Right...so this is my first attempt at poetry...-stare- o_o Please. don't. laugh.

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It doesn't have a title.

There was once a little girl
who ate shrimp
and turned pink
and no matter what she did
the pink would not decrease!

So she packed up her bags
and burned down her room
and stole her parents money
and bought some booze

She was living the happy life
having raw violent sex with random men
indeed, she was so happy
that at the end of the day
she could not remember what had happened =)

and so she thought her life was perfect,
for nobody pointed and laughed at her
for being pink

and then one day everything changed
her eyes popped out
and she turned blue
...
and everyone pointed and laughed.

the end.
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IT SUCKS DOESN'T IT =D

...I was thinking of Flamingos when I wrote it. :)

awe that doesnt suck
thats so cool
i love it

i won't.... *deep breath* get a grip, Liz... *bursts out laughing* :lol: HAHAHA!!! ok, sorry but i couldn't help myself ^_^

ok, you have the creativity, you have the silliness, but you don't affect it... its real good tho and i luv it... are you the lil pink girl??? :ph34r:

HAHHAHAHAHAHAHA omg jess that is so hilarious LoL its great tho i love it keep at it:P

aaaawwww... my lil baby sis is growing up... *tears* someone got a tissue?? *hugs sis real tight*

-gasp- Thanks! =D a lot! I shall try more rhyming next time...I really suck at rhyming...I'll look up a rhyme dictionary in the almighty Google. :devilbook:



--; Vereh funnay. I am NOT pink, sista. Watchu mean I don't affect it?...Am I not AFFECTIVE enough?!? -giggle- I don't have a clue.

I'm so glad you think that Pearl!! ^-^

-gets attacked with a hug from Liz- GET OFFA MEH. I do not show family affection in public places, damnit.

google... almighty... okay! a little too much booze tonight sis O.O;

yes you are AFFECTIVE... just give it more *switches to antonio banderas mode and claps his hands like a spaniard* GUSTO!!! :D

-makes military salute- YESSIR~

*cough cough* its M'AM... i aint no guy --; the pixie dust is getting to your head again, jess...

here goes the sister fight LoL

Pixie Dust...crack for kids!

-giggle...giggle-

lol i know that ;)

pixie dust... brain shuts down for about half your life and ou become much like my sister --;... oh boy...

=( awww...you say that like its a bad thing!

Pixie Dust gives you REAL wings. Not the crap Redbull gives ya. :D I do believe he --> <-- likes pixie dust.

lmao... looks like it from his meaningless expression... you have a wackier one ^_^ :D

Here goes 'notha one. Last one for the night!
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keep me waiting
for the tears to fall
the dry tears that come from tired eyes
eyes that no longer wish to cry
for things that seem to repeat
from you
your fucking self
using me
treating me like your own personal rag
your whines that make me wish to...
oh i dunno
punch your face maybe?
like that would make me feel better

the fucks of life that beat me down
like you
shreds slowly falling every time
into this pit deep inside of me
once more
another chunk ripped out
by your daily excuses
your pretend love

sometimes
the pit overflows
overcome with emotion
i spin
round and round
over and over
screaming my pain

the end.

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I won't say what I think of that one because...I can't keep putting myself down heh. Be critical. Be extremely critical. Please. =x

cant be critical its pretty good actually :)

are you lying? 'cause if you are...I dunno. o_o; BE TRUTHFUL. I kind of just wrote it down in a hurry.

heheheh... don't believe her??? i think so too jess so you better believe it... WE THINK YOU'RE GOOD!!!! :D

LoL im not lying really.. lol its pretty good..lots of strong emotions.. jus kinda throws me off a lil after the first stanza... u start off with one guy then on the second stanza its fucks in plural so its several people.. dun get it

it was pretty good for her second try tho...

pretty good ur right bout that :)

your poem was.. um... .aaaaaaa.. it was..... diffrent..
okay honesty... it was... strange... and WHY FLAMIGO's... taste good..but seeing them naked... ewwwwwwwww.. what if they try to.. never mmind.. going off again...
your very blunt... have raw wild sex with random men.. what about with random women.... it sound sexist.. I don't know... mmmmmmmm... it was good... It did keep me on my toes.. and I did have no clue what was going to happen next.. in all... to the artist eye.. perfect..
love you,
sondi

So, you are Silly Snake's lil sis, huh? Your whole family must be talented! Loved the poems! ^_^

hehe i agree
you are good

yaaay~!



flamingos?? I have no clue really. They were just in my head...gnawing on my brain cells...doing things!!!



hehe thank you!!



thankyouuuuuuuuuuu though i think i suck but thaaaaaaaaaaaaanks.

i hope you all were truthful on your comments. ^-^ Greatly appreciated!!

My dog had 8 puppies today~! Which means I am dead tired and won't write anything for tonight...how sad. =( I'll write two of 'em tommorow! ^_^

ill be counting it!!

you see... you ARE talented... *cracks whip* now lets start workin cause i wanna read some more!!!! ^_^

Oooh that turns me on, baby! heheheh...just kiddin'

YESS MA'AM =D

I bet I got it right that time. ;)

right on, soldier!!!

jess...write ur poems bitachL! lol :D

^_^ :lol: :D:);)

Here they are...:D

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Right. So, once upon a time
in a magic land far away
lived a beautiful
fly

yes, a fly

so
mr. fly went a buzzin'
on a gorgeous autumn day
and slammed
against a crusin' car

so he died.

the end!!!

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it was so nice to be flying out
the wind rushing past
blowing on the feathers of my skin
i felt so free
free to go anywhere
i ever, ever wanted
the cold nipped at my nose,
but that didn't bother me
no, not today
nothing could quench my thirst
for freedom
independance
things that seem so far away
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ta da! :meow: ^_^

LoL Jess they are so adorable and cruel you have a talent :D way to go !!!!

thanks!!!

*slaps you silly* that's what you get for thinking that you weren't good and for bieng my sistah :D

NOW DROP DOWN AND GIVE ME 20!!! :devilflip: LOL

WATCHU DOIN' UP IN MY GRILL DAWG DO YOU WANT ME TO BITCH SLAP YOU TO HELL? ....><; fine -does 20- -melts into a little puddle in the floor- :imu:

Judgement

Love, passion, hatred.
Thinking, not thinking.
These are the thing that fuel the inner
flame.
You're so quick to judge me.
What makes you think you know me?
Who are you to judge anyway, who
gave you the right?
So be sure not to push it.
because you can't mess with some-
one who feels like they have lost
everything but emotion.
No tolerance for stupidity.
So next time you judge,first know
what it is like to be judged.

This is for all of ya'll :devilflip: