My Life

I close my eyes
As time flys by
Everyone grows older
Except me,
I only grow colder
My skin grows pale
My hart becomes frail
But no one cares
Everyone just stares
and wondering why.
Why won't I die?
but no one dares to come to me and ask.
so for the reat of eternity
I shall wear my cold
sorrowfull mask

I love it...please post more :)
welcome to the forums :)

i really like ur poem... i hope to see more. you have talent, no doubt about that. come see my poems sometime... i think u'll enjoy them. and i really like ur screen name... thats something i've always wished we could do... is to cry tears of blood. :imu: keep posting... id like to see more
-morbidheart-

Thanx morbid. really appriciate it. i will keep posting. i might be able to get another up soon. Luv ya all. :wub:
~BloodFilledTears~

[COLOR=red] Whispered Voices

There are voices in the wind
They're calling out my name
They're driving me insane!
The voices are yours
The voices of the day i let you die
The day I told you the biggest lie.
I told you i loved you
And I always would
But there I stood
I stood and let you fall to your death
I heard you scream my name with your very last breath
But now I wish I hadn't
For now I can't drown you out
That's it!
I can't take it anymore!
guess what?
my bodies lying on the floor.

*me like!*

man whispered vioces and my life are awesome ^_^ . u definitly have talent. keep posting and ill come back to read more!! ^_^

Welcome to the Forums! ^_^

i really liked your first poem, it's beautiful...it's full of the pain of carrying the burden of eternity, a mysterious wonderful pain... i liked it...

Whispered Voices~ death and the misery of confusion. death. pain. i like it. it's morbidly intoxicating. alluring. i like your style and the way the lines flow together. i hope to see more of you!

HEy everyone. thanx for the posts. i'll hopefully be able to get sum more up later tonight, tomorrow at the latest. I'm workin on some new stuff and it should be up soon. thanx again for all your posts. i hope the forum will become a home away from home for me. seein as how mine pretty much sucks.
luv ya all
*~BloodFilledTears~*

ok. this was one of my first poems. i think it sucks but, that's just my opinion.

~Suicid~
I lie here on the floor
I wish to live no more
I wish not to live this pitty excuse of a life
I take into my hand a rusted knife
There is no time for a last bow
No time for a final vow
My life ends now


I know it sucks. but i will take any critisism(sp?) good or bad. thanx. Bye

k. thought i'd add a corney poem i wrote durin lunch at school.

~Lunch~
The noise rumbles
And then someone stumbles
Falling to the ground
It is here I am bound
But only for an hour
Am I in it's power
While i'm here
I'm as silent as a fox
And as still as the rocks
I'm waiting to go
I'm waiting to know
What lies beyond this horrid lunch

See. This is what school lunches do to u. that's y i don't eat lunch at school. i hid in the locker room. :imu:

k. this one dosen't really ryhm.

*~Eternal~*
It is a night of ethereal pain
a song of death
wolves vent their cry
The immortal one awakes
Curling, icy wisps of death
shrouds her pale form
An everlasting life
Her raven hair cascades
over transluctant ivory shoulders
Her full scarlet lips part slightly
and taste the life
streaming from the pale flesh beneath her
Now a night of new awarness
I thirst

Hope u like it ^_^

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*~Dear Diary~*
Dear Diary,
A darkness of infatuation.
A sick demented invitation.
To walk through my bloody banewoods.
Do you think that you could?
Can you handel all the screams?
This is unlike any of your dreams.
The massacer of blood.
Ripped apart bodies upon mud.
Demonic voices fill my head.
The awakening of all the dead
Clutching and grasping for air.
The demons are standing right there.
was this all a delusion?
No, this is reality, my final conclusion
Flash back of memoriesflash before my eyes.
Could this be the day I die?
Feels like a knife was bludgently stabbed in my hart.
Death is not the final outcome in my part.
The satanic furry of the night,
The black magic and sorcery has filled me with such fright.
For now the candels have all grown dim.
I'm signing off now,
Miss Violet Grimm

Wow. I'm surprised you have so many poems.

i really liked suicide. morbid but pretty in death, so long waited for, yearned for... Mm.

i liked Lunch as well. i hang out in the library during lunch, just read and stuff, it's fun actually. i hate ridiculous judgemental people, they prey on the weak, the alone.

Poems do not have to rhyme, and i loved "Eternal" it flowed beautifully, it had a distinct rhythm. it was lovely, a hunger deep inside, wild untamed... gorgeous.

"Dear Diary" was beautiful. dark morbid, sick and haunting. i loved it. it was a twisted design, locked inside the darkness of your own mind. masterful...

great poems...

hey everyone. thanz for all the posts. i didn't know everyone thought so highley of my poems. most ppl say they suck. srry i haven't been able to post lately. been really busy wit family issues. i'll try and get one up either tonight or tomorrow. Thanx again for the reviews. luv ya all.

BloodFilledTears

*smiles* And i was gonna go and sleep off my pounding headache. I love Dear Diary and Lunch. If I don't eat at lunch time over the summer, my stomach goes nuts. Maybe I'm weird thoug, and im making an ass of myself......wait a sec...have i ever cared? Nope not that I can remember. Well hopefully I'll remember to reply and not be one of those freakish once in a life time, blabbed on your thread people, cause ive done that before but i dont think the person told me so i just kept talking and talking and she ended up hating my guts. O well...
~Shay~ :imu:

very good, i liked the life one.

suicide and dear dairy were great poems. there all great but these two stand out the most to me at least.

hey everyone. thanx for the posts. preciate it. i'll try and get a new one up soon. i'm wrokin on a bunch of stuff right now and i haven't really had time to get on here
and post anythin. i'll get 1 up soon. thanx again 4 the reviews.
*~BloodFilledTears~*

[COLOR=red] HEy everyone. Happy 4th. hope u all ahve a good one. here is one of my more lame poems.

'only a friends kiss'
A tear roll off my cheek
as u cut me with your knife.
Why did u have to take my life?
What did i do to deserve this?
Was it because of the Kiss?
Were u that jealous of me bein around him?
So jealouse u would commit this deadly sin?
I've told u over and over!
He's only a friend!
But i guess that dosen't matter to u in the end.
So go aheadand kill me.
But you'll regret it eventually.
For i honestly did love you.
But just know this.
It was nothing more then a friends kiss...

I know I know I know, it sucks. But i'm tryin
*~BloodFilleTears~*

K. here's another.

'Fallen'
The night falls as if Slain by the sun,
Lost are we.
The salvation for wich u pray flares once,
then dies, swept away by your madness.
All hope must surely perish.
Your hart beats no more.
How could you do this?
Lost souls surround us, crying, we are fallen.

Kinda short, but oh well...

BloodFilledTears

k. this is probably the last one i'm gunna post for a while.

'Now Alone'
How do i begin to explain
how i feel inside.
The trouble and pain
I've caused in your mind.
The amount of times you tried.
I through it back in again in lies.
Now alone again in my thoughts.
I sit and write of what another days brought.
The thoughts of you inside my head.
My broken body upon the bed.
All this talk of love.
These "heavenly words of God above".
They just float by, drowned in sorrow.
another hart and soul i'd like to borrow.
I see your face and smile to myself.
Thiss happiness you brought me,
I could never tell.
Through my foolishness you are fading away.
And I'm alone without a friend to try another day.
In my hart, i think i love you.
But with this pain that punds,
i know these word to be untrue.
I leave your side.
Bottle this thought to hide.
And face what tomorrow holds.

tell me what u think.
*~BloodFilledTears~*

Beautiful, I'm impressed with this. You write well, but this I believe is my favorite so far. *laughs*It isn't your fault but some how this poem only adds to my misery, and because of my pain I can't say much else, but it is beautiful, and I hope the next time I come back I will be able to actually think more clearly and post better. SOrry.
Hey, and drop back by my thread I was able to reply a little more clearly yesterday. [again i am truly sorry]Still i felt you should know it was beautiful to me.
Your Friend

hey ppl. srry i haven't posted lately. been busy. i'm at a friends house at the moment and i forgot all my poems at home. i'll post when i get home tomorrow if i can. thanx for the comment on my poem. i did stop by your thread once but i didn't get a chance to post anything. my comp chrashed. i'll talk to you guys later. Byez

*~BloodFilledTears~*

PS-HELP ME! my friend is annoying the hell out of me..... she wont quit talking abbout annoying things like care bears. PLEASE HELP! :help:

I am soooo srry i haven't been on in over a month. I started school awhile back and my teachers are really getting to me. i think most of them are probably afraid of my b/c of the first impressions i made. :: Smiles :: But anyway. Here's one of the poems i finshed while i was away from here.

'Rain'
Have you ever wondered 'what is the rain?'
I can tell you.
They're tears,
Tears of happiness,
Tears of pain.
They come from the angels
with broken wings.
They come frome the angel
with the heavenly voice that always sings.
The angels watch
as their loved ones go on.
Going to bed with the moon,
and rising with the dawn.
They watch as new life begins to crawl.
And as they watch, Their tears gather in the clouds.
Waiting to fall.


Hope u like it :wub:
*~BloodFilledTears~*