Hello to you all. I am a new user here but i feel this is a good place to post some of my first wrting. If i posted in the wrong place please move.

pressed against the skin
over soon my life will be
right through my heart
near death i finally am
isolation drove me to it
sanity left me long ago
this place is full of pain
emotion cripples my mind
hate is all i feel now
willing the blade deeper
in a second its over
near death i finally am
_

standing alone
time has no meaning
orange glows the fire
pierces my soul
tear my heart out
hear my cry
ever is my pain
growing in side me
outburst surpressed
time will show
how i feel
slowly im dying
_

Blood no longer fills my veins
little by little im dying inside
on my own no one understands
onwards i struggle
day by day
you cant know my pain
got to end it all
oh for some light at the end of my tunnel
this has to be the end
here theres nothing for me
stake through my cold dead heart

welcome...I like your poetry...pleas write more

I like your poetry too. keep posting please. And just as a helpful hint try getting a little more emotions and discriptions. You certainly could have something there. Please keep writing i'll be waiting for more.
Your Friend
^_^ and welcome to the forums ^_^

oh, and stop by my thread to tell me what you think!

These are great works! Very sorrowful and painful, but beautiful. Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work. ^_^

those are great and emotional poems. plz post more of u work :)

I love your work. it seems like you put a lot of thought and heart into your writings.

I am new too!!

Here is ma first work hope you enjoy

Send my some happyness
the enternal tornment
flows within my soul
uniformed society
always distroys
life
lesiure
Help me
exterminate
help me
eradicate the feelling of doom

And another

Intestines are hurting
Placing my face
upon the darkness
that befalls me
because my life
lacks any
anticipation or
conformity which
kills my
life away
intriguing me to
place my face
Shoved into darkness
transforming and
intriging my very existance
Calling my name
killing my blame
on my consience
Never feeling worse
distroyed,i fall
underneath the wheels
conforming with others
Killed,i have been
some how

Welcomes to the threads! lol Me happy that you posted your work because me likes alot! lol anyways keep up the good work! lol

And 50thousandtears I liked your poems too, they are really good, why don't you ut your works on myou r own thread huh? I wouls surely go and see them!

Glad you like dem :frankie: :lol:


Wilting away from me
hearing its call
even the knives of my heart
never wil help me now
whether or not i fight my life
It still becomes apparent
life is but a mere charade
Lingering on until we die
Isnt it pointless
Sending out my voice to my torment i cry
Time is up for my happyness
On level With my depression
peace fades away
tormennting my inner captivity
Hurting my head with thought
inside my fragile skull
Stopping me from thinking
careing,or even wondering
help me,my life is poinless
anilate my dispear
retort my think
amaze my senses
destroy my being
everlasting torment beckons
not trying to help
even trying to come to terms
veryifying the face that,i
extremmly in this case
revisit my past self

and for good lucks

Help me i am drowning
apon my own desperate sorrow
very sad i do feel
eventual death appears beforeme
you must notice
openly in front of you
upon your fragile face
Notifying your worries
only to find
that your life is really
ipending doom
carefully treading
evenly across
dimenshones of life
that fall before you
happing right in front of you
eventually will befall
Happening to you
Impossible you say,but its happening
distroying your self esteem
developing your inner hate
extreme against yourself
not knowing
may that something
eventually will appear
suspended in mid air
slyding through the slipstream of capitilisim
against your will
Gasping for breath
eventually destroyed