It is time to give my poems and stories some airing. Haven't been read for a long time..........comments and critisms are welcomed........... no one knows more than i do that with every action, there is an equal and opposite criticism.......

Enjoy.........or don't.........however you see it

~The Morbid Darkness

Here is my first one..........

i loved you
so strong
needed you
so long

now you're gone

and i am fine

you raped me
my
soul
my
will
my
love

their gone

all gone

i'm empty
inside
except for
the pain

It's nice, but short. Shot and sweet. I like it. Welcome to the Forums. I'm sorry to hear that you've been in pain, but a lot of people understand that. It's different for everyone of course, but it seems like all you've got left is the hurting. It feels that way, I know, but it will go away. You are worth it, hun. Fight this, okay? There are people that care I know it. Fight this for them, if you can't fight for yourself yet.

darkfaery,

thanks a lot... it means a lot to me to now that you care.... thanks a lot for the advise too. and i promise you, as long as i have a single breath left in my body, i will continue fighting, for me, and for them. thanks.

thanks for appreciating the poem too. more coming up.

The second one......

A piece of white canvas
A solemn state of mind
But wait!
There are markings
On this blank white canvas
Tainted and unpure
It's not worthy anymore

Indentations and impressions
On this fake white canvas
Leftovers of another!
The remainders of another equation
No place to start anew
A perfectly good canvas wasted
Waiting to be refused

Hello! How are you? Well this is a very nice poem is very pretty and painful. People that surround many of us do not know what it feels like to be "us" that is why maybe they don't know that they're hurting you. Maybe they noticed but do not care, because nowdays its like: "You stand in this world by yourself no one else. Nobody cares, either suck it all up or you die alone laying on the floor and no one mourning". Love coming from anyone always tries to kill you as if testing you, to see if you can survive. I like your poem alot, keep up the good work.

Well Deadly Reaper,

that was really nice of you ^_^ and it really is true...... no one really cares about anyone else these days...... only if it benefits themselves.......
and love is hard to find these days *sigh*

thanks again

I am glad that you will keep fighting. You are a strong person. I look up to you.

your second one~ I know what it's like to feel like you're marked with badness, unworthy... that's how i relate to this poem...

Thank you again Darkfaery,
that was what i was feeling when i wrote it, thanks again.

Third......

I am Who I am

They think they know me
They call me Jo, and stuff like that
And they think they know me

They think I’m responsible
Friendly, helpful
Caring and kind
And they think they know me

But do they know the girl who cries?
The girl who steals and cheats
Do they know the girl inside?

Do they know I wanna die?
Do they know I’d love to scream and cry?
Do they know I plan to kill?
Do they know the girl inside?

The girl inside wants to scream
She wants to play, she wants to die
The girl inside is lost

Do you really know me?
Do you know the girl inside?
Do you know? Can you see?
If you said yes, you lied

Fourth.........

The Real Me

they don’t know the real me
the one kept under lock and key
and high security

the one that haves fun
the one that flirts and laughs
and drinks and barfs

the one that knows things
the one that turns men’s heads
and end up in their beds

cause if they knew
they will destroy me
and kill the real me

cause the real me
is a bad thing
and a positive sin

they don’t know the real me
the one kept under lock and key
and high security

Fifth......

My World

$100 armani shirts
leather shoes
soft suede shoes
red Ferrari
my world

curving bodies
pouty lips
mile long legs
cleavage
my world

star parties
galas
Oscars
emmys
my world

money
perfection
drugs
sex
my world

welcome