I`m sick and tired of waisting all my words..
cause you dont even listen..
I pray all night...
for you to understand..
That i`m not the one whoem`s mind is missing...
You should wake up from the perfect dream youre dreaming...
cause i`m living in reality..
and youre in fantasy.. =)

what you guys think?

very good start
I like your thoughts
you have more?

heres another one :

Last tear falls
...and they just watch..
Last look she makes
..and they just watch..
last breathe she takes
and they just watch...no words are said only terrifeid looks..
they realise..she doesnt breathe..
the memories come back like buterflys
of her as a little girl
and of "yesterday"
.now she hopes they`ll realise..
what theyfe done to her..
=(

memories and thoughts
very simple yet very complicated
I love it...more maybe?

I cannot hold the words
They escape from me
The preasures breaking down on me
Why did God put me on this earth..when all i seem to do is hurt!
My heart is screaming
My soul is bleeding
My head is breaking
My wounds are not healing..
Theres no antidote against this Poison you gave
whatever i do is just another mistake..
I`ll soon say "goodbye" or atleast..i`ll try..
cause i`m about to break
and youre the one to blame


well?

wow...words and emotions on the edge
that was awesome...
strong emotion almost always gives great poems...
I like this...you have my attention

Teen Spirit, these poems are great. Very emotional. Keep up the good work!

whehe thank you guys :lol:

I want to hear more of your words

I want to escape
I want to be me
With my attidute its probably hard to belive
but theres a girl inside of me..
who wishes to break free..
she screams so hard...that my world is breaking with every breath i`m taking..
I` just keep smiling,you dont know how i feel....
but remember i`m faking...its fake...
and..unreal..

Indeed! Tell us more!

wow...now that seemed extremely honest...
very good poems..

thankyou =)

I`m so lost
I`m barely here
I cannot sleep I cannot dream tonight
This sick strange darkness...and i hear your voice in the dark...
My words are confused..
I`m sick of the tention
I want to close my eyes..
and let the engine die...


this one is not finished yet =)

even so..your words captivate me..
words so fresh and emotion so strong

thanx..youre sweet =)

and your good with words and emotions

i like your poems

I see the sunset
and i cry
this will be my final goodbye
I want to let go of my fears and die..
and sees somebody cry for me..this time
So if you`ll cry when i die..
I hope you`ll read this line:
I`ll stand beside you day and night...
and would let "nobody" harm you...
like in my life =(

what do you guys think of my las one??

The last one was very sad, I love the cute little rhyme scheme tho... Very powerful words for such short poems.
Luv em

wow...very powerful..
wow

Thanx guys..hats really inspiering me =D

i dont know
how this is working ..
but your poems
are great : D

please write more

i will..=D..tomorrow you`ll have a bunch of new ones =D

oh wow..thats awesome..
I can't wait

really?? or i you saying it just for fun??=p :lol:

no really silly...I am excited to see what else you write..
you have a great talent

whehe i`m sorry i guess i`m just a bit insecure =) but thanx anyway..youre sweet

new one:

I dont have the will to carry on..
This is harder,then they`ve told..
Pain inside wont let go..
Angels in my heart..
Asking: Please hold on..
but the demons in my head are to strong..
to ignore..

next time i`ll try to write a long one =)

short ones can be good as well...
like this one..talking of demons and angels...
wanting to let go of pain
though identification with it keeps it whole...
it explains some things..maybe about you, maybe about someone else..
I like it

thanx..whats your favourite out of mines??..i love the one with that sunset begining..wheh i had my window open yesterday..and the sun was going under..and than it just hit me! :lol: ...and the words came like butterflys =D thats why that one is my favourite =)

yes I do believe that would be my favorite as well...
and I also really like the one that starts...
I wanna escape....

=) yeah i that one is also nice =)

have any more??
I would love to read them
or maybe just random thoughts

Now I`m crying..
I feel like I`m dying..
But I`m still trying..
You pushed me away..
You gave me much pain..
And now that you`re away...
I dont know what else to say..
I wasted all my words on you..
I wasted all my tears on you..
how could you let it get so far..
I was not worth all that "harm"
and now..I want to see you suffer
You Fucker!!

damn!!
angry poem....wow

such strong anger
wow..more!!

She screams in silence..
She ` barely breathing..
She wanted to feel
What its like to be real
But nobody cared
Nobody listend..
So she gave up her life
For something that was missing..


haha really short :lol:

real feelings I like
short but very real

I wish i could explain
How much I hate this life...
Tears are falling from my eyes
I just want to get my things and go..
Run into a big black hole.
Forget the past
orget the present
Forget my name
Forget myself
Your pushing me my grave in..with every word youre saying..
You dont know how I`m feeling
But what I`m telling right now is too god damn real!


and?

wow..very powerful...
these of your words stick out to me...
indeed these are things in which I have done for myself
feelings and emotions..the pain you feel for past and future
please write more ^_^

i`ll try ^_^