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youngblood
I can feel it growing
sedation is not found
in a hidden place
the demons start to pound
firey, poisoned teeth
I pray for my heart to cease to beat.

I cannot take this
being alive
constanly fighting
the pain inside.

The pain inside, the burning
I feel my soul is churning
cannot gain asylum
nor can I hide
'cuase there's no escape
from the pain inside.

I cannot take this
being alive
constantly fighting
the pain inside.

I wrote this in the midst of the night, 'cause I can't ever seem to sleep, or if I do I don't dream. Ever. :vampire: skull.gif
deformity_of_god
QUOTE (youngblood @ Jul 15 2004, 05:44 PM)
I can feel it growing
sedation is not found
in a hidden place
the demons start to pound
firey, poisoned teeth
I pray for my heart to cease to beat.

I cannot take this
being alive
constanly fighting
the pain inside.

The pain inside, the burning
I feel my soul is churning
cannot gain asylum
nor can I hide
'cuase there's no escape
from the pain inside.

I cannot take this
being alive
constantly fighting
the pain inside.

I wrote this in the midst of the night, 'cause I can't ever seem to sleep, or if I do I don't dream. Ever. :vampire: skull.gif

good work thumbsup.gif . i know what its like to never dream, it sux huh. welcome to the forums.
rainingtears_122889
yea welcome to the boards. and good work. keep it up and post soem more.
Scarred_Wings
I can't sleep either it's 2:30 I'm not sleepy must be the coffee lol
umm welcome to the FORUMS lol ood job on that one yesh!! *looks at tears and hugs her* why are you quiet lately? *cries* well good job! dear keep posting more
GaahlGaahl
Cheers to that...thanks for the poem....
Kan_17
:devilflip: tha poem was a greatone I like that why don't you post some more
:devilflip:
LingeringDarkness
Welcome to the boards! Both of your poems are excellent! Can't wait to see more!
youngblood
Color crimson, warm and wet running down my body.
It hurts, but I feel relaxed.
All of my worries soon shall diminish to nothing.
Red-stained metal leaves my hand; I grow weaker, ever tired.
My eyes close gently as I fall to the floor-
Finally my problems are no more...


Hey thanks you guys, I really appreciate it. I don't get to post very often because I'm usually pretty busy doin other stuff. Later.
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