Lestattheblackhearted
May 10 2004, 05:18 AM
okay....i don't know if this idea will catch on but *meh* at least I tried! lol!
for all you guys n gals who dont know what a sonnet is, it has 14 lines...is usually about 'nice' things (e.g. love, friendship, etc) and usually written for somebody else....
okay this is copied from my thread...it's for all my best friends :)
-untitled sonnet-
Thunder rode in from the midnight ocean
On her devil nightshade war-horse
Feeling no love, feeling no remorse,
Destroying all signs of emotion
In me. After all the commotion,
After the evil took its' course,
You held me close, you used no force,
Just listened to me, no other notion,
Which i'm eternally grateful for.
I didn't think there was anything you could do,
Yet you couldn't have done more,
And I know this is completely true.
So now I show my appreciation for your
Unselfish kindness, and thank you.
*TIM*xx
Lestattheblackhearted
May 10 2004, 05:19 AM
whoops it's meant to say 'post' you sonnets here not 'ppst'....hahahaha! shit nothing i can do now! lol! :lol:
slug_slug
May 10 2004, 05:45 AM
*-_Untitled Sonnet by KT_-*
Silent as the night
In moonlit alleys,
Stalking the weak,
Destroying the young.
Hunting with stealth,
Til the water breaks.
Dancing alone,
Feeding at dawn.
The scent in the pool
Brings closer the predator.
Closer the death,
That soon will come.
Teeth white and glistening,
Great sea of red.
I'm not titling it, because I know what it's about, but I want it to be about something different for everyone
Katesxxx
Lestattheblackhearted
May 13 2004, 06:50 AM
heh.....maybe this wasnt the best idea! :lol:
flowertear
May 13 2004, 01:53 PM
tim! how r u?
this is weird ive only really spoken to you pissed!
did thea say anything about me as the cause of my little poem!
shit she's gonna read this isn't she- never mind!
i like your poem by the way, but i really like the blood on the flowers.
luv sophie