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skullblood2
The rush of intensity goes through my veins Strain isn't my game I have always felt it rushing down my spine and i think deep inside my mind what is really lurking in the shadows creeping along in the darkness wandering ever so willingly not knowing where to go IT will never stop following me till it gets done what it has been sent to do so i bid you farewell till i write again


Well im not sure if it's good or bad i want to see what you think respond if you want
skullblood2
Kinda a sort of thing that just popped in my head

Maybe theres a reason poeple die and live poeple can try to run.
But theres no one who can save or help them.
The reaper is there always there right by our side.
Following you watching your every move and step to find the perfect chance to strike.
How people dont notice this is something i will never know death is not the best thing in life wrather its a knife or a gun that causes it or its just the reaper
death cant be forgotten.........

The kid was walking down the street in the night wandering to his home.
And he was all alone.
Walking walking and walking then he stopped for somthing was sending him the chills.
He looked around saw nothing but the pitch black night so he went on walking but
his face was terified you wouldnt be able to tell why but Death must have passed by him he was walking then something he didnt stop nor move except his legs they quickly quickened pace going faster and faster then even though he was walking fast he couldnt out run the chills of cold fear running down his back
he stopped he saw a black figure cross the street and go behind a house he had goosebumps and the fear was building up inside of him with every second that passed then the figure went across again but this time it stopped for a moment and stared at the boys face then moved a little bit closer the figure was enjoying this it seemed every strange step closer the creature came the more frightened the kid became the creature seemed to be sucking the life out of the kid but the kid wasnt getting the life sucked out of him he was just getting weaker and weaker with fear crushing down on him he fell down fainted out of fear.
The kid woke up in the moning outside on the road he wondered if what happened was real or not but Death was watching reading the kids face as if was a book
Death laughed silently then became a memory in the kids mind.........


Thank you for your time Sincearly Me
skullblood2
It is gone so say farewell.
It is gone going back to hell.
It will always haunt me in my sleep.
It will always sit beside me in me mums jeep.
It will never go away.
It seems like it came here to stay.
It wont be staying any more.
It wont be following me underneath the floor.
It wont haunt me during day and night.
It wont say am i up for a fight.
It will never be here again.
well at least not till i sin again.
Scarred_Wings
QUOTE (skullblood2 @ Jun 28 2004, 01:41 AM)
Kinda a sort of thing that just popped in my head

Maybe theres a reason poeple die and live poeple can try to run.
But theres no one who can save or help them.
The reaper is there always there right by our side.
Following you watching your every move and step to find the perfect chance to strike.
How people dont notice this is something i will never know death is not the best thing in life wrather its a knife or a gun that causes it or its just the reaper
death cant be forgotten.........

The kid was walking down the street in the night wandering to his home.
And he was all alone.
Walking walking and walking then he stopped for somthing was sending him the chills.
He looked around saw nothing but the pitch black night so he went on walking but
his face was terified you wouldnt be able to tell why but Death must have passed by him he was walking then something he didnt stop nor move except his legs they quickly quickened pace going faster and faster then even though he was walking fast he couldnt out run the chills of cold fear running down his back
he stopped he saw a black figure cross the street and go behind a house he had goosebumps and the fear was building up inside of him with every second that passed then the figure went across again but this time it stopped for a moment and stared at the boys face then moved a little bit closer the figure was enjoying this it seemed every strange step closer the creature came the more frightened the kid became the creature seemed to be sucking the life out of the kid but the kid wasnt getting the life sucked out of him he was just getting weaker and weaker with fear crushing down on him he fell down fainted out of fear.
The kid woke up in the moning outside on the road he wondered if what happened was real or not but Death was watching reading the kids face as if was a book
Death laughed silently then became a memory in the kids mind.........


                      Thank you for your time Sincearly Me

death cannot be forgotten. . . try working on it more, you will get better. . . I like it but the visual structure is a little odd. . . Good luck!
sincerely
Deadly Reaper ^_^

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