I lay, in the light of the moon,
In the cemetary, late one winter,
I was hungry, for some sweet flesh,
to eat, to satisfy my undying hunger,
for I am zombiedoom, ruler of the night,
I saw a young virgin,
I ate her.

Thank you.

You wankers, that was my best work yet.

no need to be impolite... mabye they are just lost for words, some of the most beautiful writing is short and directly to the point... if you chose to read between the lines a little. be patient... and keep bringing forth your tales...

That was indeed a good poem, keep it up and those who have not already will take heed

ah, i'm so deprived i'd eat anything :lol:
this i can't be offended by your "you wankers" comment :rolleyes:

keep bringing it and eventually people will find it.
i've posted some of my favorite poems in my thread and even though i did get comments on them, it would always have been better if there had been more.
anyway, things will come, don't worry :)

Thank you for the comments my friends. I am new to poetry, but not new to eating virgins.

on the contrary, i'm quite familiar with poetry, but never had he chance to eat a virgin :ph34r:
keep writing and me = keep reading :)

Total brilliance, I masturbated heavily to it.

Do you have pictures?