Well hello guys I am new to this site, my friend told me to write my poem, I don't think is good but I shall give it a try I might not post more. . . . I don't know. . . . :meow:

Where are you right now?
I feel myself slipping. . .
Falling in our memories,
Can't you feel me crying?
Everyday I fill a star
With my tears,
Everyday I tell the moon
About my fears
A fear of drowning
In your long,lost kisses
A fear of being burned
By your ghostly touch
It was impossible
I know
But...
As I was dreaming that moment,
I could taste your kiss,
It was as real as the pain
That became the only thing
Left for me :imu:

how could you think that was ugly.. this poem is amazing.. soft sweet words spoken with such desire.. i love it.. you should definately post more..

WELCOME TO THE FORUMS

hehe

Cool look at the poem hehe, I was there when you posted, you better write more man, lo I know you have art skills in you.

you are indeed an exelent poet. i like your style of writing, i hope i can read more of your poetry before i go.

that was a very beautiful poem. i hope to see more of your works very soon

must.. have.. more.. poems... *rips out her hair in anticipation*

Yeah J c'mon man write something

I would also like to see more..
WELCOME !!

Maybe all I needed

Was to be with you,

Why is it so hard?

To explain

What comes from the heart

If I reach the summit of this pain

I feel inside

Maybe...

I will never dream

Ever again...

My days in this hard road

Do not seem complete without you

Without you,

My life is just mere nothingness

But now that I've found you

I'm not in pain anymore

Let's fly away together

Let's be friends forever

Hey!!! new poem?? Way cool lol!! hmm but you already have a thread lol, just keep postin here lol. Ok I luv ya jay!!! *prays that this is jay if not she will feel dum as shit later* byes

which is your real thread?

Um what are you talking about Donovan. . . . I do have two threads I think I'm sorry

umm I think I'm going to keep this thread Em told me that the mods will soon close it I am very sorry you guys And oh for the poems I only write sometimes when I feel depressed. . . Thank DG and Astarael Hidden and Death Kitten. . . I will keep posting on this one.

Great poem dude..I cant wait to see more..If you do have two threads I'd like to check out the other one.

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Emely helped write this one. she helped me on the structure and the rhyming but I wrote it tehehe. We were listening to deftones!

*~Cold Blood~*

Whispers of the past pull me back
To where I feared to breathe in
The hatred and the anger of night
I've painted my life in mortal black.

Blood drips from my eyes slowly
Wanting to end my past tonight
Wishing to wake up from the dream
Slaughtering the child, making me unholy.

Darkened souls looking at my death
I screamed to where Hell could hear
Feeling the pain and the guilt inside
Not worthy of a prayer nor last breath.

I feared myself, I feared everything I did.
Haunting memories that pierce my body
The soul has disappeared and death is here,
My trueself from you I've finally hid.

I've lost myself in darkness tonight
To feel the cold blood running
Through my bloodless veins.
My sight and my dreams have taken flight. . . .

I walk around the graveyard of love
Wondering and dreaming endlessly
Dreaming a nightmare of brutality.
The death raven has killed the white dove.

Blood spilling all over the graves
Its blood has become the rain
Raven poses on one and drinks
We die on contact with blood cold waves