"Covet"

as the blade goes through my wrist
a sense of gloom comes over me
an abiss of loneliness has broken me
I feel nothing but a slow process of suicide.
I think ill stay in this gloom for awhile for i need to breath.
I am dead theres no more to this life.This woe has finished me off.
These scars are over my cysts. I cant seem to see anything other than this the blood has taken over me. what the f*ck is wrong with me? why cant i ever be loved?
f*ck my wretched soul. Im tired of all this bullsh*t . its time 2 say goodbye and build my hollow sepulcher.
But before i kill you I will take appart your skin, youll be awake with me. laugh at me I want to see your smile fade as i make your blood run I laugh at you. Arent these such beautiful memories? I laugh as your skinless now you are mine all mine you belong to me.I wish i didnt like this. All i want is to covet you all. Laugh at me now, laugh, your god didnt make it fast enough. your so beautiful this way.Theres no need for a grave I will stay here and look at you for awhile. no more blisters on your skin. your finally mine. byebye

hello!!! And welcome! lol hey! it is good, but I think you have to work on the structure a little bit, at the beggining it seems fine but at the end it just falls off you know? But the meaning itself is really good and deep, just the structure that turned me off. Welcome, and i long for more of your works. good job! And stop by my thread sometime and don't forget to leave comments! :)

Got some feelings pent up in there do you?
I think it's pretty good, I like the descriptions. It's good. But why do half the people here write about death!?