-You-
I think of you,
And I cry.
I watch you,
And I die.

You asked me to forget,
As you walked out of my life.
Behold; my crimson regret,
I choose the knife.

The blood flows,
Drips down my arm.
My life goes,
Now free from harm.

I see you with my lidless eyes,
When you look down at my grave.
I have met my demise,
I am the devil's slave.

I watch as you grow old,
Wishing I had not committed sin.
My body is forever cold,
It's over...you win.

-Memory:CORRUPTED-
I am the girl you interrupted,
In a faith which you corrupted.

I am the bleeding in your heart,
A precious dream you tore apart.

I am the absence in your bed,
A vacant voice within your head.

I am the ghost in the machine,
An empty flicker on the screen.

I am the destroyer of your mind,
Reflecting filth you left behind.

Now from the heart you set on fire,
comes the death of your desire.

You are the void within my soul;
You were the one who made me whole.

- Fallen -
In this silence
my world descends
with broken wings...

I am falling...

The raven holds no mercy.
I have no soul to sell.
I drown in my desire.
I burn within my Hell.

falling...

Nothing here to take.
Nothing left to give.
Dreaming I could die.
Wishing I could live.

Fallen.

That was morbidly beautiful.. :ph34r: I'd love to see something longer ^_^
There is much feeling, it pulls you in deep.




These were amazing lines..

Thanks deathkitten!!! here's one!!!

- Forever Right Beside You -
The stars are moving slowly as the months begin to pass,
The fireflies glow softly as I lay here in the grass.

I go to bed at night and all I dream about is you,
I wake up in the morning and I wish that dreams were true.

To hold you is to hold the other half of my own soul,
The two of us will make it but together we were whole.

The longing deep inside of me is hard but I survive,
Forever you have all of me as long as you're alive.

The distance may be far but we are never torn apart,
Because, my love, you're always right beside me, in my heart.

- REDUCE ME -
Damned within existance,
Silence worse than screams.
I'm out of resistance,
Raped* of all my dreams.

Jumping into fire,
Petrify my heart.
Frozen from desire,
Rip my life apart.

Eden's burned to ashes,
Sun choked by the rain.
Light and darkness clashes,
Nothing left but pain.

*In this instance the word raped means stolen; it's second definition if you look it up.

- Save Me -
Drain me of these memories
and bleed me of this pain.
Cry for all the times i've hurt
and shield me from the rain.
Take away the cloudy skies
and turn the grey to blue.
Rid me of the suffering
caused by my love for you.

- Suicide Requiem -

I am torn from the sky,
I am raped* of my mind.
I am stripped of my soul,
with a dream left behind.

I am broken to shards,
I am grinded to dust.
I am thrown all away,
like a whore used for lust.

I am robbed of my faith,
I am down from the high.
I am drained of my blood,
Now I just wait to die.

*Again, it means robbed/stolen...

Forever Right Beside You was enchanting. So beautiful. You have a perfect rhyme scheam and everything fits together like puzzle pieces.

Thanks! Granted poems that don't rhyme are good, I feel like I HAVE to make it rhyme for it to work out in my head you know?

This was BreathTaking...

Yeah, I know what you mean
And yours flow with such persicsion.

Thanks I actually read Suicide Requiem in English class because we had to write poems, and I also read Fallen and I got an A lol so I figured they weren't that bad but I also got a few looks from some friends lol, but I wrote those when my mom was dying in the hospital, and a few from when I was dying in the hospital...kinda wanting to die, but I wasn't in there from self inflicted wounds or anything...

Awwwwww. that is so sad :( I supose that that would be the ultimate in inspiration though eh? I will not be rude and ask

But I would like to leave you with my blessings

- SOUL FUSION -

For you I was lying, crying, dying, in the light,
For you I am needing, breathing, bleeding, through the night.
I am slowly bleeding, bleeding, bleeding, in your soul,
We are quickly breathing, breathing, breathing, we are whole.

...Not so sure I like this one of mine...but aw well...

Short but sweet :D

thanks death kitten...but yeah it kinda was the inspiration, but there were plenty more inspirations along the way. Life is a long journey, no one can ever say what it holds, all I know is I'm alive right now, and so are most of my loved ones. That's what counts.

- Forever -

Forever apart,
And forever combined.
From you I depart,
Yet we're still intertwined.

Forever as mine,
And forever I love.
For you I still shine,
Like the stars up above.

Forever together,
Is ever so true.
Although you say 'never',
I'm always with you.

Too true, too true.

Wisdom eminates from your words deary

thanks. I think that sometimes when you ahve to grow up too soon you wind up kinda like me...I know a few of my friends like that, and my mom always tells me she is sorry that I had to grow up so soon, and didn't have time enough to be a kid. I didn't have a choice, and sometimes I see my mom crying at night, but I can never let her know I know or she will break down even more right? Thanks for all the compliments deathkitten, you're really nice.

No problem !! Your work fascinates me and you are truely a wonderful person to be around.

Thanks!!! Who knows, maybe I'll post more:P:P:P

Wonderful poetry dear.. you have the gift.. your pieces seem to have a natural flow to them.. I very much enjoyed them and look forward to future works... my favorite lines so far were

I am not sure why these lines struck me but none-the-less... good work

~dark prince~

Hello again deary, and yes, i think you should deffinitly post more. I will always be here to read them

*sits waiting for more*