Crazyman
May 16 2004, 07:31 PM
:ph34r: Blood is dripping from my veins coming close to driving me insane. Crying like a little child even though the pain is mild. Water falling from the sky feels as though I am gonna die. No fear lies in me from this grave tragedy. Living though not much reaching down my cut I touch. No more pain only pleasure as I rise to recieve my treasure. Pale and dead one thought runs through my head its blood in a massive flood. Only my thirst to quench remains as I stand in the rain. Grabbing the nearest rat I can find I put its neck in a bind. My teeth enter its warm neck another victim I condemn to death. Theres not enough in this to satify so I gouge open lucifers eyes. Now his blood is running in my veins my mind races of many pains. Driving me over the edge he trys to throw me off the ledge. Climbing up the hill my anger is worse than an adrenalin pill. Shocks off strength surround my mind sending the demon himself over the pain in my mind. Undeniable torture he will recieve for attempting to use me to conceive his evil. :devilbook:
The Crazyman.
Crazyman
May 16 2004, 07:47 PM
The Pendulum
The pain still rising its burning inside. It drives me still to run and hide. There is no time no harmonic ryhm. All stands still. The swinging pendulum draws ever closer. At the drop of a pin the blood hits the wall giving me no place to fall. Slipping into obvious pain as I kneel outside in the rain. No probable cause for what I have done still kneeling holding a gun. The swinging pendulum draws ever closer. Now its time the gates have shut I feel like I was stabbed in the gut. Rising to me my feet there is a smell of rotten meat. The swinging pendulum draws ever closer. This my life a burning fuel of desire roasting my heart on a flickering camp fire. As I lie still the pendulum swings one last time bringing an end to that harmonious chime whick is my life. All that surrounds me is dark and death making it hard to catch my breath. I see you now there you are doesnt seem to be that far. The light surrounded by darkness still shines bright. Now there is no more need to fight. I killed you once I will do it again as soon as I can make a bargain. He pulled down surrounded in flames and ash. I think this action was a little to rash.
The Crazyman.
Crazyman
May 16 2004, 07:56 PM
My Death
Pain is fallin from the sky feels as though I am gonna die. A bloody knife lies aside causing pain I cannot hide. My life is done my soul and physical being have become as one. Painful bliss is hard to ignore as I lie staring out my door. Feeling faded just as well as I enter the gates of hell. An endless rift and an undeniable gift. Flames surround my place of rest the devil himself riping my heart from my chest. Now I am his, an eternal slave my body lieing at its grave. Gone in a place a far off land just cause you didnt take my hand.
The Crazyman :vampire:
ThroughGlassWithNoShards
May 16 2004, 08:18 PM
It was very good, and descriptive. Made me shiver. But you need to keep all your work in one thread. An admin will come and merge them soon.
Crazyman
May 16 2004, 08:47 PM
Thaks I have many other works of art that will open your eyes and show you the many deranged thoughts and problems this world has oh by the way what the crap is a admin and how do I tie all my works into one strand.
The Crazyman :lol:
Mephistophicles
May 16 2004, 09:54 PM
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