clawing,
Frantic hands gripping,
Black mud under fingernails.

Pupils wide from lack of light,
But small sun beckons,
At the end.

Pulling, dragging,
Heavy dead weight,
Of a hopeless body collasped.

Comments welcome. If that bored you and you now have nothing to do heres a cat for your entertainment.

:meow:

Just in case you got bored of the cat too, and if so HOW? that cat is so interesting.......yeah, okay, i was visulaising stepping on it too. Heres another poem. Its short but it sums us up.

We are ones.
Who shut out the lights
With black cloths,
Cut into shapes of famililar hands.
We are the ones who twist life into hell
We are the ones,
And we do it well.

:meow: (the cats fate)

very interesting words...
oh and nice cat...lol

hmmm interesting...i like...yep i like. :meow:

Welcome to the site, and ur work, like they said, is very interesting but good. And the cat is little amusing. I hope to read my of u poems.


angelofdarkness1537

I like your poems, and like eveyone else said, INTERESTING.. you should get it published or something... its very good...