No2Morrow
Jul 9 2004, 12:47 PM
Day to day
I’m drawn to kill
To make them pay
That is my will
They point and laugh
To my disgust
They’ll feel my wrath
I’ll do what I must
I’ll slash away
At their throats
Draining out
The hurt they’d spray
When my work is done
And I have won
I’ll pray for the end,
I know he’ll never send.
No2Morrow
Jul 9 2004, 12:54 PM
The love we shared
For so long
Never ever
Could go wrong
But in the end
You broke it off
Not a sign
Did you send
Not a word
Was ever said
Just acted like
I was dead
I wanted to die
When you stopped saying hi
Thought I’d slice away
And watch my life end that day
I’d stare at the stars
Wondering why,
Why o Why
Did you want me to die?
You must have hated me
It’s the only answer
As to why you killed
What we were
Now as I sit here
I realize the problem
It was not me
I can finally see
You were a bitch
Playing little bitch games
Now you’re an itch
Waiting to be scratched
You’re day will come
When I make you pay
I’ll scratch that itch
I will some day
_AcidBathSadie_
Jul 9 2004, 12:54 PM
Dark, violent and vengeful.
An excellent beginning to the
forum. Welcome! I look forward
to more.
~Sadie
No2Morrow
Jul 9 2004, 01:01 PM
Secession
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Secede from this life
It’s not worth the pain
Full of strife
Driving me insane
Love is lost
Truth is rare
My heart’s been tossed
Never again will I share
They will lie to your face
And kick from behind
We are such a disgrace
This sad human race
Torture, kill, rape and maim
The things we do,
We'll never be the same
This race should be dead
Look at the blood we've shed
What more can be said?
What's happened over time?
Our compassion turned to slime
And our hearts turned cold
We can never break this mold
Scarred_Wings
Jul 9 2004, 01:40 PM
QUOTE (No2Morrow @ Jul 9 2004, 12:47 PM)
Day to day
I’m drawn to kill
To make them pay
That is my will
They point and laugh
To my disgust
They’ll feel my wrath
I’ll do what I must
I’ll slash away
At their throats
Draining out
The hurt they’d spray
When my work is done
And I have won
I’ll pray for the end,
I know he’ll never send.
Welcome poet, I see that you have a lot of talent in you. Keep up the good work. And this piece I might add, it is very well done, it has very intense words and so much dark feeling it. I welcome you with great joy.
crazy
Jul 9 2004, 03:07 PM

I love it. the rhyming schemes are interesting and I like how true the words are. I bet you could do lots of gore and detailed poems on each
crazy
Jul 9 2004, 03:08 PM
yeah dude that was good. nice way of stating those angry emotions
Mercy
Jul 9 2004, 05:48 PM
Pretty cool. Like that person said, your writing is very vengeful, very dark..
Its interesting how you take out all the anger..Anyways keep it up and hope you dont actually plan on doing what you say your gonna do in your poems :)
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