G O T H I C

the sky turns grey
angel choir sings
the past comes
back to haunt you
this gothic sky turns black
you can't turn back
your face begins to crack
as the spiders crawl
out of your face

OOOoooOO creepy yep yep wow that was cool dude! keep up keep up! yes! me likes and welcome to the threads poetry!poet poetry poet! yep yep! mmmm cool buh bye! *collides withthe wind and dissapears*

deadly r u like drunk or something? you sound like u r.

o but welcome to the boards and nice work. keep it up.

w00t! You stalking the Reaper huh tears?! *rapes tears for that*

how does that classify as stalking. would u like a stalker?

hey I don't mind a stalker aslong as i get what i want in return haha. (let's stop spamming this poor kid's thread) lol

yay no im a stalker. sure. sorry in my body. post some more poems and ill be back.

that was great. post more poems :)

how very true....
very nice poem ^_^

thanx for the comments I will post more poems when I can :frankie:


juts to let you know the titles of the poems I will be posting later in the future-


The Fallen Angels
The Slashed Wrists Of Hope
In The Black Rose Garden
Pixie Boy
Chrysanthemum
Gothic 2
Jon's Lament





:frankie:

i'm going to be honest, ok?

i didn't like it. You have a great gift but you seem to be supressing your emotions instead of expressing them. I really want to see more of your work though, you have an interesting style.