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Hmm... well. im new here, i just joined actually, but any way. i write poetry all the time, because i dont ever have anything else to do, so let me introduce you to some of my creations!:

This one isn't as much of a rhyming poem, as a story poem. very emo:
misery
a tear falls down a silent face. That face belongs to a girl lost inside an oblivious love. She is devoted to the one person who does not know the love that could be given.
The crying eyes of this girl have seen the most beauty in someone that you would least expect to find in her head.
The miles of distance can never keep her heart from making sure she is the last thing she ever sees.

Another story like poem:
untitled
a lost love. a tear in the eye of the hopeless. the emo couple walks by. they are so happy. the one lonely girl sitting on the curb looks down the street. a girl with silent brown eyes and a colorful look about her walks toward the lonely girl sitting on the curb. she sits down.
"your beautiful," the lonely girl on the curb says, looking down at her feet. She looks up after a few moments of silence. A tear drops down her face.
"if only you were real."
The one thing that means the most is the first thing to get taken away.
(-that is dedicated to ALEX!! I LOVE U!)

umm.. now for a real poem. umm here we go:
bleeding
I let you laugh at me,
I let you be mean,
So I get pisses,
and take a knife to my wrists,
Bleeding....
I think about the rich,
This feeling makes me itch,
I take a saftey pin,
and i begin,
Bleeding...
People think carving is sick,
But it starts wiht just one prick,
It might not be deep,
but let the blood seep,
Bleeding...
Pain can feel good,
Just like it sometimes should,
So i end with one more rhyme,
i cut for one more time,
Bleeding...

Hmm... let me see if i can find another....
umm... here's one that i wrote like...... a month ago:
Insanity Wonderland
I have a feeling its at its end,
hopefully i wont fall back in agian,
Depression's the word,
its hell on earth,
when you think about it though,
there are people with worse.
sometimes you think,
that you're in for shit,
but later you discover,
that it's not worth it.
when you help someone else,
they might help you.
That is what, all people should do.
Forget the pills,
Forget the drugs,
you dont need them,
all you need is love.


okay that one sucks, but w/e. My last one for 2day is a song. here we go:
(jenny i hate you)
I cut my wrists to the sound of your empty heart beat.
I bleed my self to death and watch you laugh.
I see despise in your eyes, my blood is gone.
I see two slits in your wrists, you're the one who's all alone!

you ruined my life,

i'll ruin your life,

i'll cut with this knife,

i'll stab with that knife.

I'll stab you with no guilt, the blad is too dull.
I penetratre your skin, no blood starts to fall.
You rise above me screaming how I did you wrong.
I rise, you stop, I'll show you, who's been right here all along!

you ruined my life,

i'll ruin your life,

i'll cut with this knife,

i'll stab with that knife.

In your eyes, I see despise...
In my eyes, you see no mercy...
In your scream, a plea for help...
In my scream, you will hear me...
I was right.
And you were wrong.
Its been like this,
All along.
So no you see.
How this will end.
With one last chance.
i'll do you in.

you ruined my life,

i'll ruin your life,

i'll cut with this knife,

i'll stab with that knife.
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darkfaery
i love "misery" it's beautiful... so obviously there's a girl that's very sad... but no one knows it... and she's in love... and the person who is loved by her doesn't know it... it's portrayed beautifully i love it
"untitled" is good as well...

i really enjoyed "bleeding" because i know how this feels... pain is pleasure... pain and cutting help to deal with inner pain. i like how you presented that one... surreal and beautiful...

don't say that your work sucks... it seems to me that you are a beautiful artist with words... i like your work a lot, it is heavy with emotion... Good job and Welcome to the forums!

a fan,
~*heart*~ Rachel
Astarael
Words so sweet yet full of sorrow. You are a wonderful writer and i adore all that you have posted so far and highly encourage you to write more so that you may gift other's with your talent heart.gif
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