Umm well actually this thing im going to write out wasnt created by me but.....i found it was really nice umm yeah here it goes




I asked you if you Liked me, you said No. i asked you if i was Pretty, You said No. i asked you if i was in your Heart you said No, i asked you if you would Cry if i Walked away, you said No. So i Walked away..you grabbed my arm and said...i dont Like you i Love you ...your not Pretty your Beautiful..your not in my Heart, you are my Heart...and i wouldnt Cry if you walked away i would Die.....

My Faital Plunder
Set me Aside To Wonder
I Have Done a Good Share Of Thinking
Yet My Clock Is Still Ticking
Left With Thoughts Sublimed
And My Near Ending Time

awww hey it's understandable *pats your shoulder* a person who kicks a fan-club founder could never write something like this
*cough* okay i'm sorry that was mean hehe
i'd let ash welcome you first but she won't be home for a short while, so i'll play the welcoming committee before someone else does
(that's supposed to be a waving-hi emoticon, as much as it looks like it's calling you a tosser :P)

I love the first one...
It pains me to read it after recent events but I love it nonetheless.

Welcome to the Forums!

i liked the first one a lot it was beautiful, and happy, yet somehow it seemed a little sad, like zero self-confidence and self-hatred and uncertainty... but it was lovely and majestic and sweet. *huggles*

i really like your signature as well ~*D.I.E.S.*~ (does it ever stop) very nice. i hope you enjoy the forums and stick around, i'd like to see more of your works.

Yeah i know Ash wont be one for awhile....fuck that sucks so Grrrraaa fucking much....but yeah thats for welcoming me...

Thankz very much and sorry about whatever that has occured in your recent events

Yeah the first one is pretty good
And im Glade you like my Signature!
Also Thank you for welcomeing me to the forms! :devilnaughty:

i know, it sucks :(
her fan club is going to be so lonely :(
so we have to write heaps and heaps of wonderful little poems to make her smile her sexy ass of when she gets a chance to read them :D

hey welcome to the forum! :)

i loved that first one it's sweet yet bitter.. very good..
*ive read that before just dont know where*

well hope you enjoy the forum
check out my thread and tell me what you think bout my writings

Hell Yeah!
Gotta continue on the fan club For Ash!!! ^_^

Thankz for the welcome!

Lolz yeah your probobly have heard it...my friend sent it to me in a forwording message on yahoo lolz

and yeah ill check out your work!

hey jus wanted to say keep up the good work and i love ur piercing its sexy :P

Hahah THank you!! :devilnaughty:

any new poems hun?

welcome sweetheart anytime
any new poetry?? ^_^

New poems umm....Ill think of some...or dig my writing book in a few and post some...but at the mean time not really to busy too

well ok :( hehe dont worry or rush :)




p.s. still loving that piercing LoL

This Smile

This Smile Is My Charm
This Smile Is The Bomb
This Smile Is My Descuise
This Smile Could Make You Cry
This Smile Cant Be Beat
This Smile Is Your Defeat
This Smile Holds My Tears
This Smile Holds My Fears
This Smile Hides My Lies
This Smile You Cant Deni

By Damien Abernathy

aren't smiles grand :D
though honestly, i'd rather see ash's than yours hehe

one thing that might be worth doing since you're new here, is to enter uber-spammer mode until you get to 100 posts. then you can use the PM features and view profiles and stuff :)


*needs to write a poem about smiling too sometime*

nice poem i like it:)

Yeah as would i...
and since im new do you think i would know how to put it into uber-spammer mode

THANK YOU! :devilnaughty:

Hey Damien. Your writings are absolutely beautiful. I love you so much. I don't know when the next time I will be online, but I shall try to do whatever I can to keep reading. I appreciate everything you ave ever said to me as it is like a song to my heart. I hope to keep in touch with you and I want you to know that I will always love you no matter what. Your the best thing that could have ever happened to me and I mean that from the bottom of my heart. Keep doing whatever you can to keep youself happy and dont worry about me. I always seem to find a way out of bad situations. I love you Damien and ur writings are beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you Ash
i love you too! like i said your My Blessing! and youll aways be apart of me no matter what happens
and how could you say not worry about you! I CANT HELP THAT! lolz it just comes naturally :devilnaughty:

*allows the great lack of "i love you too andreas!!!"s to pass since this is damien's thread* hehe


uber-spammer mode is simple. go to the Off Topic section. that's it hahah
the Couch Room is a great way to spam without being warned about it, but just throw heaps of comments here and there. last few days i've been averaging about 20-25 posts a day i think because i got into 'a few' discussions here and there hehe
another good way to meet people and find their threads is the Yahoo Chatroom. there's a thread for that in Off Topic i think.
and, of course, you could always read poetry threads of others and comment. if you say something as obvious as "drop by my thread sometime :)" then they'll probably drop by sometime.
you're pretty close to 100 anyway though so just keep doing whatever you're doing, including using s in pippa's tread haha

HAhaha Yeah that Banana Thing is funny it cracked me up

but you use it in such an amature way. read the poem at the top of this link to see how the bananahump was destined to be used ;)
http://forum.vampires.com/index.php?showtopic=14895&st=203

Lmao Man thats FUNNY! :lol:

Your poems are very good my love, you think very much of yourself thats good. I welcome you to come my thread anytime to pick the wrongs and rights.

Thanks! :devilnaughty:

okay umm this is like the beginning of the song i wrote about a girl named pearl i couldnt find the song i wrote on paper so lolz i could only remember a little bit sorry!


Pearly pearly
she spins me
like a hurlywhirl
From side to side
she rocks me like a lulaby

yeah its short cause i dont remember the next lines lolz sorry i tried to find it but bleh i could sorry Pearl!

ah, i'm all too familiar with losing poems and songs. i had this poem (or i thought it was a poem) i wrote with my vein violinist and i could not find it for the life of me. then i thought i found it, but just a week or so ago i found the true source of my violinist which was in a story i had written. so you never know when you'll run into the thing again

your song sounds er.. interesting hehe
what kind of song was it? like, tune-wise. any music to it or just voice? i've only ever managed to make one of my poems into a full-fledged song (music & voice) but in terms of length, it's like, what you have there, times about.... 10 or more heheh

good luck finding or remembering the rest of it :)

Naw no music just Voice i guess you could call it rap....ive tried to put a beat to it but...nothing goes good with it and umm yeah thanks Andreas!

lovely... it puts so much meaning into something viewed as so small and symbolizes looking past the surface-value of things... very nice *huggles*

as you saw in my "Ain't got no clue" poem, i'm a master of rap ;) hahaha well, i'm probably more hip-hop when i write that kinda stuff rather than rap.


you're welcome *kicks you just so you don't get too happy with him* :D

yeah i see your a rapper lolz

*kicks you back* dont worry i could never be to happy :devilflip:

hehe that was cute its k :)

Lolz thank you!:ph34r: :devilnaughty:

welcome sweetheart any time :) ^_^

Hahah alright B) you rule pearl! :devilnaughty:

so do you! :)

Thankz Pearl! :devilnaughty:

WElcome Damien! :meow:

Hey Pearl im Packin It in For the Night!
Sweet Dreams

P.S....Go check out my lighter on the pics thing its pretty sweet! :devilnaughty:

wow, that is good...I like it-alot...yup.. welcome to the forum...

Yeah its really good!

Thank you for the welcome! :devilnaughty:

Umm Yeah i just wrote this Poem As i Went Along If you Like It Cool If you Dont well Then you Dont



For my eyes Deseve me
Glazed Over And Blind
Could Only Touch And Feel
Could Never See If You
Were Actually Real
When My Eyes Were Back
I Saw Nothing But Pitch Black
Left With Nothing And
So Utterly Alone
For I Feel Now Disowned

By Damien Abernathy

Why are you people looking at the poerty but not replying does it suck that much

aww *pats damien and kicks him* you're not disowned, you're still informally a member of ash's fan club and get all the benefits that come with that :D

by the way, if you do a lil calculation test on a lot of the poems threads, you'll notice that on average you'll get a comment or a reply every 4-6 views. that's the same with my thread, narti's thread, amadeo's thread and so on. personally, sometimes i load a thread to read it, but i get caught up with other stuff so i never get to. also, when you refresh your thread it counts as a hit.
so yeah, if you want people to comment more, start throwing referrals and links between your photo and poem gallery like i do *points to his sig* don't know if it's working, but it makes it easier for people to find :D