I watched a Butterfly today,
she seemed to know the right way
she would flutter here and flutter there
and then she landed on my chair
the sunlight glistened off her beautiful wings
and I swear I heard her begin to sing
coldness in my heart began to melt
and a warmness replaced it, which I have never felt
she fluttered high
I thought if I lost her I just might die
then I heard a voice, crystal clear
you shall never loose me; I will always be near
so I have planted a butterfly garden you see,
for a butterfly must always be free
and I watch my butterfly every day,
i hope we never part awayway

for jade

-Aidan

As cheesy this poem is, friend, it has some kind of childhood innocence to it that I find..Disturbingly amusing. Your in love, good for you. Good work ;)

for u

yeah i know its really cheesy
i wrote when i first met her
i was 12


but here is another one

You move with limbs of snake,
Mind of ice, heart of coal,
Hurl hooks from your tongue;
You burn me with your eyes;

You destroy what bores you,
And leave a cloying perfume--
A scent of death in the air--
Still I crouch at your feet.

*Claps* Very good, it certainly has quite a bit of...I don't know what :D V. Nice work. I look forward to seeing more.

First One-yes, cheesy, but still...good
Second-Not cheesy, better

You're in love...Cherish it, never lose it, never let her leave your sight without telling her....

Never saying what you feel is the worst possible thing to do.

...Mmmmmhmm...Well, how very...inciteful :huh:

jade of u i have fallen in love
fallen angel from above
i remember when i first met u
u were 12
on those green eyes
i could forever dwell
and when we were 14
i first held ur hand
i remember the week we both tried to kill ourselves
u just said -i understand-
i love that when i wake up
ur by my side
i realize life withuot u would be suicide
ur ivory white skin
gives u the appearance that ur free of sin
i love when u talk wothout saying a word
nothing heard
i love ur piercing eyes that sunk into my soul
i love ur body that makes me loose control
devilish siren u lure me as u sing
angel that has fallen
because of broken wings

-aidan

to jade

:( oh aidan i knew u were gonna do this
its okay
i understand but just try and understand
im just ur friend and im sorry if i gave u any hopes
ok sweeety
please dont be upset
or try to do anything stupid

Aidan are you the same Aidan from chat? by the way nicely written poem, its one of the few endearing poems I have seen here. most tend to be a bit more on the bitter or sad side. not that those are bad tho.

im really sorry to inform that aidan died
he killed himlself a week ago
i dont know y he did it
i havent talked to his friends


-jade

can someone close this thread please

why did he do it ?

I JUST READ THE NOTE
he did it 4 me
he left a poem
i quote it on my signature
i feel so guilty :(

Dont feel guilty you didnt make him do it he did it him self were you too close ?

we were good friends , but he pushed too hard
he always wanted more
he bought an engagemnt ring
i was so freaked
i just dont know what to say to hid parents
they re really pissed at me